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Devon clutched Raven's hands in his, gently pressing his lips against hers. He slid his tounge in her mouth and curiously searched around for hers. Raven had never been kissed like this before, her curiosity and ofcourse Devon's anxious tounge forced her to return the favor. He sat down on the bed, pulling her legs almost into a straddle, so she was sitting on top of him. His hands roaming up and down her thighs, and under her skirt, Raven wouldn't allow his hands too far under her skirt, but she was slowly giving up resistence. Devon sat up closer to Raven, placing his hands under her shirt rubbing the baby soft skin on her back, running his tounge up and down her neck. Raven was in a slight shiver, he blushed at the nervousness, but anxiousness in the same, he felt coming from her. It turned him on immensely.
Raven was feeling a rush of emotion, it felt good, it felt wrong but she was sort of happy it was happeneing with Devon. His touching becoming more intense, he finally reached for the back of her bra. Slowly as he unhooked it, he looked up at Raven hoping for an "ok" response, Raven placed her hands on his shoulders, allowing him the room to continue his ventures. As she felt the release of the material's support loosen, she sighed, as his hands moved around to the front of her body. Devon's hands finally resting on the soft, warm mounds of his partner, leaving Raven breath hitched in her throat. His expression of excitement, as he slowly massaged her breasts, he placed his hands on Raven's waist as they switched positions. Devon leveled himself over Raven as he pulled her top completely off, Raven like any girl during their first 'experience', placed her hands accross her chest, Devon smirked and pulled off his shirt. He removed her hand from her chest and laid against her, so he could feel her smooth caramel body against his. He softly moaned at first touch of Raven's hands on his back, as he found her lips again. The urgence in their kisses advised hands to roam again, Devon found his hand upon Raven's skirt zipper.
He looked at her once again, wanting her approval first, he didn't get it but Raven leaned up and kissed him. He gained initiative from the sweet signal and proceeded to pull the skirt and her underwear off. As she was now bare, Devon finished unclothing himself. Raven's eyes became slightly unsure as she took her first gaze. He leaned against Raven once again, she then felt this sudden discomforting pressure that made her eyes almost tear up. She placed her hands against his chest, as to signal him to relieve her of a little weight and pressure. Devon realizing she was slightly intimidated, he placed her wrists inside of his against the bed and kissed her, hoping it would bring her mind away from the foreign feeling. Him trying to help Raven keep her composure, was losing control himself throbbing abruptly in pleasure. Though she wasn't his first, being in love with her only added to this good feeling he was experiencing.
Bodies relieved, both still in shock and trying to gather their thoughts. Devon caught up in the moment, leaned over and whispered in Raven's ear "I love you Rae" as he wrapped his arms around her and kissed the side of her face. Raven not uttering a word back, just placed her arms over Devon's as they both rested...
Chapter 2 continued on the next page...