LOL I'M SOOOOOOO STUPID. THIS IS MY THIRD AND (HOPEFULLY) FINAL TIME REVISING THE STORY.

Plutonian Princess - Chapter 1

OMG I'm so nervous! This is my first fic ever! I haven't even touched this since 2003 when I was about 13. I'm now 15 and decided to edit it cuz it looks soooo sloppy and weird.

"wateva" talking

wateva thoughts

wateva action (mainly while talking or thinking)

Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ or Sailor Moon uu

"PLUTO CRONOS TYPHOON"

"URANUS SPACE SWORD BLASTER"

"NEPTUNE SUBMARINE REFLECTION"

The youma roared and glowed green as it built up its shield, deflecting the attacks with ease. "Nothing's working," Uranus cried. "SILENCE WALL" Saturn cried, and a purple shield came up in front of her to block its counterattack. Who the hell sent this thing She thought to herself.

Flashback

"USAGI STOP HOGGING ALL THE FOOD!" Rei growled, glaring at Usagi. "Aww come on Rei. I'm hungry," was the whiny response. "Can't you wait for Chibi-Usa to come?" she snapped back. "I'm really trying Rei, but she's taking too long,"

Rei was fighting to hold off an anxious and drooling Usagi from Lita's food. The inners all came to the park for a picnic after a long day of school. Usagi decided that instead of their usual trip to the arcade, they should have a picnic at the park. Rei was shocked that she didn't want to go to the arcade; that is, until she realized she was trying to get some of Lita's cooking. The whole gang was there except for Mamoru, who went to pick up Chibi-Usa from school because she was let out of school later than the girls.

Usagi and Rei were making quite a scene. "USAGI SIT DOWN!" "NO I'M HUNGRY!" "CAN'T YOU JUST-" "Hey guys how's it going?" Both girls looked up to see Chiba-Usa walking up to them holding Mamoru's hand. "YAY!" Usagi cried and dove for the basket, taking out around 8 sandwhiches.

The girls laughed while Rei rolled her eyes. "Idiot," she mumbled, but Usagi heard her, and she glared at Rei. "I'M NOT AN IDIOT!"

"YES YOU ARE!"

"NO I'M NOT!"

"YOU ARE!"

"NO!"

"YES!"

"NO!"

They then engaged in another of their famous tongue battles. Everyone laughed at the two, Makoto and Minako betting on who was gonna win. Luna and Artemis just sat there, sweat-dropping at the whole thing.

The group continued to enjoy themselves when there was an explosion on the other side of the park. People ran away from the explosion, screaming and crying "MONSTER!"

The girls all groaned and Mamoru started mumbling. "Of all the days to have to fight," he said. They all nodded in agreement. Getting up, everyone gave each other a look before whipping out their pens. Giving one last look for watchers, they all transformed.

"Mercury Crystal Power"

"Mars Crystal Power"

"Jupiter Crystal Power"

"Venus Crystal Power"

"Moon Prism Power"

"Moon Crystal Power"

"MAKE UP!" they all cried and in a rainbow of colors where a group of teems once stood there was the Inner Sailor Senshi. They all looked over to see Mamoru had already transformed and Chibi-Moon was now contacting the outers.

End Flashback

The senshi have been fighting ever since. The inners were beat and knocked out shortly after the outers arrived, with bruises and deep wounds all over. Sailor Moon was conscious, but very weak from using her strongest attack too many times. Chibi Moon and Tuxedo Kamen were in a similar condition.

The youma was black, with three fingers and toes. It had green armor on its chest, legs, arms, and back that glowed when it put its shield up. It had a long purple tongue with red, glowing eyes and smooth, but slimy skin. It was twice as tall as Tuxedo Kamen, very wide and built all over.

Pluto frowned as she dodged yet another attack. This isn't getting anywhere at all, she thought sadly, and with Ami unconscious, we don't know a weakness There was only one other solution she could think of, and she knew they wouldn't approve of it. I'm sorry my friends… Hime… Small Lady…it's the only solution. We won't be dodges attack able to hold out much longer

With the decision made, Pluto took a few steps back from the battle. She could feel Sailor Moon and Chibi Moon's eyes on her, but ignored them.

"First, the times gates," she whispered as the orb on her staff glowed. She whispered and ancient spell as the door to the time gates appeared, and, whispering another spell, the symbol of Pluto glowed before the doors were sealed shut.

By this time, the youma had stopped its fight with the 3 outers, and was watching Pluto. It headed for her, but reluctantly put up his shield and resumed fighting when Uranus attacked it.

She looked to the two moon princesses and mouthed 'I'm sorry', knowing they wouldn't understand until it was too late.

"TIME," she screamed, "I COMMAND YOU TO STOP!"

Uranus, who was expecting to be hit with an attack, looked up to see the attack stop inches from her face. She raised an eyebrow and looked around. Rocks were floating in mid-air and the monster was glaring with its mouth wide open, though very still. The only ones moving were the scouts. She turned when she heard Chibi-usa scream, and saw Tuxedo Kamen holding Pluto, who was slowly fading.

The inners groaned and woke up to see the monster frozen in its tracks, as well as floating rocks and people in mid run. They stopped and saw Pluto on the floor with the rest of the scouts staring on in shock.

All the scouts gathered around Pluto (the inners managed to drag themselves over). "Why?" Chibi-Moon asked, tears falling down. "There was no other solution," Pluto whispered. "Please Small Lady, don't worry about me, get rid of the youma before time resumes".

Reluctantly leaving Pluto and dragging a screaming Chibi-Moon, the scouts gathered in front of the youma and shouted their attacks:

"MARS FLAME SNIPER"

"VENUS LOVE AND BEAUTY SHOCK"

"MERCURY AQUA RHAPSODY"

"JUPITER OAK EVOLUTION"

"URANUS SPACE SWORD BLASTER"

"NEPTUNE SUBMARINE REFLECTION"

"DOUBLE MOON HEARTACHE"

"TUXEDO THE SMOKING BOMBER" (I'm giving Tuxedo Kamen the attack he had in the manga because I hate how all he could do was throw roses in the Anime)

Time resumed just as the rainbow of attacks hit the youma. The senshi watched as it screamed loudly before he exploded, sending debris everywhere. Standing in front of everyone, Saturn cried "SILENCE WALL" to block the flying debris and protect the rest of the senshi.

"Finally," Usagi mumbled, and sank to her knees. Everyone else quickly followed suit. "HOW THE HELL CAN YOU JUST SIT HERE! WHAT ABOUT PLUTO!" Chibi-Usa screamed and turned to leave, crying. They all frowned and just sat there, exhausted and ashamed.

That's chap. #1! Hope ya liked it! The rest of the chapters will come back after being revised, as well as new chapters, so just sit tight. I still can't believe it's been two years! OMG!