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Starts right when the witch stabs Eddy.
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Section 4: Peter
"EDMUND!" My little brother just saved my life at the cost of his own. I'm going to KILL that witch, I'll KILL her.
All time around me just seems to stop into a rhythmic pattern.
Leap, run, jump, stab, kill
Leap, run, jump, stab, kill
Leap, run, jump, stab, kill
These creatures are siding with the monster that hurt my little brother and I'll KILL them for it. Ah, there she is. I clean my sword, and now the real fight begins. A new pattern is set.
Swing, dodge, jump, swing
Swing, dodge, jump, swing
Swing, dodge, jump, swing
Swing, dodge …fall, fall, fall
I am down. The witch is going to kill me like she has so many others. The sword keeps coming, down, down, it falls in slow motion. Until…nothing, a giant roar. Like that of a lion. ASLAN! He saved me, just like Edmund did. The White Witch is dead, but how many others are in her present condition? I cannot bear to even imagine.
It's over, it's finally over. I think I just might fall asleep right here on the ground, but here come Susan and Lucy. Oh, thank Heaven they're okay, I don't know what I would do if they had ended up like…
"Where's Edmund?" Hurt, injured, wounded, dying… dead? NO! PLEASE NO! The other two are staring at me, but I don't care, my little brother needs me. I vaguely feel myself running with Lucy and Susan hot on my trails.
No, no, no! He can't be dead. He's only thirteen; much too young to die. Please Eddy, don't leave us, we need you more than you could ever imagine.
I remember when he asked Susan what she would do if he died, yes I over heard him. At the time, I don't think I thought much of it, but now, it's actually happening. Did he know something like this was going to happen? Probably not, but then why did he ask it? Was he planning something? Yes, yes he was.
I remember when he fell out of that big oak tree that very same day. Had he planned on dying? Yes, I do believe he did. But, why? Why would a nine year old boy want to commit suicide? Was he unhappy, was he scared, or did he feel like we wouldn't care and that everyone would be happy if he died? Well, if that was the case, then he was so wrong. Mum was in hysterics, Susan, was flipping out, Lucy was scared, Dad couldn't have gotten help any quicker, and I…I felt broken. He had me so scared that day. I thought I would die if he did, and I have the same feeling right now.
Didn't I tell him to retreat to safety, but no, he had to go and save me. What was he thinking? If he hadn't gone and saved me then he would be okay. So what if I died, at least he would be alright. Oh, this is all my fault; everything is my fault. If only I had been paying attention, then he wouldn't be in the state that he's in. If I had only been a better big brother to him, then he wouldn't have fallen into the White Witches clutches. If only I had listened to Susan, then we wouldn't even be in Narnia. It's all my fault. Oh, Eddy, what have I done?
Oh man, is that really my baby brother? He looks so cold and frail and he's coughing and gasping for air in that large puddle of his own blood. Please let my little brother live, we need him. Please hold on, Ed; don't die on us like Aunt Monica.
Lucy's seems to have remembered her cordial, thank all our lucky stars. Just one drop Lu and Ed will be feeling better in no time. Oh please work, if Edmund dies, I'll never forgive myself. Well, at least he's stopped coughing now, but he's not moving. Oh, Eddy, don't die, YOU CAN'T DIE!WE LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! Please…just open your eyes and let us know that you're all right!
I hear him groan and a sudden flicker of hope swells up inside me. Is he…? Yes, yes, HE'S ALIVE! He sits up with a groan and I can fell tears in my eyes. I can't hold it back any longer, so I grab him gently by the shoulders and I pull him into one of the biggest hugs I've ever given him. I am so sorry Edmund and I love you so much! But…
"When will you ever learn to do as you're told?" My voice is choked with happiness. I already knew that he would never learn, but I love him anyway. Lucy and Susan join in the hug and for the first time, I feel like a we're a real family. Nothing can break us apart not even death. I love you Edmund, don't you ever, ever forget that.
And there you have it! PLEASE REVIEW! NO FLAMES! Here are the summaries for my three other Narnia stories that have yet to be posted.
That Little Detail- AU: Somehow, the Pevensie children's parents and friends, along with some classmates are transported to Narnia with the kids where they find out Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy's secret. Unfortunately, upon their entrance, a war is on the verge as Iclea, the Snow Witch and the White Witch's secret daughter, tries to take over Narnia, Archenland, and Calormen. The Pevensie children seem to have left out a small little detail about them selves.
Key Points:
The Royal Children are immortal and will FOREVER rule over Narnia
The royal kids cannot return to the "real world"
Time glitch- As soon as the royal children left, the time there in Narnia became synchronized with the "real world" time
The royal children have an age cycle. Peter: begins- age 17, ends- age 28; Susan: begins- age 15, ends- age 26; Edmund: begins- age 13, ends- age 24; Lucy: begins- age 9, ends-age 20. When the cycle ends they revert back to the BEGINNING OF THEIR CYCLE!
Non-Narnian Characters:
Parents- Helen Pevensie
Colin Pevensie
Friends- Peter's: Dale Macoby
Charlie Dalton
Susan's: Jenna Tumsen
Ashleigh Verity
Edmund's: Gary Sholts
Jeff Colbalt
Lucy's: Wendy Pembrook
Honey Sislar
Schoolmates and teachers: Madam Jaline Crosner
Talulla Sibrone
Adam Richter
Simon Lighner
Timothy Jartin
Madam Kristen Brosil
James Grant
Maria Jones
Alexander Roth
Julia Smith
Madam Diane Sibrosci
Caroline Eros
Thomas Lorince
Jillian Tenros
Daniel Richards
Mister Gerald Tanny
Roger Samson
Cassidy Emerson
Eliot Jantel
Melina Saberscen
Impossible- Very similar to That Little Detail only the children can come and go as they please between Narnia and Earth. The royal children start getting strange threats from an unknown enemy who soon starts terrorizing Narnia and EARTH!
Same non-Narnian characters from That Little Detail
The children are still immortal and they will still rule Narnia FOREVER
The time glitch is the same
Right By Your Side- What if Edmund didn't betray his family to the White Witch, but was instead kidnapped by her? He is torture daily, both physically and mentally. When or if he is returned to his family, will the abuse have been too much for him?
Starts right after meeting the Beavers
The children can't die, unless they are killed IN A REAL WAR OR FOR THE CAUSE OF WAR!
The children stay in Narnia and rule FOREVER, whether Edmund lives or dies
Lots of tear jerking moments; some just Edmund abuse, some of the other three children thinking of Edmund, or some family moments (I'm a Drama Queen)
Lucy's cordial doesn't work on Edmund's wounds