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This is from Susan's point of view.

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Section 3: Susan

It felt so good to be together and safe again, just the four of us. Peter, Lucy, Me, and Edmund…Edmund?

"Where's Edmund?" Peter's face darkened and I became puzzled. What had Edmund done now? Had he…is Peter crying? Yes, he is. Then that would mean that…NO! NO, not my little brother! I wanted to scream, but Peter and Lucy took off running, so I had no choice but to follow.

Edmund can't be dead, there's no way. Little thirteen year old boys don't die, right? Right. No, no that's not right. But my little brother doesn't die, it's impossible. He's just a little kid.

Oh, I knew we should have left when we first got here, then Edmund wouldn't be dying or even worse, already dead. Oh, please, don't let my little brother die, I love him so much!

I remember when he was nine and he asked me what I would do if he died. And do you know what I did, I…I laughed. I laughed and told him that that was a silly question. He frowned and walked away and I just sat there and went back to my schoolwork. And here it is happening. I think I might burst.

Oh, Gosh, I can see him now; he's deathly pale and coughing. His armor is too tight and…is that blood? The grass is covered in his blood. (A/N: I know that wasn't in the movie, but oh well, I thought it added a nice touch.) My sweet little brother, what has that horrible witch done to you?

I take his head in my lap and undo his helmet. Please, Edmund you have to stay with us, you just have to. If I could turn back-time I would and I would make sure we never even played hide-and-seek. Please Eddy, open those beautiful eyes of yours, at least give us some sort of sign that you're alive besides those raspy coughs. Come on Ed, I'm begging you; just tell me that everything will be alright.

I can feel tears coming from my eyes, but I don't care, they can come in waterfalls and it wouldn't matter. Hold on Eddy, Lucy is going to give you her healing drink and then you will be all better, alright?

That's it Ed, swallow. Oh, please live, please speak to us, we need you. Yes, that's it, open your eyes and look around, we're right here.

Oh, Peter he knows that you're sorry, but I know that your hug just made his day.

"When will you ever learn to do as you're told?" (A/N: Thanx to JainaSolo18 for telling me what he really said.) My older brother's voice is choked and happy.

You should know the answer to that, Peter. He will never learn, but that's what makes Edmund, Edmund. As Lucy and I melt into the hug, I can only wish that the feeling of completeness that I have right now will last forever and in a way, I know my wish has been granted.


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