I only got one more review for the chapter 3, i need more reviews!!!!! i
want 3 reviews to continue this story, this chapter will bring in another
person into the world, so the title isn't gonna make sense nomore but oh
well, and i'm also gonna make a new card game for this story. Like some FF
games, they have a card game(excluding FF7 and FF10) the game will be
called.... well u'll find out, the game will be the mix of Yugioh and Magic
the Gathering(rules and abilities) but the cards will be FF related. I hope
u have enjoyed my story so far, and now i present to u, Chapter 4 of Love
Hina in the FF world.
Chapter 4 One will finally join him, and the Curse of the Power Berserker part 2
The ? tower
Keitaro wakes up. He looks around to see that he is no longer in the forest but inside a old castle. He didn't really care about why he was in here and not out there, he was just glad he was inside and not out there. "I wonder what time it is?" Keitaro checked his watch. It showed 5:30. He got up and started to walk around the old castle. He found some stairs and started to walk up the stairs. He then came up to a sign with mysterious letters on it. The sign says "TEJEHA DUFAN."(not sure if this is right) It had the English Alphabet but the words were switched around so the words didn't make sense. "I think it says Ddd...iiii....vine, Divine! that's it, it says Divine Tower!! So I guess that's where I'm at." He then looked closely at the letter to come to a conclusion of what this language is. "Hey this is Al Bhed language, I know some of that language, Now I have to practice how to speak it properly. Before he was able to try to speak Al Bhed, something had shriek and ran down the stairs headed toward him.
"Hmm cunno is sorry then.." turning around to see something run at him. "OH MY DAMN GOD!!! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!?" the thing then jumped down and tried to slash him with the blade that is attached on to it's arm. Keitaro had taken a glimpse at the monster. It was at least 6'0 tall, it seemed to have a blade attached on one arm, and a arm cannon on the other arm. (imagine the space pirates in metroid prime, damn scary things they are.) The thing rushed at him again and it missed.
Keitaro then readied his sword to fight off the monster. The monster then starts shooting him with multiple red energy beam. When the beam made contact with the wall, it melted.
"OH MY DAMN GOD!!! THIS IS WORSE THEN THAT STUPID DRAGON!!!" Keitaro thought. The monster was looking around for him. Keitaro ran to hide behind a pillar but that didn't help because it just melted away. "Take this you prick!" Keitaro then found some small dagger on the floor, rusted but still sharp and lethal and threw it at the monster. The monster dodged the dagger and shot the energy beam again, only not to noticed that when the dagger had hit the fall, it had exploded, and the wall behind it had collasped on to the monster, but before it had collasped on the creature, it had thrown some kind of dart at Keitaro, it had hit him in the arm. But Keitaro couldn't do anything about it because he had fallen asleep out of exhaustion.
Hinata House
Everyone was looking at Keitaro's battle with fear because of those damn monsters. Su on the otherhand was happy about the battle and also the monster that was also in the world. "Oh boy more monsters data for me to gather now." Su says with glee and ferociously starts typing on a laptop. One of the residents was getting very inpatient and decides that she will go follow Keitaro, but before that person could say she wanted to go to, Naru starts to speak. "Hey guys look at this!" All eyes are now drawn to the T.v, as a girl that is about 18 years old, only her head shows and wearing a robes, walks up into the screen and is now facing Keitaro.
The Divine Tower
A auburn hair girl appears and walks over to the sleeping ronin. she stares at his face and then she notices that a needle is hanging out of his arm. She bends down to take the needle off his arm, she examines it and then smiles. "I see, he now has the curse of those wretched beast, that are strong but has no mind of its own. The Berserker." she then walks over to Keitaro and then does the unexpected and actually kissed him on the lips. She walks away from him and says "too bad for him though that i am the creator of those beast, he going to be brain dead, like those other fools, and he was a cute guy too." and then with a snap of her fingers she disappears.
