Keitaro Levels Up!

Chapter 11: Fight Scene! Takeshi vs. the Unknown Fighter!

Sup, peoples? It'sa me again and this time, it's all about the action!

But first... time to respond to some reviews!

LionHeart5488- Yeah... I guess I can't please everybody. Yeah, my fight scenes suck. That one I wrote in about... ten minutes. No revisions or anything. So yeah, it blows. That's why I'm writing this chapter!

(YAAAAY!)Havenoname- Once again, thankee kindly! Aaaaand... for your continued support and love, GIFT! Tsuruko: -leads you into the back room for... "wrestling"- Anyways, I absolutely LOVE Dragonball Z! I just hope the next part of the series After Fighting (Dragon Ball AF) comes to the US. THEY HAVE SUPER SAIYAN 5 IN IT! -ahem- Thanks for the compliment on the entrance for Kanako. ...To tell you the truth, I was meaning to do it five chapters ago...but I think it worked out well. Oh, and if you like DBZ, you'll LOVE the fight scene in this one. Yeah... the date's over... Sorry. But I'm thinking about having a second date where Takeshi will "make up" for the previous one. Oh, by the way, do you have AIM? We should exchange screennames. Yeah, I'm setting up Kanako to be waaaaaaay scarier than she was ever portrayed. Seriously, being able to imitate ANYONE! That scares the hell outta me. And yeah, I have a few ideas for putting in Tsuruko... I just don't like them. No offense, I'm just not into Keitaro/Tsuruko. But I do agree with you that she's a fine woman. And really, I have no way to show you the MASSIVE amounts of gratitude for all the support. You're a great guy too! Oh, and I want to see Bio Broly SOOOO bad. Woe is the poor anime fan! -cries-

pete0- T'ankee bery much, mon. (I need to stop watching The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy) um... I think you mean 'story'.

Yeah... could anybody out there tell me if responding to reviews are prohibited? And pleeeeease don't fail me like you did when I asked about the Dark Icon Writers.
Takeshi gritted his teeth and faced his attacker, "I still don't understand... What do you want from me!"

His enemy grinned, "I am Ryonoichi. What do I want? I want the awesome power that's coursing through your veins."

The now pissed-off Takeshi glared at him, "My power source is a simple fusion harmonics generator! Same as yours!"

He grinned once more, "Wrong. Your power is a fusion harmonics generator but the material that causes the fusion is a sacred stone that holds the Powers of the Sacred: The Stone of Shamar."

"We are not gods! This power is just machinery! Technology! Powers of the Sacred are beyond the control of mortals!" Takeshi almost pleaded.

Ryonoichi's eyes narrowed as power surged up around him, his eyes changing into the red reticules again. "We shall see..."

Takeshi readied himself and powered up his wings, their rainbow incandesence burning in anticipation.

They charged at each other at full speed, battle cries echoing across the water. Suddenly, Takeshi twitched and Ryonoichi flew right past him into a street lamp. He flipped around, a red imprint on his face, "What kind of game are you playing!"

Takeshi spun around and grinned, "Come and get me." He turned and flew away in an explosive flash of light.

The aggressor charges after him, a comet's tail of red energy streaking behind him.

Mutsumi looked arund the now-empty restaurant, "Hmm... I wonder where Kei-kun is... Oh well! At least now I don't have to pay the check.. Fu fu fu fu..."

She slipped out, not knowing the gravity of the conflict around her... again.

Takeshi sped on with Ryonoichi on his tail and blazing mad. Takeshi kept glancing back worriedly as he slowly gained and their speeds neared supersonic. They spun around in a never-ending barrage of energy attacks and dealy blows until they broke away and flew at each other again to start the dance all over. Neither seemed to be getting the other hand, until Ryonoichi broke the rhythm and hurtled Takeshi to the ocean.

Takeshi hit the water hard and slipped below the surface, air bubbles floating upwards.

Ryonoichi hovered above, waiting. "Come now! That can't be ALL you're capable of!" he yelled down with a cackle.

