Oh my God you guys, I am so sorry, I haven't updated in a month, but I've been bogged down with school, and all the free time I have is taken up with dance and other stuff. But here it is, at last, and I hope you like it. I promise I will update the next chapter MUCH quicker. Will you EVER forgive me?REMEMBER: 100th reviewer gets a walk-on role in the story, so email me at if you get my 100th review! (i was at 89 before i posted this chapter)

Reviews:

Teenyugiohpotterphantom – Actually, it's CyxJinx, but it's gonna be BeexSpeedy, sorry to disappoint. Thanks!

Terra Rock – No, you haven't reviewed, but that's okay. I'm glad you like it!

WeaselChick – nice job! Slade'll be in soon. I know how I'm gonna put him. As soon as the shop opens up again. It's gonna be awesome. Glad you like Bee in it!

Glean-tastic – my friend actually found out Bee's real name for me.

Aznka – yeah bumblebee is here, and as I said to WeaselChick, Slade'll be in soon. I know how I'm gonna put him. As soon as the shop opens up again. It's gonna be awesome.

Roseweasleygamgee – yeah I know it's a compliment and I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to write longer chapters, but these things come in shorter bursts for me. I'll try harder though.

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The Coffee Shop – Chapter 14

Africa?

Raven picked up the phone, and slowly, cautiously dialed the number.

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"Hello?" said Murray's familiar voice, which still had a saddened tone.

"Murray? Its Raven. Can I talk to Gar?"

"Sure, hold on a second." Raven heard him softly yell, "Gar, the phone's for you. Its Raven."

"Raven?" Gar said, in disbelief.

"Gar, where are you guys? Why is there no work?"

"I'm in Africa."

"Africa?" Raven seemed confused.

"Yeah. Zaire, Africa." Even when stating the seemingly obvious, he sounded as if he was about to burst into tears any second.

"Why are you in Zaire?" This was all just too confusing for Raven.

"Raven, swear to me you won't tell a soul."

"I swear,"

"My parents, who were here in Zaire studying, went on a boat trip. Their boat hit some rapids and… and…" his voice cracked with the start of tears, "their boat went over the side of the waterfall. King Tawaba, the king of the village they were staying with, contacted us immediately, so we came here for the funeral."

"Oh my God, I'm so sorry…"

"Listen, Raven, I've got to go. King Tawaba wants to talk to me. I'll see you when we get back, okay?"

"Mkay."

"Bye." Gar hung up the phone.