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Avigayil Urameshi
What's A Spirit Detective?
It was late at night when Koenma, Botan and Yusuke arrived at the Urameshis' new apartment.
"Wow, my mom must have had great insurance to get this good place," Yusuke commented looking around the new complex.
There were multiple floors, elevators and stairs. The apartments were grey and in a shape of a rectangle.
They flew into one of the apartments on the fifth floor. There, in one of the bedrooms was Yusuke in an actual bed.
"Sooo Koenma how does this revival thing work?" Yusuke asked.
"Well, I need to explain something to you."
"So explain already!"
"Ok. There are two lines; your life and spirit line. They both run on different cycles. Yours tonight runs in cycle."
"So?"
"This only happens every sixty years. You may not have another chance."
Koenma let out some sort of energy from his hands. The energy transferred and turned Yusuke's body gold.
"What the hell did you just do to my body!"
"I just created an opening between Spirit World and here."
"Oh."
"I have to tell you, you're body will start turning gold. By noon, your body will be totally gold. Remember, this only happens sixty years, so by midnight tomorrow you won't be able to comeback. Oh, you will also need someone to donate their life energy."
"And how do they do this?" Yusuke asked crossing his arms.
"By getting kissed on the lips," Koenma said sounding like a five year old. Yusuke's eyes just widened, "What? You never heard of mouth to mouth resuscitation?"
"Yeah…no," Yusuke stumbled over his words.
"I think he's just scared Koenma," Botan grinned.
"I think you're right Botan. Just let everyone know what they have to do," Koenma told Yusuke fading away.
"Right."
Kuwabara was lifting Yusuke up. Time was passing by very slowly till their lips met. At first it was a chaste kiss but then it slowly turned into one of passion.
Kuwabara woke up screaming, drenched in sweat, "Who knew dreams could be so scary?"
Little, did he know, everyone else who Yusuke was close with, had similar dreams.
When Avigayil woke up from her dream, she woke up in a fright.
"YUSUKE URAMESHI, I WILL KISS YOU LIKE THAT WHEN I KISS A DEMON WHICH WILL BE NEVER!" she screamed.
Avi will never kiss her brother like that. Sure, she would lightly kiss her brother on the lips, he was family. But, she would never ever kiss him passionately, that was just…gross.
Yusuke winced as he heard his sister yell at him, "Well, Avi won't be doing the honors."
:Next morning:
"Well he doesn't look any different," Kayko said.
Kayko was sitting in a chair next to Yusuke's bed. She was waiting for Avi. Avi walked into Yusuke's room finishing tying her hair up in her signature low ponytail. She shivered.
"Are you ok?" Kayko asked looking up, "You're kind of pale."
"Yeah, I'm fine," Kayko looked at the girl quizzically, "No, really, I'm fine. I just had a dream that spooked me out." Avi was starting to sweat.
Kayko went over to Avi and felt her forehead, "Avigayil, you have a fever. It's low, but still, I would stay home."
"Fine with me. I came home around two n the morning from the club and I'm sooo fucking tired."
"Well go back to bed; I'll swing by later with homework."
"Thanks."
Kayko left the Urameshis' apartment and went to school. Avi just kept looking at her brother. She shook her head, "How can you even ask me that?"
She then went changed back into her pj's, snuggled on the couch and started watching TV.
"Damn. She didn't even believe the dream," Yusuke said.
"Maybe I should have told you that you start turning gold from your feet," Koenma said meekly.
"Well thanks for leaving out that piece of information, Koenma," Yusuke yelled.
"Shut up Yusuke, I don't feel good," Avi yelled at her brother. She heard the whole conversation but was too tired to do anything.
"Sorry."
:At school:
:Kayko's P.O.V:
I was in the middle of doing an assignment, when Mr. Takanaka came.
"Kayko Yukimura?"
I stood, "Yes?"
"May I please speak with you outside?"
I walked out side and followed Mr. Takanaka out into the hallway.
"Kayko…your mother is in the hospital," Mr. Takanaka informed me.
I was just in a daze. I couldn't believe it. Somehow I was put into a vehicle and driven to the hospital. I met my dad there.
"Daddy what happened?" I asked.
"I don't know, sweetie. She just passed out."