A geyser spewed from the water and he gasped, the water blocking his vision. His chin suddenly pulled the rest of his body far up into the air and was smashed down into the water himself.

Takeshi wiped a trickle of blood off his lip. "Heh," was his only reply.

Ryo slowly ascended from the waves, his hair damp and sticking to his flushed face. "Not bad..."

Takeshi's smirk was short-lived as a sudden explosion through him backwards into the clouds.

The grin on the other combatant's face was wide and eerie, his hands smoking from the energy of that last attack.

Keitaro was bewildered as he kept floating up through the clouds. "Hmmm... I didn't know Naru had that good of an arm... GWAAAAH!" he screamed as Ryonoichi rocketed towards him.

He flipped over and activated his rocket feet and tried to do an Astro Boy escape manoeuver... which didn't work.

The now extremely pissed-off Ryonoichi glided below Keitaro with a laser sight over his eye and a weapon resembling a rocket though waaaay more cool screamed, "WHY WON'T YOU DIE!" After which he blasted the ever-loving snot out of him.

Still somewhat not dead, he managed to pull away from the power-crazed Ryo and put all of the power in his rockets towards blasting his way back to Japan. He ground his teeth together, summoning up the will and...

-Back in Hinata-

The girls all sat around the table in silent discussion. Kistune was the first to speak up, "I don't know about you guy, but I say she has no right to make us work our asses off in our own house!"

Motoko tapped her sword against the floor, "As much as I agree with you, Mitsune... She does own the Hinata House... er... Inn now. We have to do what she wants if we don't want to be thrown out..."

Shinobu stuttered in her say, "Um... I d-don't think it'll be so bad... At least we won't be thrown out..."

Su just stuffed a banana in her mouth.

Kitsune tapped her chin in thought, "Well, Motoko-chan... Maybe you're right... But hey," she winked, "Think about all the cute guy that we'll see!"

Shinobu and Motoko blushed beet red and Naru just looked annoyed.

Naru now spoke up, "I dunno... I think something fishy is going on here... I mean, why would should come back at a time like this? You'd think it would make more sense if Keitaro wasn't around..."

Shinobu stood up, "Au... it's almost lunchtime... So I'll go get Kanako and start cooking right after that..." She walked out and the fiery debate continued.

Kanako sat on the floor of Keitaro's room, photos of him and other various possesions of the floor in front of her. Kuro sat outside in front of the door, curled up and asleep.

She looked down at his smiling face in the pictures and staring at them in wonder. She pulled out the only photo of the two of them and glanced longingly at the only true smile she ever had... She put down the photo with the rest of them and started looking through the closet.

She pulled out a box labelled "Keitaro Winter Clothing" and flipped open the flaps. She delicately lifted one of the perfectly folded shirts and closely examined it, her face beginning to redden.

Her onii-chan's wondrous scent wafted up to her nose and she couldn't dare resist wanting more, she slowly lowered her face into the collar as Shinobu slid open the door.

"Uh... Kanako... That's... That's sempai's shirt... But you're his sister. Why would you do that?" she questioned, scared and puzzled.

Kanako stared daggers back at her, "So you saw that, did you?"

-Somewhere else-

Keitaro used up the last of his rocket energy and started gliding towards earth. He could tell he was over some land mass, but his fatigue clouded his vision.

Ryo loomed behind him, waiting to get into firing range again.

Keitaro's altitude kept dropping as Ryo's rocket loaded into the firing chamber. His eye focused in on him and his finger slowly applied pressure on the trigger... until Keitaro's head collided with a tall pine.

He slid down the wood and out of sight in the tall forest. Ryonoichi hovered above it, now supremely ticked off.

Keitaro fell down into a campsite with none other than Seta. He flashed his trademark grin and said, "Hey, Keitaro! Naru send you into the stratosphere again?"

DONE! Well, not quite what I expected but it's a taste of the level of action that's in the upcoming battles. Uh... seriously, Havenoname, you neeeeed to have an AIM screenname. We GOTS to get in touch. So... Ciao for a-now. Oh, and sorry for the shortness. I got lazy.