Reviews:
WeaselChick – thanks, and yeah, you kinda can tell…
Moon Comix – Thanks! And yes, I know there is no Cyborg yet… but be patient, he's coming(probably next chapter)!
Child of a Pineapple – Yes, symbolic dreams! I love putting them in my stories (as anyone who has read my original story The Broken Mirror obviously knows). AND THE EAGLE WAS GREEN! I did that cuz a lot of people complained about Gar not being green, so I made the eagle green!
BlackGothFaerie- Yeah, that's Robin. I'm glad you like the story. Haha your music must be really loud then. My brother just yells me at when I have it soft… grr. And the song at the beginning was To the Moon and back by Savage Garden. And yes, the voices. I think we all have them. Yeah, BB's room looks like my brothers, except my brother just gave away his drums (grrr I wanted to learn how to play them). And yes, I love Counting Crows to! And yes, I know that Robin shouldn't have read her poetry. That's why I made him read it. And yes, Good Charlotte rocks! Yes! He saved her! Sister Hazel sings "Alternative" (according to Itunes) but they're really good. And yes, he bought her a CD.
Sorry this chapter is kinda short. I promise the next will be longer! Enjoy! Keep reviewing please!
The Coffee Shop - Chapter 9
Where, your boyfriends house?
She was standing in the middle of nowhere. There was nothing around her. Just blackness. She saw Richard's face. She saw Raven standing next to her. They were gone.
She was standing by a river. Looking into it, screaming at something. Raven was on the other side. In the middle, on a rock, being slowly pushed away by the water, was Richard.
"Richard!" she screamed to him, throwing a rope in the water. "Take the rope!"
She saw that Raven was doing the same thing. He started to reach towards Raven.
"No! Don't trust her! She doesn't understand! She won't save you! I will! Trust me! She doesn't love you. Not like I…" she screamed. But he had swam towards Raven and missed the rope.
He was being pushed down the river.
"Richard! No!"
He was falling over the edge of the waterfall.
"RICHARD!"
"Wakey, wakey, eggs and bakey!" Candy called, leaning over Tara. Tara woke up, panting. "Breakfast is ready."
"I'm not hungry," Tara said. "I have somewhere to be."
"Where?" Candy asked. "You're…"
"Boyfriends house?" Taffy finished for her, walking into Tara's room.
"I don't have a boyfriend," Tara said, defensively.
"Oh, well then who's Richard?" Taffy asked.
"How do you know about Richard?"
"You learn a lot when you listen to your screams at nighttime." Candy explained.
"'Richard, oh Richard, I'll save you!'" Taffy mocked.
"Shut up." Said Tara, getting out of bed. "And get out of my room."
"No, we don't think we will…" Candy said.
"'Cause torturing you is too much fun!" Taffy finished.
The twins burst out laughing. Tara shoved them out the door and changed into a pair of jeans and a yellow hoodie. She walked out the door, down the steps, and out the front door. She hopped into her car, and drove off.
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RING RING! RING RING! The phone rang. Raven ran into the kitchen to pick it up.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Um… hi, is this Raven?" said the familiar voice of Gar Logan.
"Yeah,"
"Hey Raven, this is Gar."
"I figured."
"Um…. I was wondering if maybe you wanted to…" he mumbled the rest of the sentence.
"I'm sorry, what was that?" she asked.
"Do you want to go to the Sister Hazel concert with me?" he said, softly. "I have two tickets, 'cause me and my mom were gonna go, but she's in Africa. And I thought 'Who better to ask than one of my friends that I already know likes Sister Hazel?'"
"Um… sure, when is it?"
"July 20,"
"Okay, thanks for inviting me. Talk to you on Monday." She said.
"'Bye,"
The hung up, simultaneously.