Woman among women
Chp. 5
Defiance
Makio
-Ok I revised this chp. Sorry I didn't know what I was thinking it was off characterbut to be fair this entire story is off character I know this will never ever happen but wake up Jusenkyo Ranma Akane and everybody AIN'T real nomatter how much you want it to be (this is where I start my angry rant) ok now I have to say I don't write this story for you guys I write it for me just to get it out of my head ok so I can't do everything and will end up disappointing people which leads me to my second rant if you can't say anything nice don't say it at all I GREATLY appreciate constructive criticism but when you just plain out say this sucks then I don't really like that ok learn some courtesy and be nice
"Akane I am tired of the way my mom bosses me around."
"Well she IS you're mother Ranma, and if you don't like it why don't you tell her."
"No I got a better idea." Ranma's eyes lit up as she ran upstairs.
Akane heard Ranma enter her room and then ran into the bathroom where she heard the dreaded SPLASH. She ran up hoping that Nodoka didn't hear.
"Ranma!" Akane burst through the door "What do you think you are doing? If you're mom finds out she will kill you (literally)"
"Not without this she won't" Ranma held up the seppeku sword and then snapped it in half.
Akane stared in aww as Ranma's face began to beam and glow with triumph.
"Now I don't have to go to school as a girl, and no more dresses or make-up or anything like that." Ranma began to laugh hesterically.
"I don't know Ranma…." Was all Akane muttered
Nodoka's eyes bulged and she began to choke on her tea when she saw her son walking down the stairs in his male form, she didn't understand she was being perfectly fair with Ranma.
"Ranma dear why are you like that?" Nodoka's eyes were watery she never wanted to kill Ranma (or herself) but he had broken the contract and she must do what must be done.
"Mom you're crazy seppeku contract is being called off. I have had it with all you're threats no more." Ranma threw the broken blade at her feet, "with no seppeku blade that means no death and we can all live happier. (At this point Genma actually put a smile on his face which Nodoka quickly shot down) Nodoka's tears quickly turned to anger.
"Ranma how dare you destroy my family's air loom, and break our contract." Nodoka furiously stood and walked menacingly towards Ranma. "However you have found a hole in the contract and I must bow down for now but Ranma you have angered you're mother do not think that you're deed will go unpunished." With that Nodoka walked out the door
Akane came down "Ranma you made her pretty mad, I wonder what she is going to do to you?"
"Akane, I cornered her there's nothing she can do to me."
"Ranma my boy" Genma stood and began to speak "You have no idea what you're mother is capable of.
"Aww pops she can't do nothin' to me" Ranma's old speech patterns quickly set back in "I'm going to put my room back to the way it was before my mom went insane."
Nodoka was about two blocks away from the Tendo's when inspiration struck her yes Ranma was going to suffer and suffer big time she began to make her way to the Cat Café.
Cologne was sweeping up when she saw the tall ominous figure of an angry woman in the door way, it was Nodoka as Cologne could recall that was her Son-in-Law's mother.
"You are Cologne correct?" Nodoka asked (Shampoo's making a delivery)
"Yes and you are Nodoka, Am I correct?" Cologne eyed her curiously "What is it that you want."
"I have come concerning a special artifact, The Pail of Preservation."
Cologne smirked "So my Son-in-Law is causing a bit of trouble in the Tendo household. Well you're in luck I just recently borrowed the Pail from the Musk to punish a certain duck." She looked in the corner where mousse sat in a cage sulking in the corner. "You can borrow it but Son-in-Law will not like it, and most likely hate you."
Nodoka closed her eyes "Yes I know."
"Right well" Nodoka grabbed the Pail of Preservation "I'll be off "
Night had set and Nodoka had yet to return which made Ranma all the happier a huge bonfire was going on in the back as Ranma savagely danced around it throwing in his girl stuff. He didn't know if it was the fumes from the makeup burning or the joy of being male that made him feel so relaxed but all he knew right now was that he waqs on top of the world (Which as we all know is a VERY bad sign) which is just that.
After a long night of savagery and dancing Ranma decided to take a much wanted shower in male form a shower with HOT water it never felt so good.
After the wonderful shower Ranma slipped on his recently bought boxer's (he couldn't find his old clothes) and went to bed.
Nodoka slipped in the Tendo household around midnight it was amazing how easy it was to sneak into the Home she is going to have to suggest better security to Mr. Tendo when the time came. She sneaked to Ranma's room, Pail in hand when she opened the door anger began to flood over her again everything was back to the way it was all of her money had just gone down the drain she clenched the ancient wood of the pail so hard that it almost cracked.
Nodoka slowly poured cold water over Ranma and then the Pail it was amazing how unmoving Ranma was when water was being poured on her.
Ranma slightly shifted in her sleep to make room for her newly acquired breast and began to snore.
Ranma yawned as she awoke and then slowly began to realize that she was a She (does that make since o.0) at first her immediate thought was Nabiki and a late night photo shoot but she quickly passed that thought /Nabiki had made a hefty profit from these past few nights of Ranma in a night gown. That's when Ranma saw the little cartoon drawing of Nodoka sticking out her tongue at Ranma She could be very childish. Regardless Ranma simply went to the bathroom and turned on the hot water.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" Ranma quickly ran To her mothers room naked and barged through the door. "What have you done! I can't change back!"
Nodoka sat up "Well dear it wouldn't be called the Pail of Preservation if it didn't freeze you're current form."
"Mom how dare you… I am so mad"
"I said you would be punished Ranma and I meant it." Nodoka interrupted
Akane, Nabiki, Kasumi, Soun and Genma all walked in.
"What's going on?" Asked a weary and also agitated Akane
"Nothing dear but Ranma will be a girl much longer now, in fact until I say other whys you must all address him and her and any reference will result in a immediate punishment."
The Five Gulped "Okay Mrs. Saotome"
Nodoka turned to Ranma "From now on it is going to be much harsher"
to be continued
Authors notes: alright once again I am sorry for not updating for a LONG time but I will get back in the groove of doing so I have the next 2-3 chapters figured out so no more suggesting anything please BUT if you do want to help me then go here h t t p / w w w . n e o p e t s . c o m / r e f e r . p h t m l ? u s e r n a m e m a k i o c h a n w/out spaces and create a new account you are welcome to mail me there to. I will update as soon as I get at least 8 referalls - ok so while I was away I found a new fun manga similar to Ranma called futaba-kun change I really like this manga an think you will to well this is makio signing off R&R