Thanks everybody so much who gave suggestions! Especially FanficPixie! That was really long! That really makes me happy that somebody out there is giving time for my story and to write that long of a suggestion. SPECIAL THANKS!
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nipagirl12193 - Nope I'm not phillipino.
To people who think that my chapters are too short..I'm sorry but I can't really help my self because I'm not used to writing such long chapters. Just give me some time because this is my first story.. geesh lol. And another thing.. why do people flame? If they don't like the story then why bother flaming it's just a waste of their time. All they have to do is simply stop reading and get lost..geez they piss me off.
ALSO another thing.. what the heck is third person omniscient narrator? I have no clue what that is though I've heard of that before.. can somebody please tell me? It would be really helpful.
Disclaimer: I do not own CCS. Clamp does.
Chapter 11
"Whoa..never thought your life would be so rocky." Makoto stated. "I'm sorry."
"Whatever." Syaoran grumbled. "Just forget about it and start working on my T.V."
"Uh yeah I'll get right to that." Makoto said.
With Sakura.
"Well Eriol and I should leave now. We still have to head to the mall to get some more clothes." Sakura said grabbing her purse.
"Awwwe! You guys have to visit soon again okay?" Naoko pouted which made Eriol chuckled.
"Yeah of course right Eriol?" Sakura smiled.
"Yeah bye nice meeting you Naoko." Eriol replied. Sakura and Naoko exchanged hugs and Eriol and Sakura left.
"Well to the mall I guess?" Eriol asked.
"Yup. We still haven't bought any clothes for you."
"Then we'll get some clothes for me today."
As they drove all was silent. Sakura looked out her window and watched everything go by. The silence was making Eriol wonder what Sakura was thinking about.
Once they got to the mall they took off the seatbelts and got out. First, they decided they would take pictures in the booth. They made really funny faces and kept two each. After, they bought Eriol clothes and Sakura bought some clothes of her own.
"Eriol wait for me here I need to go the washroom." Sakura said walking off.
Eriol nodded looking at her retreating form.
"Hopefully she doesn't take long I'm bored to death.' Eriol thought to himself.
BOOM
Somebody had crashed into him. Eriol quickly made a move and prevented the girl from falling by grabbing her wrist.
"Oh my god I'm so sorry. Are you okay?" Came the angels' voice. Eriol looked up and saw her eyes. They took her breath away. Even though her eyes were breath taking, Sakura's eyes were much more. He took his time to look at her and saw that she was very pretty and had amethyst eyes and smokey grey and violet hair. That "girl" looked at Eriol and instantly started liking him. (a/n: I'm not gonna say what he looks like since you guys already know.)
Tomoyo, embarassed, pulled her wrist away and said. "Oh my phone!"
Eriol looked down at the broken phone on the ground.
"I'm sorry about that.. could I ..buy you another one?" Eriol asked. He totally forgot at that moment that he had a girlfriend.
"No no no. I'm sorry it was my fault I should've watched where I was going." Tomoyo nodded her head no and kneeled down to pick up the pieces of her phone and threw it in the nearest garbage. No use of it anymore. Since Tomoyo is rich she can always get another.
"Eriol. Eriol Hiiragizawa." he said pulling his hand out.
"Tomoyo Daidouji. Nice to meet you." Tomoyo smiled shaking his hand. Shock froze him once he heard her name. This gorgeous lady in front of him was Tomoyo?
'It can't be her. There are.. a lot of Tomoyo's in Japan..right?' Eriol thought.
"Uhm.. nice to meet you." Eriol said trying his best to smile.
"Nice to meet you too." Tomoyo grinned showing her white teeth.
"Eriol I'm ba-." Sakura got cut off seeing Tomoyo's smiling face.
"Tomoyo?" Sakura whispered.
Instantly Tomoyo smile faded and a shocked expression replaced it.
Just great. Tomoyo.. the person Eriol just met is Sakura's enemy. But already Eriol is in love with her. I guess it's just love at first sight.
OKAY!!! there is Chapter 11! Sorry if it was short. Thanks everybody so much for giving me great ideas. I promise I will put them to good use. REVIEW!
And! Okay I'm thinking of writing another CCS story. I don't know if it will be one-shot or just another story. Well either one it will be called "My Dreams Are Awakening". Here I will tell you guys the summary:
Sakura keeps on having the same dreams over and over again ever since Syaoran left to Hong Kong. What will happen when her dream finally awakens? Will it turn out to be a good thing or a bad thing?
Okay it will be your choice if you want me to write this story or not. Tell me in your review! Thanks.