Ptwista: New chappie and the story might be finishing soon!

It felt late in the night. There was no sun or moon to tell the time of day. Small clouds of dirt and dust continued to blow off the ground. The only sound heard was soft breathing and crunching of stones underfoot. They were all in what looked like the Earth's Grand Canyon only much bigger and less appealing. There was no sign of life anywhere, dangerous or not.

The girls and the Martians headed on together in what seemed like complete darkness. The only light on the entire planet were the flickering white lights from the Martians OMABs for the glow of Bianca's suit was fading. Debbie and Teresa and Gabi were in the air keeping a look out. Bianca was on Debbie's shoulders and the Martians rode at a slow pace on their OMABs.

They heard something coming towards them. They all stopped clean. They looked around but saw nothing. The girls flew down. Debbie struggled to hold Bianca up. Then, BANG! A blow stuck her from nowhere. It knocked her to the ground and she squished Bianca in the process, (Bianca: Get off of me!). Debbie rolled over and they both looked up, it was B.Bop. He closed in on them but Teresa blocked his way and yelled, "You want Bianca, you'll have to go through me!"

"No, only one person will die tonight," he said in a menacing tone.

"Yeah, you!" Bianca lunged at him with all her strength and both were sent flying. The girls and Martians rushed over to help but someone trapped them in laser nets. B.Bop hit a nearby cavern with a loud BOOM and clouds of dust thickened around them. The rock crumbled faintly and B.Bop yelled, "BIANCA!"

"B.BOP, WHAT'S GOING ON?"

"IT'S OVER! WE'RE FINISHED!" roared B.Bop.

"He's finally chosen the right path, against you!" yelled a voice.

Everyone twisted their heads and gasped in horror when they saw who it had come from...GABI!

Bianca's was seriously damaged. She was wounded and looked like she was trying as hard as she could to stay on her feet.

"NO! HE'D NEVER TURN ON ME!" yelled Bianca but her voice was becoming weaker.

"B.Bop!" said Gabi, "FINISH HER!"

B.Bop sped towards a mid-fainting Bianca and knocked her off her feet by giving a powerful strike to her chest and an elbow shot to the jaw. They both crashed into a rock wall and a thunderous explosion sounded. Smoke from the explosion filled the air on the asteroid. When the smoke cleared the teams saw a horrible sight, both B.Bop and Bianca lay motionless on the ground.

"No!" screamed Debbie. "WHY?"

Then a blast from a laser hit Gabi in the chest. She fell and then slowly rose, but then she fell again and started glowing red. The light formed a shape of a man. Marc, no longer in a tux but in a gleaming silver battle suit

"MARC! I should've known," said Teresa.

"Too bad. Ya didn't," said Marc smugly

"Ooooohh, if I wasn't chained up..." she said under her breath.

"Marc!" Bianca walked into view while B.Bop still lay on the ground. "You think this is over? I'm not done with you yet!"

"What?" said Marc in shock.

Bianca flew towards him like lighting and the fight began. She hit right, left, right again, left again, she kicked him in the face so hard his head nearly fell off, and a rock hard sock to the stomach knock the wind out of him and sent off to a collision course with ground. Bianca flew down after him. He was almost as injured as Bianca was. His silver suit had quickly gone from gleaming to grubby, face had a black eye, he couldn't feel his arms or his legs, and he couldn't even stand.

Despite all of this, Bianca picked him up by his collar and nearly choking him said, "I'll teach you to mess with me!" She made a fist and prepared for one final hit when something held her back.

"Get away from him," It was B.Bop. He knocked her away and pressed a button on his wrist gauntlet. A beam of light headed for her and she screamed as she glowed and in a split second vanished.

"No!" yelled Do-Wah.

"It can't be!" yelled 2-T.

"What have you done with her?" demanded Teresa.

Both B.Bop and Marc, on his shoulder, went up to them. B.Bop had a laser at the ready. They all closed their eyes and shielded themselves with their hands, preparing for a messy end. They heard the blast fire but...

"Are we dead yet?" whispered Debbie, her hands still over her eyes. She peaked through her fingers, they weren't dead! In fact they were free from the nets!

"Ha, you missed!" she yelled triumphantly.

B.Bop and Marc just smiled at her. Then they started laughing. It echoed through the cavern. The others rose and looked at them confused. Had they gone insane? B.Bop put Marc on the ground and headed toward them.

"Guys, I'm not really under body control," he explained.

"HUH?" said 2-T.

"Look, I broke that hold Marc had over me a long time ago."

"I repeat, HUH?" said 2-T, still confused.

"So, you mean the whole time, you had free will?" said Teresa, just as shocked as 2-T.

"Yep," said B.Bop.

"Well, then, WHY THE HELL DID YOU BLAST BIANCA INTO OBLIVION?" screamed Teresa, furious at him for acting like it was funny.

"Because," said Marc still on the ground. B.Bop headed over to him and pulled him up on his shoulder.

"AND WHY ARE YOU HELPING HIM?" yelled Do-Wah.

"Because," said B.Bop, "This isn't Marc."

"What?" said Debbie.

Marc smiled at them, and then he pressed a button on him gauntlet. He glowed brightly and when the light settled Bianca stood in his place! The girls and the Martians just stood there and gaped.

"Okay, Gabi, you can get up now!" yelled Bianca. Gabi sprung up; "Hmmm?" she scurried over to her and B.Bop. Everyone was still in shock.

"Okay...explanations...NOW," said Teresa breaking the spell of silence.

"Okay, okay," said B.Bop, "I'll admit, this was hard to crack, but I manage—," Bianca cleared her throat loudly. "Alright, if you hadn't tipped me I wouldn't have had a clue."

"CLUE ABOUT WHAT?" said Teresa getting impatient.

"Maybe I can explain," said Bianca. "A few days before this..." "I'd overheard something Gabi was recording in her VIDIA (video diary). That's when I heard of what Marc was going to do. He was going to try to get closer to B.Bop, to test his invention, body controllers, a more "efficient" version of a mind controller to—"

"W-wait... Body controllers? He showed those to me once," said 2-T remembering. Everyone looked in his direction. "The day before winter break, he wanted me to show them to Emperor Bog. But I said no."

"You think he did all this to take revenge?" asked Do-Wah.

"I-I don't know," said 2-T.

"So, how did—" started Debbie then they heard a loud DONG!

"Whoa, Large Lamar! How far are we from home?" said Debbie.

DONG! DONG! DONG! DONG! Large Lamar, the large grandfather clock, struck five times. "Hey! It's five in the morning!" yelled Debbie. "What a rip off! Not only did we miss our prom, graduation is in five hours!"

"What?" groaned Bianca. "Aiii... Uh!"

Ptwista: I might add some more to this chapter, maybe... The chapter's done but the story's not! The sixth and final chapter will be up soon.