A/N: this was gonna be a four chapter story but i couldn't come up with enough for a full chapter so i just added what i did have to the begining of this one. thanks to those who've read and reviewed this story.

Max woke up the next morning, curled up next to Zack. Original Cindy walked into the room. She smiled slightly. She didn't need to ask what happened last night because the clothes on the floor pretty much told her what happened. "You two want coffee?" Cindy asked.

Max looked at her. "Umm...sure. We'll be right out." Max said. Cindy nodded, turned and left the room. Max gently nudged Zack. "Wake up." Max said.

Zack opened his eyes and looked at Max. "What?" Zack asked still sleepy.

"Cindy's got coffee. Now get up." Max said climbing out of bed and through on some clean clothes.

Zack rubbed his eyes, climbed out of bed and put his clothes back on. The two walked out into the living room. Cindy was already sitting on the couch. Zack walked over and sat down in the chair while Max poured them each a cup of coffee then walked over, handed Zack his coffee and sat down on the couch next to Cindy. Max turned to Cindy. "So you think we can convince Normal to give Zack his job back?" Max asked her.

"I don't know but we can try." Cindy replied.

Six months later

Max was at work and Zack as at the apartment on his cell phone. "Hi. Krit?" Zack said.

"Oh hi Zack. What's up? Is something wrong?" Krit asked.

"No not this time. I sort of had this idea."

"Oh really. So what's this idea of yours?" Krit asked.

"I was thinking about bringing Max to see you guys."

"Oh Syl'll love that."

"Yeah but you can't tell her."

"Oh don't worry I won't tell her." Krit said.

"Tell me what?" Syl asked walking into the room.

Krit looked at her. "Oh nothing."

"Yeah ok but you know I'll get it out of you eventually." Syl said kissing Krit on the cheek then left the room again.

"So when where you going to come?" Krit asked Zack.

"Well I have another surprise planned for Max tonight but we'll leave tomorrow."

"Ok."

"Oh and just incase something should happen call this number." Zack said then gave Krit, Max's number.

"Ok great. Well we'll see you guys in a few days."

"Yeah." Zack said then hung up the phone.

Zack grabbed his jacket and headed out the door for Jam Pony. He walked in and was glad to see that Max wasn't around. He walked up to Normal, who was behind his counter. Normal looked up at Zack. "You know you didn't have to come in today." Normal said.

"Yeah I know I just wanted to make sure it was still ok that Max and I take a few days off." Zack said.

"Yes I already told you it was."

Zack nodded and went to find Cindy. Cindy looked up at Zack when he walked over. "Oh hi Zack." Cindy said.

"Hi. I just wanted to make sure we're still set for tonight." Zack said.

"Yes. I'll make sure Max gets there don't worry." Cindy said. "Now go before she gets back."

That night, Cindy brought Max back to the apartment and led her up to the roof. "Cindy why are going up to the roof?" Max asked.

"You'll see now just close your eyes." Cindy said.

Max sighed but did as she was told. Cindy opened the door to the roof and gave Max a little push. She closed the door once Max was on the roof.

Zack took Max's hand and let her to a table set for two. Cindy'd actually helped Zack with the dinner seeing as most X5's can't cook. "Alright you can open your eyes now Max." Zack said.

Max opened her eyes and couldn't help but smile. It was beautiful, the table was set and there was a single candle lit in the middle, and the entire roof was lit up with small Christmas lights. Max looked at Zack. "When did you do all this?" Max asked.

"Today while you were at work."

"Well it's beautiful Zack."

Zack just smiled at her which was rare but he found himself doing it a lot more lately. He pulled out a chair for her. Max sat down and the two ate dinner.

After they finished eating, Zack got down on one knee. "Max, I love you, you know that. I'd do anything to make you happy." Zack said. He pulled out a little black box and opened it. "Max, will you marry me?"

Max smiled. "Yes I'll marry you Zack."

Zack slid the ring on her finger. He blew out the candle then they went back downstairs and made love.

Max was in the bathroom of Jam Pony. She'd felt different for the last few weeks, even before Zack had asked her to marry him. She'd suspected for a while that she could be pregnant but wasn't sure. She looked at the test and smiled. I am pregnant now all I have to do is tell Zack. Max thought. She threw the test in the garbage and walked out of the bathroom. Max walked over to her locker.

Cindy saw Max leave the bathroom and walked over to her. "So what did it say?" Cindy asked. Max had told her earlier that she thought she might be pregnant and Cindy just wanted to know if she was or not.

Max looked over at her and nodded. "Yeah I'm pregnant." Max said.

Zack walked in a few hours later. "Come on Max we gotta go." Zack said as he walked up to her.

"But I have work, Zack. So do you." Max said.

"No we don't. I cleared it with Normal."

"Uh ok. Where are we going?" Max asked as she started to follow Zack out.

"It's a surprise."

They walked out of Jam Pony and were immediately greeted with tazors and they went down. Two men grabbed Max and held her still. Max tried to get away but couldn't. Two other men grabbed Zack and started to hall him into the back of a van. "Zack!" Max yelled still struggling to get free.

"Max I love you." Zack said as the men loaded him into the van.

"Zack! Zack!" Max yelled as she watched the van pull away.

Cindy who'd see the whole thing walked out and wrapped her arms around Max. "It'll be ok, Max. We'll get him back." Cindy said trying to comfort her. Max just cried.

A/N: so what did you think? like it? let me know. oh and i've got two alternate endings for this one that i'll try to get out sometime this week then i'll start with the first sequel that'll go along with this original ending.