His Angel
This is my first fanfic, please don't be too harsh on me! I must warn you the prologue is rather boring, I promise the actuall first chapter will be somewhat better. Please review, and be honest about it. Any suggestions for the story are appreciated.
Prologue
It was prophesied many moons ago that a strange nigen girl would grace the feudal lands with her presence.
Her strange ways and odd customs would baffle all that met her. Men lusted after her, women envied her. Rumors foretold that she was the reincarnate of the Priestess Kikyou. As with many rumors, this was a lie. This young girl, this 'Kagome' as she was called was one of the last descendants of the legendary Miko, Midorkio. Midorkio had said that her greatest and most powerful descendent would save all of Japan from an eternal darkness and one apparent 'un-savable' inhabitant.
No one has been able to conclude who this inhabitant is, or if this 'Kagome' is the descendant of the powerful miko.
Among many things, Medorkio had left a strange object to her village. It was a diamond-shaped jeweled necklace that was said to glow an errie glow sometimes. Even Medorkio did not completely understand what it meant. The jewel was left to her by her mother, and her mother by her mother's mother and so forth. Over the years, many meanings had been lost or forgotten.
Kagome sat happily at the campfire, among her were her companions, Sango, Miroku, Shippou and Kirara. Inuyasha was nowhere to be found. Kagome's hand grasped the strange necklace she had found in a destroyed village just a few days ago. It began to glow a errie blood red. "Hmmm?"
Just then a rustle was heard from the bushes. Inuyasha emerged from them, holding the hand of a certain dead priestess. Proudly he told the confused group that Kikyou would be joining them from now on in the search for the jewel shards, and that she was his mate-to-be. A single tear escaped a struggling Kagome's eye. It ran down her delicate cheek, glistening in the fire-light. "Why Inuyasha?" Was all she could think. She silently stood up and crawled into her sleeping bag.
Sango looked on sadly at her sister, she truly felt bad for Kagome. Inuyasha had done some pretty mean things to Kagome over the years and of all things this. On Kagome's eighteenth moon. Or birthday as Kagome called it.
"I won't cry, I won't cry…" Kagome thought. But telling yourself you will not cry only makes you want to cry. Kagome aloud two or three tears fall before stubbornly closing her emotions. I cold, chilling wind came through, making Inuyasha pull Kikyou to him in attempts to keep her warm.
The necklace began to glow a lighter red, but non the less it was bright. Kagome was to tired to think, so she simply ignored it, and fell into a dreamless sleep.
GAH! Very boring I know, I promise to try and make the next chapter better, and longer. The length of this prolouge was WAY to short! Again, I promise it'll get more interesting and longer. Just gotta get the boring stuff outta the way first. Please review, I'd like at least five before I continue…
--Haley.