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Chapter 19: The Invasion
So Sora, Donald, Goofy and Clayton went through the jungle with Tarzan leading. Though it was not the most pleasant trip what with the bugs, heat, and other unpleasant jungle things it wasn't as much as a hassle as there usual trips. As far as Sora could tell there were no Heartless on this world. Sora and Donald remanded aloof with each other so Goofy tried to start some pleasant conversation.
Eventually they reached their destination guarding the nesting ground were two gorillas one was a tough looking silver back male and the other a brownish, motherly female. Sora came to the conclusion that this ape must be Kerkeck and the Gorilla with it must be its mate, but how a gentle looking Gorilla like that got together with a mean looking Kerkeck he'll never know.
Tarzan appeared to be grunting "what is Tarzan doing" asked Goofy "I think he's speaking Gorilla" said Donald "oh, what's he saying" said Goofy "I don't know the exact translation but I'm pretty sure he asking Kerkeck permission into the nesting Grounds".
After Tarzans conversation Sora asked "well Tarzan can we go in" Tarzan shook his head and said "Kerkeck says no outsiders" Sora hung his head in despair Riku and Kari were in there and the only thing standing between him was a mean looking Ape, Sora could probably handle him but didn't want to get into unnecessary violence besides on the way there Tarzan explained how Kerkeck and Kala (Kerkecks mate) raised Tarzan since Sabor the jaguar killed his real parents.
"Hey where's Clayton?" asked Goofy, startled Sora looked around indeed Clayton was missing, "strange he was right behind us when we left" said Donald. Then Tarzan put his face on the ground and started sniffing like a dog "Clayton that way" said Tarzan pointing to the direction of the tree house, so they sprinted off with Tarzan in the lead.
They managed to get to the tree house pretty quick by swinging on vines, when they got to the tree house they looked into the window to see a small gray Gorilla playing with an old globe, Donald recognized it as the ape that scared him when he landed in the jungle but what really shocked them was Clayton standing in the front door with his gun aiming at the little ape! Sora was shocked Clayton had told him that he was a hunter but also said he was only here to guard Jane not hunt Gorillas! While are hero's stood transfixed by this act Donald sprung into action. He ran as fast as his webbed feet could go and yelled his angry high pitched yell. Donald's loud voice startled Clayton causing him to pull the trigger luckily it didn't hit the little Gorilla unluckily though Kerkeck and Kala arrived just in time to see Clayton miss the little ape.
Once the group managed to recover from the shock Tarzan tried to explain things to Kerkeck but the all three apes including Kala who always defended Tarzan from foolish acts in the past and Terk Tarzans closest friend gave him the cold shoulder and left. Tarzan cast an angry pair of eyes at the hunter "you try to shoot Terk" said Tarzan "you don't understand I was only trying to… a snake slithered by you see I saved that poor Gorilla's life" said Clayton trying to defend himself but alas no won believed him.
They returned to the campsite and explained Claytons "Accident" "How Can You Do Such A Thing" yelled Jane, putting it mildly Jane was not happy about the incident "now Miss Potter as I told you I was not aiming for the Gorilla" said Clayton trying to defend himself, immediately after Clayton finished Jane said firmly "you are not to go near the Gorillas again" "all because off one mishap come on" said Clayton but once Clayton noticed ten angry eyes staring at him he knew he was beat, Clayton left the tent with a scowl on his face.
Clayton had secretly joined the expedition in hopes of catching Gorillas but now he would never get his chance "what am I doing with these imbeciles, Blasted Gorillas I'll hunt Down Every last one of them, I'll track them down somehow, I stake my life on it." Just as Clayton was about to light his pipe he heard a rustle in the bushes then another, Clayton got his gun out prepared for whatever was about to pounce him, the last thing Clayton saw was a pair of round yellow eyes.
Sora and the gang heard gun fire and came out to investigate when they noticed that Clayton had vanished into thin air almost immediately after a Gorilla barged into the camp being chased by Bluish gray monkeys with yellow eyes "goodness what are those things" said Jane shocked at the atrocities before her "Heartless" yelled Sora summing his KeyBlade. Sora charged into battle with the aid Donald, Goofy and Tarzan, Tarzan didn't know what Heartless were but anything that would attack a Gorilla was not a friend of his. After defeating the Heartless Sora told Jane about the Heartless while Tarzan tried to learn what was going on by talking to the Gorilla they saved "he says that strange creatures come out off nowhere and attack Gorillas, Gorillas scattered across jungle" said Tarzan "then there's no time to loss you simply must save the Gorillas from these monstrosity's" said Jane horrified by the heart eating creatures. So Sora and the gang rushed into the jungle weapons in hand, the less then one minute the Heartless had turned the jungle into a battle field.
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