Hinata House
The girls glare daggers at the girl who just kissed Keitaro. "Who the hell does that tramp think she is kissing that pervert." Naru says. Then the girl who wanted to go to that world and save him, finally says what she wanted to say. "I'm going to help Keitaro whether you like it or not, now Su transport me there before i change my mine." the girl says. Everyone stares at that girl with surprise in everyones eyes. Finally after a moment of silence, Su breaks the silence. "Are you sure? this is a huge risk your taking, and remember there is probably no sake in the game world." Naru stares at her friend who has decided her fate. "Kitsune? Why are you going? Why are you going to save that perverted ronin." Kitsune looks at everyone and then says, "I have my own personal reasons, come on Su take me to the ronin now!" Su then pulls out a tape ruler and then runs over to Kitsune to what everyone thinks was measurements of her body. "Su what the hell are you doing?!" Kitsune yells, as Su is touching her "puppies" and her sensitive area down there. "I'm getting your measurement and seeing what kind of character you can be." Su says. Su then runs upstairs to make something. after a while they can hear some noise that sounded awfully familar to Shinobu. "Is that a sewing machine i'm hearing?" Shinobu says as Su then runs down the stairs. "Kitsune wear this." Su says, handing her a box ,and then Kitsune goes to another room to change. Haruka comes back from her long bathroom break(Or was she smoking? nobody will ever know), and then Su goes to Haruka and asks her " Hey do you have some kind of polearm weapon? Haruka looks at her funny and then says "Yeah i have one, why?" Su then does a imitation of Uncle from Jackie Chan adventures, she ruffles her hair to have uncle's bangs, pulls out a yellow vest and glasses,and hit her on the head with her two fingers and says "No time for question, just get me it while I do some RREEEseaarrcch" and then she walks to the computer typing more stuff. "Damn her, and her T.v shows." Haruka says as she walks to her shop to get the polearm weapon.
Hot Spring changing room
Kitsune now is trying on the outfit that Su gave her. She is also thinking why she is doing this herself. "Why am I saving Keitaro? He is nothing but a 3rd time roinin, why do i care?" Kitsune then pulls out the outfit and looks at it. " This is what i'm suppose to wear!?" And then she puts it on. "I wonder what he'll think? Wait a minute, why do I care what he thinks?, I mean he'll still like what I wear even if it's a t-shirt why should i care, it's not like I am falling for...." Kitsune thinks more about it before she leaves the room. "now i see why I want to find him." then she walks out of the changing room and goes to the karinin's room to show her new outfit.
Karinin's room
Kitsune comes back into the room, and everyone is looking at her. "What in the world are you wearing?" Haruka says as she came back with a spear. Kitsune is wearing what Freya is wearing in FF9.The red hat and coat covered her body, under her was a T-shirt and her under garments. and she is wearing boots. "I'm going after your Nephew, this is what i'm going to wear to bring his little behind back here." Kitsune walks to Su. "What weapon am i getting?" Su runs over to Haruka, snatchs the spear and gives it to her. "Here you go." Kitsune takes the spear and swings it around. "hmm never use one before but for some reason, i like this thing, it reminds me something that is long and..." Haruka quickly placed a hand on her mouth and then said "Don't say that, children are around." looking at Shinobu, Su and Sarah. Kitsune then goes to a mirror and looks at herself. "I look good in this don't I?" asking everyone. They all nodded. "Ok Su, send me there and pronto." Su turns to her and then says to her, "are you sure? if you go i'll send you there." She looks around, no one wanted to stop her, and she wasn't gonna let anyone stop her either. All Kitsune did was stare Su in the eyes, for once she was serious.
" I see that you mean what you said, now hold on a sec while i apply something on your face." Then Su pulls out blue spray paint was about to spray it on her face when she grabbed the spray paint away from Su and then yelled back. What's with the spray paint,and you ain't gonna put that on my face." Su struggles to get the spray paint from her and explains her reason for trying to redecorate her face. "In the game, I'm making you a blue magic user/dragon knight, and in the game, the only people who use Blue magic are Ronsos and they're blue, unless you want to use makeup to make yourself look very pale." Kitsune then hurls the bottle out the window and says "I'll just go like this." Kitsune ran to the tube thing that Mutsumi was in before, but before Kitsune got in, Su ran to her and gave her something."Su what is this thing?" Kitsune stared at the gadget it was a walkie talkie, but she knew it was important somehow. "It's something i forgot to give turtle lady, this device allows us to talk to you from here, and when i make stuff, like a new weapon, i can send it to you through this." Kitsune puts it in a pocket enters the machine and allows Su to type in codes, and she too, also goes into the world of Final Fantasy.
this is the longest chapter i have written for this story so far, i hope u like it, and will continue to read it.
