Disclaimer- The idea for the poem came from Darren Hayes', "So Beautiful", and from a question a friend of mine asked me.. So the poem itself is mine...-
So Beautiful
Her hair was a mess, a tangle of knots.
Her eyes were all red, and puffy.
Her nose was running; She was sniffling.
Her 'much-too-big-&&-baggy' clothes were wrinkled, smelly, and full of stains.
In her hands, she held used tissues, covered in snot.
But when she looked at me, && attempted a feeble smile,
I told her,
"You are so Beautiful"
That was the most honest thing I have ever said in my life…
Hey! I was listening to "So Beautiful" by Darren Hayes, and just had to write a poem or ficlet concerning the words "You are so beautiful". My friend and I were playing a question game the other day, and he asked me what was the best compliment a guy could pay a girl, and the poem was my exact answer. If the girl was all gross and stuff, and he still called her Beautiful...sigh lol. I hate it when guys say "you the most beautiful girl in the world" because they haven't ment all the girls of the world...but when they say something like "You are so beautiful" or "Your the most beautiful girl I know" then that means sooo much more... lol well to me! Sorry for rambling on, here! lol well review if you like! Thx!
Happy Holidays! (7 days)
Shannon