Crimson Tears of Pain

by PsychoManiacBleachFan

Ed is captured by Envy, who is planing on taking his soul. Will his friends be able to save him before Envy breaks his soul into submission?

2. The Nightmare begins

Crimson Tears of Pain

Chapter two: The Nightmare begins

Hey everyone. It's me. Don't worry about Roy or Yusuke. They were saved. I bribed Ed with some pixie sticks. Although now I reaaallly wish I hadn't.

(Ed is currently jumping off the walls)

Ed: Whee! How fun is this!

(Suddenly hiei pops in with a strong rope)

Hiei: I got it wench like you said.

Thanks Hiei. Wait a minute! Stop calling me wench.

(Hiei looks at my angry face and quickly ties up a struggling Ed)

Hiei: Here Queen. He's finally tied up.

Thanks hiei

(I hug Hiei)

Hiei: Off Queen so I can do the disclaimer.

Okay

Hiei: QueenofAngstyFics doesn't own Yu Yu Hakusho or Fullmetal Alchemist.

Look below for some real action.

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Meanwhile, Mustang got worried about Ed and sent out a search party to find him. 'Where are you Fullmetal? I hope you are alright. If you aren't Hawkeye, Al, and the others will kill me. Most of all, I will be so sad. After all, you are a joy to be around.' Mustang thought to himself in sadness. Suddenly, Hawkeye came in. "No sign of Fullmetal yet, sir but we are still looking." Hawkeye said as she saluted the Colonel. "Very well Hawkeye, carry on looking." Mustang said with a sigh. "Yes sir." Hawkeye replied as she left.

A figure outside had heard everything. 'Hm so Fullmetal is missing. It seems I'll have to look for him myself. After all, I am the one who will kill Fullmetal.' The figure thought to himself as he walked away. His right arm glowed as he passed an alleyway. "So Fullmetal was here." The man said as his red eyes surveyed the alleyway for any clues. Suddenly there was a flash of light and suddenly a hologram of E appeared. The man's eyes widened as he saw what had happened to Ed before Ed had been kidnapped.

"Damn it. The boy was captured by one of the homunculus. It seems I will have to save the boy but I will need help." The man said in a frustrated voice. He noticed Mustang and Ed's other friends walking by as they were searching for Ed. 'Perfect. Now to make them notice I'm here.' He quickly caused an explosion in the alleyway. As he predicted, they came to investigate. "Scar, what are you doing here?" Mustang said in a cold tone. "The boy was kidnapped by a homunculus. " Scar said quickly. "Why would you help us?" Hawkeye asked. "The boy is mine to kill. Not a homunculus." Scar said coldly. "Fine we'll let you help us but after this we're back to being enemies." Mustang said. "Fine with me, Flame Alchemist." Scar said coldly.

Meanwhile, Ed had finally gotten up. His eyes opened to see Envy staring smugly at him. "Sorry Fullmetal Pipsqueak, but it's not time yet. Time to go back to sleep. Envy quickly covered Ed's mouth with a cloth. Ed struggled to pull it off to no avail. Ed was knocked unconscious within a matter of seconds. Envy raked his fingers through Ed's bangs. "Soon Fullmetal, soon I will see you broken begging for mercy." Envy said as his hands played with Ed's bangs.

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Sorry this chapter is short but I need to ask you something.Alright my fellow readers it's time to vote. Who do you think should Ed be with? (No it will not be Envy/Ed. Sorry to you fans of that pairing. I will make another fic for each of the pairings that don't make it.)

(06/29/05)I need you to review and tell me who you want to save Ed and who for him to love. I can't do the next chapter until I have more votes.

Al/Ed-0

Roy/Ed-2

Scar/Ed-0

Scar/Ed/Roy-1

Also who should save Ed?

Roy-1

Scar-1

Al-0

Ed: I'm better now. Please untie me.

Sure Ed. Hiei! Untie Ed

Hiei: No Queen. I don't like him. Besides what's in it for me.

Fine I'll give you sweet snow.

Hiei: Okay!

(Unties Ed)

Hiei: Sweet Snow Now!

Okay, Okay!

(Gives hiei sweet snow)

Time for review responses:

Review Responses

ILuvPiratesSavvy-I have updated.

Envylover1414-well I had to end it somewhere.

Gozilla- I have updated.

Uniasus- Don't worry about Ed killing. I can't let him kill Roy.

Tsume's Eternal Girl 1-Thanks. Don't worry about Roy. I like him too much to kill him.

pure-reflection- I'm sorry about that. I hope this chapter is better to read.

The Fuzy Llama- Thanks. I'm glad you told me all that stuff. I hope this chapter is better.

Well read and review.

Hiei: Or else I will haunt you till your death.

Hiei!

Hiei: oh no!

(Hiei runs away as I try to hit him with the evil mallet of doom)