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Title: Why I Still Love You
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure
Summary: Someone is out to kill Jack but no one knows whom. Anamaria has given up on loving Jack and has fallen for Thomas. Jack hates Thomas and has ended up fallen for Anamaria. Who's the killer? Why won't Jack tell Anamaria the L-word?
Here goes ...
The man led Anamaria to the deck as if he has been on the Black Pearl before. She was surprised he didn't step on the loose floorboard that fell ten feet below deck. Only a crewmate would have known this. He was also very gentle as to not hurt her like he had promised. He smelled sweet, like French vanilla. Anamaria would not let him hurt Jack. She searched her waist that she usually kept her cutlass but, Anamaria was defeated, her sword was in her cabin.
The man was on deck now searching for Jack. The crewmembers took out their swords.
"Down" The man said.
The crewmembers dropped their weapons. They were stupid, but not stupid enough to put a crewmate in danger. The man held Anamaria close with his blade and slid away all their weapons. Jack Sparrow just walked on board. "I waz wondering-oh- hey" he said talking to himself not noticing what was happening until he turned around to look at his crew. His eyes grew wide when he saw what was happening. His legs shacked and he dropped his rum bottle, glass shattering everywhere.
He looked at Anamaria and gabbed his sword. The man pushed the blade closer to her throat.
"Tsk, Tsk, Tsk" The man began "you haven't changed one bit". Jack went to reach for his pistol but Anamaria told him no.
"What da ya want Ricky?" Jack glared praying to god this wouldn't get out of hand.
"What else would I want, ya scallywag" Ricky spat getting aggravated.
Anamaria tried to pull away. "Jack knew him?" She thought glaring at Jack.
"I want revenge for my glorious Captain- Ricky was cut off by Anamaria's reply.
"That thieving, baby killing, scallywag, womanizing, disgusting, son of a –
"Don't go their luv, he's already mad" Jack said his hand caressing his pistol waiting for the right moment.
"No, it's okay" Ricky said, "Feisty little thing are you" he whispered to Anamaria. "They are always the pretty ones". Ricky kisses her cheek. Jack wanted to shoot him but Gibbs held him back. Anamaria spat in Ricky's face.
"That's my girl" Jack thought.
"Too bad she'll have to die" said Ricky wiping his face where Anamaria spat and pushing the blade closer to her throat.
"NO!!" yelled Jack again being held back by Gibbs. Anamaria puts her hands in her pocket searching for her pocketknife.
"But" Ricky began enjoying The Great infamous Jack fear him "that is if "you" take her place" he says caressing Anamaria's face "It would be shame to kill such a beauty" he smiled at Jack loving how his comment made Jack squirm.
Anamaria took her blade in one quick motion. She bit Ricky's hand and cut his forehead. Ricky yelped gabbing his forehead and his bitten finger. Jack pulled out his pistol and started opening fire at Ricky. Ricky was shot in his shoulder, but managed to get away jumping overboard in to the Caribbean waters. Jack looked overboard to see Ricky fall in the water. "If I don't get 'em the damn sharks will"
"Loose cannon, can't seem to see that Barbossa's DEAD" he turned around "Right, luv?"
Jack looked around the deck but Anamaria was gone.
"Bloody hell" he thought and went on looking for her.
"Anamaria! Anamaria?" he called out. Anamaria was fixing a sail but ignored Jack' as he called out her name, He found her and frowned.
"Yes capt'in" she replied dryly.
"Just want ta know if ye is okay?" Jack said grinning.
Anamaria could feel the heat rushing over her. How dare he not tell her.
"Who da hell was that-Jack?" she said looking at him as he stood his face blank.
Jack's conscious was getting the best of him: "I could lie," thought Jack. He touched his jaw where Anamaria last slapped him "better not he thought.
"Ricky T. Spinex" Jack said "one of Barbossa's loyal crewmembers.
"Oh" she said flatly. She knew the answer she just wanted Jack to say so. They agreed that they would not keep secrets from each other. Jack picked up a bag.
"Dumb scallywag" Anamaria mumbled.
"What was that? Luv?" Jack said searching through the bag.
"Oh! What's in the bag?" Anamaria said off guard.
"Maps-were going to Togua our members are getting small from battles we need a bigger crew" Jack said still searching through the bag.
"Shouldn't we ya know wait a while, an attacker tried to kill you-me an-I don't know Jack" she said trying her hair away from her face trying to think "it's not safe"
"Ana, luv everything is gonna be alright, this I assure you" Jack laid down all the maps on the table.
"I don't know Jack," she said pacing back and forth.
Jack put his hands on her shoulders "Anamaria" she looked into those chocolate eyes she would never have trying hard not to fall in love with him again she looked away "Anamaria" she smiled "We'll be fine" Jack grinned
"Fine?"
"Fine" she said with a smirk.
For three hours they sailed the sea getting closer to Togua. Anamaria felt awkward with Jack under her eye all the time. Yet in a way she like it. But, she that they could only be just friends and she left it at that.
Hey there glad to see you've read it till this far. I love you all.
Savvy-Rum-Drinker-I don't know about torture but how about jealousy eh- eh? Thanks for reviewing.
Captainme- I am thinking about explaining more for chapter three. Keep looking forward toward dat.