We both went into a mom's room. I sat next to her on a chair. Dad and I were really worried.
"How is he doctor?" Daddy asked the doctor as soon as he came in.
I could tell he was nervous. He was twisting around his work hat. I realized he was still in his apron from work. I stared at his features. They same color hair and eyes as mine, with a few signs of aging on his face.
"Don't worry Mr. Yukimura; she just overworked herself in this heat."
"Hear that Kayko," Daddy acknowledged me, "Mom's fine. You can go back to school."
"No. I'm staying right here," I said stubbornly.
:Normal P.O.V:
"She'll stay there all night if she has to," Botan complained.
Botan and Yusuke watched Kayko the whole day and it was close to midnight; about an hour away to be exact.
"You have an hour left," Koenma said popping out of no where.
"HOLY SHIT! DON'T DO THAT!"
"I wouldn't be yelling at me if I were you. I would try to get your mom or Kuwabara to kiss you."
"Right," Yusuke agreed.
"Mom, stop hanging with these fags and go home. I need you to kiss me," Yusuke yelled at his mother.
Atsuko was a t a party, hanging out with two cross-dressed men drunk as hell.
"Atsuko why don't you stay here tonight?" one cross-dresser asked.
"Say that's a great idea! Kayko can take care of Yusuke," Atsuko agreed.
Yusuke just slapped his forehead, "This is hopeless," he looked up and saw Botan leaving on her oar, "Hey where you going?"
"I'm going to try Kayko again. Go find Kuwabara."
"Right. Go find Kuwabara."
Yusuke found Kuwabara at the arcade playing a racecar game.
"Hey Kuwabara are you listening to me?" Yusuke asked, "Ok I don't want you to think I'm a gay fag but," he put his hands together begging, "Please, please, please, kiss me. I know it's gross but, hey, are you listening to me? Kuwabara," Yusuke touched Kuwabara's back.
Kuwabara froze on the stop, "Eek. This place has the chilly feeling," Kuwabara ran out of the arcade.
"Well that was useful," he muttered to himself, joining Koenma in front of his apartment complex. Yusuke saw Kayko running towards the complex.
"Huh Kayko? Botan how'd you do it?" he asked the deity as soon as she appeared.
"Her mother was asleep. I tapped into her and relayed the message through her," the blue haired girl explained.
"She only has five minutes," Koenma informed.
Kayko ran tot the elevator.
"Come on, come on," she muttered.
She kept pressing the button. Kayko gave up and ran up the stairs.
"Two minutes," the prince counted down.
Kayko fiddled around to find the key in her school bag. Botan and Yusuke were on the edge of their seats.
"One minute."
Kayko found the key, opened the door and shoved her shows off.
"Forget about the shoes Kayko," Yusuke yelled.
DING. DING. DING.
Kayko ran to his room and saw his golden body.
DING. DING. DING.
"Yusuke," Kayko cried and ran to him.
"KAYKO," Yusuke cried and went into his house.
Kayko ran and kissed him.
Koenma closed his pocket watch, "She didn't make it."
Botan looked sad and looked around for Yusuke, "Yusuke?"
Avigayil woke up when Kayko crashed into the house. She ran and saw Kayko kiss Yusuke. The twin stayed silent watching.
Kayko pulled back crying when she saw nothing was happening. Yusuke opened his eyes slowly. He sat up, pulling the covers off him. His raven hair messed and his chocolate eyes settling on the girl in front of him. He turned sat crossed-legged and scratched his cheek.
Kayko's face brightened up and started crying tears of joy.
"Hey nice kiss," Yusuke commented.
"Oh, Yusuke," Kayko cried crashing into him, holding onto his pajamas so he won't ever leave her again.
Yusuke looked down and smiled a small smile. He looked up and saw his sister. She smiled and he smiled back. Avigayil left and went back to her own bed. She would let Kayko have Yusuke to herself.
"Welcome back bro. we'll hang tomorrow," she whispered before she went back to sleep.
"I was holding my breath and everything," Botan let out a sigh of relief.
"We'll see how he is tomorrow morning when his ordeal starts," Koenma said.
:Next day:
Yusuke stretched his arms, "It feels good to be on the ground again. I love gravity," Yusuke commented.
