my foot hurts!i just tripped and the skin tore!OUCH!i'm ready to write!oh and just a message:judy,write back to me!

ok that is all i have to say so here is chapter 12:Mind Control(sorry about the two different emails but i forgot i named this chapter mind control and i named it mariko's pain...hehe...opps!)

Disclaimer:i do not own Inuyasha.

on yeah and this is not a Inuyasha/Sango story..just so you kno...


What happened last time:

they finally reach the castle and Jaken shows Kagome her room.When Kagome gets to her room she is overjoyed by the view.she changes and Rin tells her to come to the dining room.once she gets there,a woman about 25 is there.Kagome chats with her and finds out she is a maid too and tells her about how she got here and what Sesshoumaru did.


"hit you!"

suddenly Sesshoumaru came up from no where.he glared his death glare at her.he looked like he meant it...

"i see you have meet my other maid.i did not tell you about her."

"why didnt you?"asks Kagome.

"thats not important right now. you need to go to the kitchen and prepare dinner with her."tells Kagome while looking at the other maid when he finished.

"come on Kagome and i will show you the kitchen."said the other maid.(yes i will tell you her name later)

Kagome fallowed her to a room filled with dished and cups every where."so whats your name?"asks Kagome.

"my name is Mariko."

"oh so what are we cooking?."

"that."Mariko points to some live chicken in a cage.

"uhhh so we have to kill them?"Kagome was grossed outby the idea.

"yup."Mariko goes over to the chickens and pulls one out of the cage.Kagome walks over to her and the crazy chicken.Mariko grabs a butcher knife and lifts it up."oh god i'm going to barf."

"well then go over to the breads and put butter on them."

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'that wench seemed scared by the thought of me hitting the other girl.'thought Sesshoumaru.'little does she know Naraku had her tranced...'

flash back:

"Mariko! where are you!"

"i'm over here!"shouts a childs voice."over by the old guest room!"

Sesshoumaru jumps over to the old guest room.Naraku jumps down from the ceiling.he was aiming to kick Sesshoumaru in the back when he was going after Mariko."die Sesshoumaru!"

"not in your life!"Sesshoumaru grabs Mariko and jumps to the side just missing him.Naraku fails to hit him and blasts a hole in the wall.Kagura uses her wind powers to create a storm of wind,rain, clouds, and thunder.'just great...'thought Sesshoumaru'thats getting in my castle and there planning to take Mariko'

"you cant escape Sesshoumaru!"said Kagura.Sesshoumaru took Mariko into the guestroom and locked the door. Naraku went overto the door and pounded on it"let me in you coward!"Sesshoumaru's eyes turned red.he put Mariko into the closet. "stay here."Sesshoumaru said to Mariko.she nodded her head.

Sesshoumaru unlocks the door and Naraku tackles him.Sesshoumaru picks him up and throws him at his balcony window,and it smashes and he goes rolling out of the guest room.Sesshoumaru goes out and attacks Naraku.Naraku throws him back into the room and they fight in there.'i hope Sesshoumaru's ok.'thought Mariko.Sesshoumaru uses his claws to stab Naraku in the arm."useing claws are we?"Naraku grabs Sesshoumaru's shoulders and uses his claws to draw blood.They are now pushing on each other with equal force.Sesshoumaru lets go with one arm and digs a huge gash in Naraku's stomach.rain is pouring in from the balcony.Mariko is worried sick and Naraku is flung on the ground and now is bleeding really bad.it gets over everything.the walls,bed,doors,and the closet.Mariko inhaled.it smelled of heavey blood.she couldnt hold it in anymore.she barfed all over the closet floor.Naraku glared at the door.Seshoumaru looked at the door to then at Naraku.he knew what was going to happen next.Naraku sprang for the closet and opened it Sesshoumaru pushed him out of the way and let Mariko out.

"hurry! run!"Said Sesshoumaru.

Mariko pounces out of the closet and looks into Sesshoumaru's eyes.they were filled with anger and fear,angry at Naraku and fear that Mariko was in danger.Sesshoumaru grabbed Mariko and tryed to help her out safly and Naraku gets up and jumps on Sesshoumaru,making him land on Mariko.Sesshoumaru gets up at least afoot,just enough for Mariko to escape she ran towards the door and Naraku shoots out a web that controls Mariko.Sesshoumaru lifts his hands up to his face and springs up,which makes Naraku fall over.Sesshoumaru looks down at Naraku.He raises his hand and his claws start to glow."i wouldnt do that if i were you..."

"why not?"said Sesshoumaru.Naraku nods in the direction where Mariko is.Sesshouamru looks over that way and sees Mariko and the web."if you attack me,she dies"

Sesshoumaru lowers his claws and Naraku stands up."good boy."

'thats it!'thought Sesshoumaru.He jumps on Naraku and bites the web and it brakes.Kagura goes down to Naraku and she gets something from him.Sesshouamru tries to run over to Mariko but naraku uses his web again and pulls him back.he turns him around and watches as Kagura puts something on Mariko."shes now under my spell..."(to be continued)

"Sesshoumaru are you going to eat with us?"asks Rin.

"no Rin go find Jaken and tell him to eat with you."said Sesshoumaru"i have to go think"

"ok Sesshoumaru-sama!"


ohhh how was that! hehe...next time is the rest of the flashback and Kagome learns Mariko's cooking.

chapter 13:The Spell That Started It All.

nifty...lol...oh yeah,cassie1:is that an insult or a compliment?

well i have to go get more bandages because my foot is bleeding again...bye!

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