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Green Breeze: Hello again. Yeah I updated. Happy you liked it. Koruri is one of the most dastardly character I ever created. I'm surprised where my free writing takes me. Twists in turns everywhere. Here is the next chapter. Hope you like it.
Tsuki Fox: Hello again. Yes a cliffy… I'm back and my evilness has returned as well. Lots of cliffys in this story. Thanks for saying that. I try… ideas just come to me. So you liked the double Yusuke part… Yeah Yusuke is indeed going to be in real trouble… most likely this chapter will be full of Yusuke betting. Hope you like this chapter.
Rurouni kitsune: Hello again. Lol, you are getting to hate Koruri more and more each chapter uh. Well at least I'm doing my job. Indeed I'm tricky. Can't figure me out… I like to make lots of twists in my stories. Makes it more interesting. Yeah it would be best if Kuronue got free from Koruri soon. I will indeed keep up the good work. Hope you like it.
KaraKurama: Hey. Glad you liked it. Sure don't mention it… I know what those kinda events are like. Well I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Bloom Flower: Hello again. Its so ironic isn't it. We know so much more then Yusuke at this point in the story. And he's walking right into a trap. This might be a bashing chapter, just a heads up. Didn't take too long did it… hope you like it.
Yami Yami Yugi: Yo! What up? Okay its official you have really lost your mind this time. Lol. Must be a sugar high. Well anyway, yeah Kurama really didn't freak out as much as he did the first time he found out something happened to Kuronue. At least they have a plan is right… lets just hope it doesn't blow up in their faces like I think it will. Raizen is finally in the picture, we'll have to wait on Mukuro though. We will indeed find out what trouble is going to happen. Hope you enjoy it.
Well that was certainly a lot to write. I hope you all enjoy it.
Yusuke falls into Koruri's trap
Meanwhile just outside the city limits Yusuke was arriving. Koruri was watching him. ' The trap has been set and the mouse is headed straight for it.'
Yusuke was walking along and of course muttering curses along the way.
" Stupid demon king, why the fuck does he have to have his damn kingdom in the middle of god knows where….now I got bloody sand in my shoes." The sun was beating down on Yusuke as he continued on his way. Soon the palace was in site. Yusuke walked up to a cliff near by. " Now isn't this homey. Well I came here for a reason and that's what I'm going to do."
Yusuke jumped off the cliff and landed at the base. He started walking up to the palace. Raizen's guards saw Yusuke and recognized him as the boy who attacked their king. They all got on their guard and their energize rose. " So you return for more have you?" A tall, skin, bold guy stated.
Yusuke blinked a few times. He could not register what he was blabbing about. " I don't have a freaken idea what your talking about corm dome."
The demon frowned. " Do not insult my intelligence. You came here to murder our king… we will not allow it."
Yusuke puffed and narrowed his eyes at the guy. " You know you are really starting to bug me. I just came here to have a little talk with him about what's going on in demon world. That's all… now get the hell out of my way!"
The other two demons stood in front of the place defensively. The tall one continued to stair at Yusuke. " You shall not pass."
Yusuke's temper was starting to flare. " Alright I've had enough of this crap. One way or another I'm getting into that palace!" His right index finger started to glow. He smirked as he pointed the blast at the ground making a large screen. Yusuke took this opportunity to run around into the back of the palace. He tried to catch his breath. The spirit detective peaked back at the guards to see if they were following him. He let out a sigh of relief when he saw no one. ' Good grief. What was with those guys? Why did they think I was here to kill their king? I wasn't ever here before. This is just too odd.'
Suddenly Yusuke started to hear some footsteps. He leaned up behind the building and prepared to hit whomever it was who came around. Just then a young girl came around. Yusuke let out a sigh when he saw her. The young girl had shoulder length messy green hair. Two long pointy ears came out from the side of her head. She had alluring brown eyes. This girl looked so innocent. She wares a bit of showing outfit that reveled much of her body. The tan fabric covered her lower body. Around her arms were golden bracelets with a beautiful swirl design.
Yusuke looked right into her eyes and couldn't pull away. The young girl looked at Yusuke with curiosity. " Excuse me mister… who are you?"
" Names Yusuke… I wanted to see Lord Raizen."
The girl looked shocked but then looked away. " Lord Raizen isn't well at the moment. He was attacked…."
" This is very important! I have to talk to him right now…."
The young girl didn't know what to do. She then turned around. " Follow me… I'll take you to him."
Yusuke followed the young girl up the stairs. He couldn't help but feel curious. " What's your name anyway?"
" My name is Sakura…"
" What do you do here?"
" Basically I serve the needs of his highness. Anything he needs I give him not matter what."
" Alright what if he tells you to get on your hands and knees and be his bitch."
" If that is what my lord wants… but he has never asked that of me. He says that I'm too beautiful."
Yusuke felt a bit relived. ' Well at least she hasn't been touched. She is pretty. Wouldn't mind getting together with her one day.' They soon arrived at a large door. Sakura opened it. The room was slightly cold due to the fact the whole still wasn't fixed.
Lord Raizen was laying on his slab resting. Sakura walked over. " My lord… there is a boy here to see you."
Raizen stirred as he sat up. The demon king saw into the eyes of the boy before him. " What do you want?"
"I need to tell you something important…"
Without much warning Raizen's personal guards came up. They saw Yusuke and grabbed him knocking him to the floor. Yusuke squirmed to get out of their clutches. " Let me go you fucking bastards."
The tall demon looked at Sakura. " Good work my dear."
Sakura looked away. Yusuke was shocked. " Sakura… how could you…."
She shook her head. " I didn't! I swear."
The other too dragged Yusuke to his feet. The third looked at Raizen. " My king… I shall interrogate this boy and see who put him up to it. If it pleases you, you may eat him later if you wish. He smells human."
Yusuke pulled and kicked in vain. " I'm not going to tell you jerks anything! I have nothing to tell you… so get your fucking hands off me!"
The other two guards took Yusuke away. Sakura looked at her lord with hope. " Please… Lord Raizen… don't kill him."
Raizen lifted his hand and softly touched her smooth skin. " You are just so pure… so lovely."
The tall demon bowed. " I will get to the bottom of this… and find out who sent him to kill you."
Sakura widened her eyes. " No… he couldn't… he didn't…"
Raizen said nothing to the young girl beside him. " Do what you must… then bring him to me."
The tall demon nodded as he walked off. Sakura was devastated that the person she just meet could be the person who tried to kill the only person who really cared for her. She let out hot tears. ' Its not fair….'
Raizen placed his arms around her to comfort her. " We must be certain… don't concern yourself my dear…. Just attend to your duties. Things will be back to normal shortly…."
Sakura nodded as she got to her feet. " As you wish my lord."
To be continued…
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