Avigayil looked over at her brother. He was wearing a pair of jeans, a red plaid shirt with a yellow sweater, a green jacket with orange cuffs and collar plus white sneakers. His hair was down; not gelled back. She laughed at him, "You're such a dumbass."
"Hey!" Yusuke put his hands down, opened his eyes and looked over at hid sister. He took in her features. She was wearing flare jeans, a red plaid shirt like him, with a yellow sweater vest and a matching green jacket with orange cuffs and collar. She was wearing her signature ponytail with sunglasses on her head. The twin was wearing white sneakers too, but about ten sizes smaller. After all, she was only 4'9'', "That wasn't very nice."
"Since when do you care if I was nice or not?"
Two boys walked up to them.
"Hey give us all your money and we won't have to bash your face," one boy threatened.
"Are…you…talking to me?" Yusuke questioned, his eyes getting happy with joy.
"Yeah, so what's the big deal?"
Yusuke sighed and took the boys' hands, "Boys, to be alive is a wonderful thing."
"Come on, Mr. Coming back from the dead," Avi said dragging her brother away.
"Why you-" The boy started.
"Hey," The second boy said trying to calm down the first boy, "Don't mess with the retarded. Let it go."
The two twin teens were passing an alleyway from the side of the road.
"Psst."
The twins turned around and looked in the alleyway.
"Psst. The two of you come here."
The twins looked around and pointed at themselves.
"Yes, you two," the voice beckoned.
They came over and saw a lady in a purple robe covering everything but her eyes. In front of her was a box with a crystal ball sitting on it.
"I know what happened to you," she said.
"Really enlighten is?"
"You have died and comeback to life. Hey wait a minute, I'm not finished yet," she protested.
"I don't need to be told what happened to me when I already know," Yusuke said putting on his sunglasses, "Let's go get coffee."
"Ewww gross. How can you drink that shit?" Avi asked sliding an arm around her brother's waist.
"Fine, you can get a cookie," Yusuke answered back, slinging an arm around his sister's shoulders. They walked like that through the streets of Tokyo to the coffee shop.
RING
The bell on the coffee shop had rung signaling that a cusomter(s) walked in. And in walked our favorite teen twins. They saw a group of teens around their age sitting in a couple of tables. They took a booth across the gang. A nice waitress came and took the siblings order; Yusuke's coffee and Avi's cookie. The two teens sat across one another and looked over at the group who were talking.
"Looks like four eyes is the ring leader," Yusuke commented quietly.
"Mmmhmm."
The waitress arrived with their order.
Avigayil looked over at the boys. Her eye's widened, "Yusuke," she kicked him under the table.
He almost dropped his cup of coffee, "Shit, Avi, you almost made me spill."
"Four eyes has horns coming out of his head," she said totally ignoring what her brother yelled at her for.
"What?" Yusuke looked over at four eyes, "Well there's something you don't see everyday."
Avigayil just nodded her head and took a bite of her cookie.
"Mmm…tasteable." (A/N: Tasteable an Avigayil word. Meaning-tasty, delicious etc.)
Yusuke looked over at his sister. He laughed at her face of heavenly bliss, "Nice face."
"Shut up. Go back to eating reading your manga."
"Right back at ya," Avigayil stuck her tongue out at her brother.
"Uh boss so do you think Kuwabara will show up?" a boy from the gang asked.
"Of course he'll show up if he doesn't want his Eikichi dead."
'Wow this Eikichi girl must be something special' Avi thought.
'Since when does he have a girlfriend' Yusuke wondered.
"But why make him steal?" Another boy asked.
'STEAL? That's against his code', both twins thought. They became alarmed with out showing it on their faces.
"I want him to enjoy the art of stealing," Four eyes explained.
RING
The door opened and Kuwabara, Okubo, Miyamoto and the nameless boy were standing. Kuwabara had a shopping bag under his arm. Kuwabara walked over to the leader and dumped the bag on the table.
"Here's the comics. I didn't know which kind you liked. Now where's Eikichi?"
'He really stole' the twins were amazed.
"I didn't know stolen goods came with a receipt," four eyes stated.
Avi let out a breath of relief she didn't even know she was holding.
"Grab him and take him outside," four eyes ordered.
"Come on," two boys grabbed Kuwabara's arms and dragged him outside.
