Hey. I finally have out chapter 3. Than k you for all of the wonderful reviews!
chapter 3
the next day
John knocks on Aelitas door
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
"Who is it?"
"It's John."
"Oh, common in."
"Good morning"a young boy named John says to Aelita
"Good morning to you also"Aelita says happily
"Do you want to go with me tonight."
"Where are you taking me?"
"You'll see" John said evilly, it gave Aelita shivers
"I am going to check on Jeremie."Aelita said for she was worried about him
"NO, I mean um ok."John said and then turns the conner. John turns invisible and rushed to Jeremie's room before Aelita got there
Jeremie was sitting down trying to think about something else besides Aelita and his fight.
"Hello Jeremie, I need to have a talk with you"John laughs and locks jeremie's door.
"About what"
"Aelita"
"What about her, hey if you are going to go and do something to her."Jeremie said very afraid of what he might do to Aelita
"No, nothing to do with Aelita, it has to do with you."
"Me? What did I do"
"It's not what you did, It's what you are going to do."John said , pulling out a knife with his hands.
There was a knock on the door. It was Aelita. John Takes Jeremie and opens a portal and throws Jeremie in there. He shuts the portal and transforms into a clone of Jeremie. Then he rushes and unlocks the door. He sits down on the bed like he found Jeremie and hides the knife.
"Jeremie" Aelita said sweetly"May I come in"
"Fine the door in unlocked"the evil clone said
Aelita steps in at looks at the clone.
"I am sorry about what happened the other day, I was over reacting. I didn't mean to get all angry like that, it's just you, it's just I"Aelita became speechless
"I am just so sorry"
"GET OUT OF MY ROOM, YOU BROKE MY HEART AND NOW YOU WANT TO APOLOGIZE!"
tears started to form in
Aelita glares up at Jeremie and there was something different in his eyes.
"HEY, YOUR NOT JEREMIE!"
"I never knew you where this smart."The clone says and transforms into his normal state.
"John!"Aelita said shocked
"I am not John, I am clone 352"
"Whatever your are I don't care! Where's Jeremie!"Aelita screamed
Clone 352 grabs Aelita and tie her to a chair. He taps her mouth shut and says." Aelita, Lets say he is in a happier place. You won't have to worry about him, you will ahve your heart stolen by someone else."
Clone 352 grabs the chair that Aelita sits in and steps into the same portal that he threw Jeremie in. They appear in a dark eerie place. Aelita sees Jeremie held by two guards.
"let him go!"Aelita shouts after she got the tap offer her mouth.
"Aelita!" Jeremie screams with joy!
"I am so sorry" Aelita said with tears coming ut of her eyes"I love you!"
"I love you to, and it's my" Jeremie was interrupted
"Jeremie, Aelita, welcome. says a dark, eerie voice as X.A.N.A appears from the shadows.
"I bet you all would like to know what is going on here,
"Why did you kidnap us!"Jeremie shouts
"I am going to kill you Jeremie, well depending on Aelita, Aelita will have a more fitting home"
"What are you to do with her"Jeremie screams in rage
X.A.N.A makes a hand motion to bring Aelita next to him. He picks up her chin and says"she will be my wife"X.A.N.A starts to laughs and Aelita pulls away.
"What is i say I don't" Aelita asks Aelita
"Jeremie will die":
"Now will you marry me Aelita Hopper"
With tears in sadness in her eyes she accept the ring that was given to her.
"Take my soon to be wife to the dressing room.
Clone 352 grabs Aelita and takes her to the dressing room
"Now for you Jeremie, let him be my best man. He will be able to see the kiss.Set up now people.We have a wedding to go to"
Will Aelita go through marring X.A.N.A or would she stop and risk Jeremie's life.
Well that's all for chapter 3,I left with a cliffy. I like them. PLEASE REVIEW(or i won't post the next chapter)