Teaser

A/N Do you people always get what you want? LOL Here's a short teaser for my next fanfiction, which is yet to be named so I would appreciate suggestions.

Replies to Reviews

A/N I didn't think I'd be able to do this again so soon. LOL

ohcEEcho – Thanks, I always enjoy praise, and the knowledge that people have enjoyed my story. It's the best cure for writers block, at least that's what I find.

PonchoLives – You're welcome, and I hope you enjoy this teaser.

Du Weldenvarden Farcai – I do hope you realise this is partly your fault. >;( LOL

Erin MB – Well here's a small something in answer to your question (I'm blaming you as well>;(LOL ) and you deserve the thanks.

Anne – Thanks for taking the time to review, it was an interesting read and I'm not one for being bitter about someone's own opinion. It's a free country, at least until my friend Kya takes over the world. LOL. I'm just not sure whether or not to change so if you read the Author's Note at the end of the teaser, you'll see my solution. P.S Please read the teaser first LOL

Capegio – Thank you, though I must say you write interesting angst fics, The Magnificent was good and like I said in my review, it was certainly original.

Tarien Lakilea Tel'anor – You're to blame as well, I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much, I might in the not so near future write a Susan and Lucy story but rest assured they will be in this one much more than in the last. I won't need a beta reader to begin with but I will let you know when I do. Thanks for offering, I was fearing I have to get Kya to do it, not wise, she doesn't really know about Narnia much. It will probably be around chapter 6 or 7, I will let you know.

Swirling mists veiled a lifeless plain. The moon shone like a beacon in the inky blackness that had settled on a world swathed by night. A lone figure sat hunched in the darkness, his view of the moon blocked by thick walls of stone, thick walls without a single crack or break. Thick walls that featured no windows. This lone figure was Peter the Magnificent, High King of Narnia; he was dressed in the tatters of a faded, once grand tunic. Chains adorned his wrists and ankles. Peter was twenty seven, it had been months since Rabadash of Calormen forced his eldest sister to marry him, since his other sister was forced into servitude, since Cair Paravel had been lost.

"Edmund" Peter whispered to the shadows, his cracked lips forming the familiar word, the word he said everyday, this was partly to make sure his voice still worked but more importantly this one word comforted him, gave him a reason not to completely give up. This word reminded him that his brother was still out there somewhere, working to overthrow their tyrannical conqueror, out there fighting for his country.

'While I'm imprisoned in this hole,' he thought bitterly to himself, testing his bonds. They didn't give and all that Peter accomplished was sore wrists. 'Of course they're not going to break; they didn't the last 50,000 times!' He chastised himself. With a familiar feeling of defeat coursing through him, Peter sighed and leaned backwards slightly, resting his head on one of the rough rock walls that made up his prison. He didn't want to give in, didn't want Rabadash to have that kind of power over him, but what was the point in clinging to hope when there was none? If his brother was going to rescue him he would have already. Peter hadn't seen the sun, moon or stars for a long time, a miserable time. All his life consisted of now was pain, despair and those four stone walls. He only ever left his cell for his weekly sessions with Rabadash. These sessions were the only way for Peter to track the time since he was kept in constant darkness, trapped in a never ending night.

A/N Hope you like the look of it, though you should know I'm am writing it anyway, so there! LOL Right now something really important!

ATTENTION ALL READERS! ATTENTION ALL READERS! ATTENTION ALL READERS!

Right now if you've read Anne's review you'll know that she thinks the ending is a little bit weak. I don't want to put any of you out by changing it, not changing it, changing it and making it worse etc... So here's my solution, I'm going to ask you one last time for this story to pick up your keyboards and give me your opinion. I want you guys to tell me whether or not you want me to change the last chapter or not. Majority rules and I'm sorry ahead of time for the minority. So please, please, please tell me your opinion. Thank you.