here is my first try at a Avatar fanfic... yes i kno i still hav two other stories to finnish but live with it cause im out of ideas for them. ive been reading alot of avatar and been watching it and was dieing to write a fanfic on it so here it is. enjoy!
disclaimer: i dont own avatar the last air bender, never will. but i do own future charaters however (wont reveal them yet... it's a secret')
Chapter 1: portal of time
Fire exploded all around them. Smoke blinded their senses. There was no way to escape. All they wanted to do was run from the fire, but even the gods could not carry them away.
A fist flew at the young air-benders face; he ducked and slid round the side. There was so much smoke he couldn't see his hands let alone his friends, or the fire prince attacking him. He couldn't use his bending to it full power either, if he did then all the troops would see him and they would be captured for sure. He wondered if his friends were already in their clutches. It was unlike Aang to dwell on the future though, especially when that future could be a bad one. Aang jumped over another stream of fire and backed up through the increasing smoke. It was attacking his lungs like the fire-benders were attacking the rest of him. Coughs and chokes pushed their way up his throat and he unwillingly let them out hoarsely through his mouth. The smoke was clearing a little and he could faintly see two silhouettes. One of them was backing away and sending what looked like streams of water from a dark object at their side. That must have been Katara, but the other one was dodging and sending more powerful red blasts at her. One looked like it had caught Katara's arm and the other person stood over her, fist pointing at her face. He heard a scream and everything turned red. It wasn't fire or him losing continuousness, but rage. The air around him began to spin furiously and he was lifted off the ground. The smoke coward at the wind currents strength and flew away into the trees and into the sky. The fire prince's attention diverted to the immeasurable strength of his enemy. He backed away from the girl slowly in shock of the avatars power. Sokka looked over to his friends and starred wide-eyed at them. Aang stepped over Katara and picked her up before shielding himself again and walking towards Sokka. When I suddenly click to the water tribesmen he ran over to them and stepped effortlessly into the windshield. They started to rise again, to escape over the trees. Zuko realised this after braking from his trance and running towards the avatar. Aang gasped in pain as the rush of power became too much for him to control. This time instead of it floating away like mist it picked up creating a great hurricane. Trees were ripped from their roots and dust flew up into sky. All the other soldiers of Zuko's fleet where far away enough to hold on to something, but Zuko got pulled into the ominous force. Light seeped from the eye of the hurricane then it consumed the entire area.
The soldiers stood up and adjusted their eyes to the forest area around them. And it was only around them. They stood in a desolate wasteland caused by the hurricane force. They looked around with gaping mouths. Iroh did the same until a soldier came to him and said, "sir, there is no sign of prince Zuko of the avatar… how can that be? Did they escape?"
All he could assume was that they did and took Zuko with them. After all, what else could have happened? Then he saw a scorch mark on the ground, not caused by fire-benders but by something else. When he moved closer his eyes widened and he fell to his knees. The symbol was one of time travel… one that had not been seen since the dawn of time itself.
i know its not long but it's kinda like an intro... dont think i did the cliffhanger ending much justice but i tried. the other chapies will be longer so plz R&R and i will post the next chapy as soon as i write it (shouldnt be to long i hope) CYA!