Well, this is my first ever story on Fanfiction, i hope you enjoy, i will be following up with more chapters after this one, as soon as possible, and if you like it, please review, i'd appriciate any constructive criticism to... thanx for reading!

My first and only serious Disclaimer: I do not own Hot Gimmik or any of its proporties. This is merely a piece of fiction that was inspired by the Manga.

Chapter One: The Surprise

Hatsumi was sitting in her room, reading her favorite manga series "Hana-Kimi", but she was supposed to be studying for her finals that were coming up in just two weeks. Ryoki had once again picked out the study material and given her the pages to memorize and the problems to study, but she had gotten tired of all the droning on of her Chemistry Book and just wanted a break from the mind numbing experience of reading what in her group of friends is known as "the genius's guide to an idiots chemistry set". She heard her mom come in from going out to get her little brother and she got up quickly to make it look like she was studying.

To her surprise she only heard one set of feet walking outside her door and then she heard a knock on her door.

Oh no…. I wonder who it is…. I remember that one time, when that robber broke in, oh god I hope it's not him…what am I going to do... I'll call Shinogu, he'll know what to do…

Hatsumi quickly got up, and went to lock her door, but as soon as she got up out of her seat that she had placed herself in, the door was opened. She tensed and then screamed out at the top of her lungs, but before anyone could have had a chance to hear her, her mouth was covered by Shinogu's hand.

"Omid nvr ddt gin." Hatsumi tried to say, but unfortunately she couldn't, because Shinogu still hadn't removed his hand, but he quickly started back and she started shouting at him, "Oh my god, never do that again, you scared me so badly, you should have called out to me, told me it was you, but nooooo, you had to sneak around, let yourself in and then come and knock on an innocent girls' door, and not even let her hear your voice, what were you thinking."

By that time Hatsumi's eyes had started to well up with tears and she collapsed back on her bed.

Shinogu rushed over to comfort her as he sat down next to her and held her to his body. He knew it was wrong, but this was the best part of his day so far. Just getting to hold her to him and put his chin on the top of her head, with her face nuzzled into his chest, was a moment that he was thankful for beyond words.

But he knew he had to let go, so he did and when she looked down, he lifted her chin to make her look up, and then took his hand away. "Look Hatsumi, I'm really sorry, but I came here to surprise you for your birthday, since it looks like everyone else forgot. I got you a ticket to "The Donnas" concert tonight, I know you like them, and they are in Japan right now, on an international tour.

Her eyes opened real wide and she smiled up at her older brother (which she called him, even though she knew he was adopted and was annulling the adoption). "Thank you so much! But Mom and Dad will never let me."

"I know, but that's why I got a second ticket, I will take you, and then mom and dad will be fine with it."

"Well, okay, but I need to talk to Ryoki about it."