Miyamoto, Okubo, nameless boy, and the rest of four eyes' gang followed.
When both groups arrived behind the coffee shop, four eyes ordered to drop him. The boys obeyed and dropped Kuwabara on the ground. Though, he landed on the grass (don't ask me how there is grass in an alleyway) it still hurt his bum.
"Since you have disobeyed me, she will have to die."
A boy grabbed an empty wine bottle, hit it against a box, and held it up to show the sharp pieces. In a bag, he grabbed a little kitten; it was brown with a few white spots and a red ribbon with a bell attached around it neck.
"Eikichi," Kuwabara cried.
"Yes, if you don't want to see your precious Eikichi dead, you will get on your hands and knees and start apologizing," four eyes said cruelly.
"What!"
"Don't do it Kuwabara. He's not worth it," the nameless boy yelled.
But it was too late. Kuwabara got down on his hands and knees.
"I'm sorry. I was wrong," Kuwabara mumbled.
"What was that?" four eyes asked.
He loved torturing this boy.
"I said I'm sorry I was wrong," Kuwabara shouted.
"Good, now I want you to get up and hit your three friends. They've been staring at me ever since we met and it's quite rude."
"What? I can't do that. I'll never hit them."
"Don't worry we can take it," Miyamoto assured him.
"Yeah, we'll just imagine its Sakamoto and we'll hit him right back," the name less boy also reassured Kuwabara.
"No…I can't do it. I can't bring myself to hit my friends."
"Fine. Then the cat dies," Sakamoto (four eyes) ordered.
The boy holding Eikichi started moving the glass closer tot the kitten. Out of no where a kick was sent to the boy holding the cat. Someone jumped and caught the cat the too.
"What the?"
The two figures landed and turned around.
"Urameshi?" Kuwabara cried, "But I thought you were dead?"
"Things change. Hold this guy, will ya," Yusuke handed Kuwabara the cat.
"Eikichi," Kuwabara cooed.
Avigayil almost fell over, "Eikichi is a cat?"
"Hey Urameshi, it's not a guy it's a girl."
"Yeah whatever. Are you fighting with us or no?" Yusuke asked dodging a punch.
Kuwabara looked at his friends, "Let's fight!"
Kuwabara ran to a guy and kicked him in the stomach, while holding Eikichi. Miyamoto punched some guy in the face but got punched in the stomach. Avi was having some trouble. Someone was holding her up in the air by the arms. She kicked him in the place where the sun doesn't shine. He dropped her and she landed in a crouching position.
"Avi lets move," she looked up and saw Yusuke starting to run after Sakamoto.
"You're not getting away that easily," she got up and started running after the boys. She caught up with Yusuke four eyes was leading them under a bridge. Avigayil ran and jumped on Sakamoto's back knocking him down. The impact with the ground knocked him out. A little gray-blue thing came out of his mouth. It had horns. It was like a pixie minus the wings and looked evil. It had purple hair and yellow eyes. It also had a yellow loin cloth covering him.
"What the hell?" Avi questioned out loud.
"What you can see me?" the little thing squeaked.
It turned red and started bouncing off the walls.
Yusuke grabbed it.
"Ahhhh. What are you doing?" he yelled.
"What is this?" Yusuke asked Avi. She shrugged after getting up.
"His name's Jiyaki. He's a ruthless criminal wanted for many crimes in Spirit World," the fortune teller said walking towards the teens, "Both of you have all that's required to become Spirit Detectives."
"Well that's a fancy title," the twins said simultaneously not sure what to say.
The fortune teller took off her hood, revealing a familiar deity.
"Botan!"
"I knew you wouldn't forget," she beamed.
"Yusuke and Avigayil Urameshi," a voice boomed.
They looked outside and saw Koenma projected in the sky, "For the time being you're the Spirit Detectives of earth. Botan will be your assistant."
"I'll take that," Botan said taking Jiyaki and flied off to Spirit World.
"Spirit Detective, huh?" Avigayil turned to Yusuke smiling.
So yes, Avi became a Spirit Detective. There will be 3 more chapters until this story ends.Don't worry I'm going saga by saga. So the next stroy will be about Genkai and Rando. Read my profile for upcoming stories.
Another poll. Hmmmmm...maybe I'll do this at the end of every chapter.
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