I love the Caribbeans ST. Thomas ...(
Title: Why I Still Love You
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure
Summary: Someone is out to kill Jack but no one knows whom. Anamaria has given up on loving Jack and has fallen for Thomas. Jack hates Thomas and has ended up fallen for Anamaria. Who's the killer? Why won't Jack tell Anamaria the L-word?
Here goes ...
The man led Anamaria to the deck as if he has been on the Black Pearl before. She was surprised he didn't step on the loose floorboard that fell ten feet below deck. Only a crewmate would have known this. He was also very gentle as to not hurt her like he had promised. He smelled sweet, like French vanilla. Anamaria would not let him hurt Jack. She searched her waist that she usually kept her cutlass but, Anamaria was defeated, her sword was in her cabin.
The man was on deck now searching for Jack. The crewmembers took out their swords.
"Down" The man said.
The crewmembers dropped their weapons. They were stupid, but not stupid enough to put a crewmate in danger. The man held Anamaria close with his blade and slid away all their weapons. Jack Sparrow just walked on board. "I waz wondering-oh- hey" he said talking to himself not noticing what was happening until he turned around to look at his crew. His eyes grew wide when he saw what was happening. His legs shacked and he dropped his rum bottle, glass shattering everywhere.
He looked at Anamaria and gabbed his sword. The man pushed the blade closer to her throat.
"Tsk, Tsk, Tsk" The man began "you haven't changed one bit". Jack went to reach for his pistol but Anamaria told him no.
"What da ya want Ricky?" Jack glared praying to god this wouldn't get out of hand.
"What else would I want, ya scallywag" Ricky spat getting aggravated.
Anamaria tried to pull away. "Jack knew him?" She thought glaring at Jack.
"I want revenge for my glorious Captain- Ricky was cut off by Anamaria's reply.
"That thieving, baby killing, scallywag, womanizing, disgusting, son of a –
"Don't go their luv, he's already mad" Jack said his hand caressing his pistol waiting for the right moment.
"No, it's okay" Ricky said, "Feisty little thing are you" he whispered to Anamaria. "They are always the pretty ones". Ricky kisses her cheek. Jack wanted to shoot him but Gibbs held him back. Anamaria spat in Ricky's face.
"That's my girl" Jack thought.
"Too bad she'll have to die" said Ricky wiping his face where Anamaria spat and pushing the blade closer to her throat.
"NO!!" yelled Jack again being held back by Gibbs. Anamaria puts her hands in her pocket searching for her pocketknife.
"But" Ricky began enjoying The Great infamous Jack fear him "that is if "you" take her place" he says caressing Anamaria's face "It would be shame to kill such a beauty" he smiled at Jack loving how his comment made Jack squirm.
Anamaria took her blade in one quick motion. She bit Ricky's hand and cut his forehead. Ricky yelped gabbing his forehead and his bitten finger. Jack pulled out his pistol and started opening fire at Ricky. Ricky was shot in his shoulder, but managed to get away jumping overboard in to the Caribbean waters. Jack looked overboard to see Ricky fall in the water. "If I don't get 'em the damn sharks will"
"Loose cannon, can't seem to see that Barbossa's DEAD" he turned around "Right, luv?"
Jack looked around the deck but Anamaria was gone.
"Bloody hell" he thought and went on looking for her.
"Anamaria! Anamaria?" he called out. Anamaria was fixing a sail but ignored Jack' as he called out her name, He found her and frowned.
"Yes capt'in" she replied dryly.
"Just want ta know if ye is okay?" Jack said grinning.
Anamaria could feel the heat rushing over her. How dare he not tell her.
"Who da hell was that-Jack?" she said looking at him as he stood his face blank.
Jack's conscious was getting the best of him: "I could lie," thought Jack. He touched his jaw where Anamaria last slapped him "better not he thought.
"Ricky T. Spinex" Jack said "one of Barbossa's loyal crewmembers.
"Oh" she said flatly. She knew the answer she just wanted Jack to say so. They agreed that they would not keep secrets from each other. Jack picked up a bag.
"Dumb scallywag" Anamaria mumbled.
"What was that? Luv?" Jack said searching through the bag.
"Oh! What's in the bag?" Anamaria said off guard.
"Maps-were going to Togua our members are getting small from battles we need a bigger crew" Jack said still searching through the bag.
"Shouldn't we ya know wait a while, an attacker tried to kill you-me an-I don't know Jack" she said trying her hair away from her face trying to think "it's not safe"
"Ana, luv everything is gonna be alright, this I assure you" Jack laid down all the maps on the table.
"I don't know Jack," she said pacing back and forth.
Jack put his hands on her shoulders "Anamaria" she looked into those chocolate eyes she would never have trying hard not to fall in love with him again she looked away "Anamaria" she smiled "We'll be fine" Jack grinned
"Fine?"
"Fine" she said with a smirk.
For three hours they sailed the sea getting closer to Togua. Anamaria felt awkward with Jack under her eye all the time. Yet in a way she like it. But, she that they could only be just friends and she left it at that.
Hey there glad to see you've read it till this far. I love you all.
Savvy-Rum-Drinker-I don't know about torture but how about jealousy eh- eh? Thanks for reviewing.
Captainme- I am thinking about explaining more for chapter three. Keep looking forward toward dat.
I love the Caribbeans ST. Thomas ...(