Chapter 4 One will finally join him, and the Curse of the Power Berserker part 2
The ? tower
Keitaro wakes up. He looks around to see that he is no longer in the forest but inside a old castle. He didn't really care about why he was in here and not out there, he was just glad he was inside and not out there. "I wonder what time it is?" Keitaro checked his watch. It showed 5:30. He got up and started to walk around the old castle. He found some stairs and started to walk up the stairs. He then came up to a sign with mysterious letters on it. The sign says "TEJEHA DUFAN."(not sure if this is right) It had the English Alphabet but the words were switched around so the words didn't make sense. "I think it says Ddd...iiii....vine, Divine! that's it, it says Divine Tower!! So I guess that's where I'm at." He then looked closely at the letter to come to a conclusion of what this language is. "Hey this is Al Bhed language, I know some of that language, Now I have to practice how to speak it properly. Before he was able to try to speak Al Bhed, something had shriek and ran down the stairs headed toward him.
"Hmm cunno is sorry then.." turning around to see something run at him. "OH MY DAMN GOD!!! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!?" the thing then jumped down and tried to slash him with the blade that is attached on to it's arm. Keitaro had taken a glimpse at the monster. It was at least 6'0 tall, it seemed to have a blade attached on one arm, and a arm cannon on the other arm. (imagine the space pirates in metroid prime, damn scary things they are.) The thing rushed at him again and it missed.
Keitaro then readied his sword to fight off the monster. The monster then starts shooting him with multiple red energy beam. When the beam made contact with the wall, it melted.
"OH MY DAMN GOD!!! THIS IS WORSE THEN THAT STUPID DRAGON!!!" Keitaro thought. The monster was looking around for him. Keitaro ran to hide behind a pillar but that didn't help because it just melted away. "Take this you prick!" Keitaro then found some small dagger on the floor, rusted but still sharp and lethal and threw it at the monster. The monster dodged the dagger and shot the energy beam again, only not to noticed that when the dagger had hit the fall, it had exploded, and the wall behind it had collasped on to the monster, but before it had collasped on the creature, it had thrown some kind of dart at Keitaro, it had hit him in the arm. But Keitaro couldn't do anything about it because he had fallen asleep out of exhaustion.
Hinata House
Everyone was looking at Keitaro's battle with fear because of those damn monsters. Su on the otherhand was happy about the battle and also the monster that was also in the world. "Oh boy more monsters data for me to gather now." Su says with glee and ferociously starts typing on a laptop. One of the residents was getting very inpatient and decides that she will go follow Keitaro, but before that person could say she wanted to go to, Naru starts to speak. "Hey guys look at this!" All eyes are now drawn to the T.v, as a girl that is about 18 years old, only her head shows and wearing a robes, walks up into the screen and is now facing Keitaro.
The Divine Tower
A auburn hair girl appears and walks over to the sleeping ronin. she stares at his face and then she notices that a needle is hanging out of his arm. She bends down to take the needle off his arm, she examines it and then smiles. "I see, he now has the curse of those wretched beast, that are strong but has no mind of its own. The Berserker." she then walks over to Keitaro and then does the unexpected and actually kissed him on the lips. She walks away from him and says "too bad for him though that i am the creator of those beast, he going to be brain dead, like those other fools, and he was a cute guy too." and then with a snap of her fingers she disappears.
