Our Days, Your Ways
This is my second fan-fic, but my first Jak & Daxter fic. Be merciful! I hope I can write this one as well as the other on seems to be doing. R&R as everyone says. No more babble right? On with the story right?
Everyone: RIGHT NOW SHUT THE HECK UP!
Disclaimer: this is probably the same as every other story on this site. I DON'T OWN IT, OR ANY OTHER THING EXEPT MY CHARACTERS, PLOT, AND STORYS! So get off my back
Jak walked along the path in sand over village. He was home once more. The only thing that was different since he had been here last was the fact that there were no more evil minions to fight. He had only to fight the one in his heart. He himself had also changed, stronger, taller, more fit, and his feelings. He also was a dark eco freak. In haven city's jail he had been experimented on with dark eco. Now he could turn into dark jak. In the wastelands a monk had given him light eco powers. So he had a regular, light, and dark jak in him. He found his feet moving him unnoticed to Kiera's house. The Green Eco sage lived there too. He was somewhat grumpy and nice to jak. He stopped by the door to her workshop. He looked at her, love evident in his eyes, before turning away. He couldn't do this. With his green hair and blue eyes. His heart said, "Go ahead" but his mind said stop. He knew that his heart led to destiny and fate, and his head lead to reason. What did he want exactly? He sure as heck didn't know.
Keira saw Jax's turned head. How dare he come here, she thought, her rage flaring up. She was over him. She wanted him, yea, so did about a million other women. He had gone with about half of those, it seemed. Kissed them on the cheek when their time was up. Gone a second time with some. A third time with still fewer. Never once had he gone with her, his hometown girl, not once when he had the chance. He could pick from any of the girls throwing themselves away to be his servents. So why choose the one with spirit? Why her? She had no idea. She stopped beating on the table. Jax had come and taken what she had been beating on. "Hello, Jak" she said, acid in her voice.
Short, I know. But the first chapter is supposed to be that way. insert evil cackle here R&R please. I need reviews for this to work. Your Friend,
The true Kiera.