Hinata House
The girls glare daggers at the girl who just kissed Keitaro. "Who the hell does that tramp think she is kissing that pervert." Naru says. Then the girl who wanted to go to that world and save him, finally says what she wanted to say. "I'm going to help Keitaro whether you like it or not, now Su transport me there before i change my mine." the girl says. Everyone stares at that girl with surprise in everyones eyes. Finally after a moment of silence, Su breaks the silence. "Are you sure? this is a huge risk your taking, and remember there is probably no sake in the game world." Naru stares at her friend who has decided her fate. "Kitsune? Why are you going? Why are you going to save that perverted ronin." Kitsune looks at everyone and then says, "I have my own personal reasons, come on Su take me to the ronin now!" Su then pulls out a tape ruler and then runs over to Kitsune to what everyone thinks was measurements of her body. "Su what the hell are you doing?!" Kitsune yells, as Su is touching her "puppies" and her sensitive area down there. "I'm getting your measurement and seeing what kind of character you can be." Su says. Su then runs upstairs to make something. after a while they can hear some noise that sounded awfully familar to Shinobu. "Is that a sewing machine i'm hearing?" Shinobu says as Su then runs down the stairs. "Kitsune wear this." Su says, handing her a box ,and then Kitsune goes to another room to change. Haruka comes back from her long bathroom break(Or was she smoking? nobody will ever know), and then Su goes to Haruka and asks her " Hey do you have some kind of polearm weapon? Haruka looks at her funny and then says "Yeah i have one, why?" Su then does a imitation of Uncle from Jackie Chan adventures, she ruffles her hair to have uncle's bangs, pulls out a yellow vest and glasses,and hit her on the head with her two fingers and says "No time for question, just get me it while I do some RREEEseaarrcch" and then she walks to the computer typing more stuff. "Damn her, and her T.v shows." Haruka says as she walks to her shop to get the polearm weapon.
Hot Spring changing room
Kitsune now is trying on the outfit that Su gave her. She is also thinking why she is doing this herself. "Why am I saving Keitaro? He is nothing but a 3rd time roinin, why do i care?" Kitsune then pulls out the outfit and looks at it. " This is what i'm suppose to wear!?" And then she puts it on. "I wonder what he'll think? Wait a minute, why do I care what he thinks?, I mean he'll still like what I wear even if it's a t-shirt why should i care, it's not like I am falling for...." Kitsune thinks more about it before she leaves the room. "now i see why I want to find him." then she walks out of the changing room and goes to the karinin's room to show her new outfit.
Karinin's room
Kitsune comes back into the room, and everyone is looking at her. "What in the world are you wearing?" Haruka says as she came back with a spear. Kitsune is wearing what Freya is wearing in FF9.The red hat and coat covered her body, under her was a T-shirt and her under garments. and she is wearing boots. "I'm going after your Nephew, this is what i'm going to wear to bring his little behind back here." Kitsune walks to Su. "What weapon am i getting?" Su runs over to Haruka, snatchs the spear and gives it to her. "Here you go." Kitsune takes the spear and swings it around. "hmm never use one before but for some reason, i like this thing, it reminds me something that is long and..." Haruka quickly placed a hand on her mouth and then said "Don't say that, children are around." looking at Shinobu, Su and Sarah. Kitsune then goes to a mirror and looks at herself. "I look good in this don't I?" asking everyone. They all nodded. "Ok Su, send me there and pronto." Su turns to her and then says to her, "are you sure? if you go i'll send you there." She looks around, no one wanted to stop her, and she wasn't gonna let anyone stop her either. All Kitsune did was stare Su in the eyes, for once she was serious.
" I see that you mean what you said, now hold on a sec while i apply something on your face." Then Su pulls out blue spray paint was about to spray it on her face when she grabbed the spray paint away from Su and then yelled back. What's with the spray paint,and you ain't gonna put that on my face." Su struggles to get the spray paint from her and explains her reason for trying to redecorate her face. "In the game, I'm making you a blue magic user/dragon knight, and in the game, the only people who use Blue magic are Ronsos and they're blue, unless you want to use makeup to make yourself look very pale." Kitsune then hurls the bottle out the window and says "I'll just go like this." Kitsune ran to the tube thing that Mutsumi was in before, but before Kitsune got in, Su ran to her and gave her something."Su what is this thing?" Kitsune stared at the gadget it was a walkie talkie, but she knew it was important somehow. "It's something i forgot to give turtle lady, this device allows us to talk to you from here, and when i make stuff, like a new weapon, i can send it to you through this." Kitsune puts it in a pocket enters the machine and allows Su to type in codes, and she too, also goes into the world of Final Fantasy.
this is the longest chapter i have written for this story so far, i hope u like it, and will continue to read it.