What Is It Called When You See A Flashback- But See the Future Instead?
A/N- Hey Guys! So how long has it been? Almost ten days right? I know for most authors updating in that amount of time would be considered extraordinarily early- but for me I personally felt VERY guilty! And with all the stuff going on including the fact that it was the end of the year and I had a million and one final projects to do, I'm moving half way around the word so packing etc…(can you believe it! I'm gonna miss you guys so much! URGH!) and everything else that's going on- the real reason that I haven't updated in 10 days was sadly a slight case of writer's block! Sorry… I know the truth hurts!
Dedicated to THE AWESOME HMS MARUDERS! I LOVE YOU ALL AND WILL MISS YOU TONS!
So the chapter's point of views and time is slightly awkward (you'll see!) and I'll try to explain it as we go on! I hope you won't become confused! If you are ask me in a review! PLEASE READ THE NOTE AT THE END! Also…um…. Yup and feel free to ask the name of what song I would have chosen for this chapter and I will E-mail you the lyrics! (There's no rule against that- right?) So on with the show! (Story/chapter… whatever! You know what I mean!)
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Smoke was every where, so thick that they she could barely see a few feet in front of her. Loud shrieks where sounded and the sound of many scampering feet and furniture crashing. Everything was so confusing- she had no idea what was going on. Wait- why was everything going blurry all of a sudden? What was that sinking feeling and the darkness? The last thing she heard was some one shouting frantically,
"Lily!"
She felt a slight pull in the pit on her navel and felt as if she was thrown into another place- but she didn't move at all… and she couldn't move at all now.
She heard screaming again- but more panicked… and soon saw why. Rows of people cloaked in black tightly packed together- faces covered stretched out- flicking them up at random times sending Muggles around them flying up or other horrible things…
Death Eaters… a Muggle killing...?
The death eaters were laughing mercilessly and suddenly one pointed his wand toward her as she felt another sharp pull.
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"So, Maddie…?" Squealed a seventh year Hufflepuff. "How was it with James Potter?"
"Oh God Jess- let it go!" muttered the blonde.
"Oh come on- you never told me!"
"Well nothing really-"
"That's not what you told me!"
"SHUT UP! Really girls…"
"So you went and asked him out and he said nothing?"
"No that's not it!"
"So he ignored you!"
"Oh he definitely didn't do that either!"
"Then speak!"
"Fine I asked Potter- he said 'no', I said 'we'll see' then kissed him, and then left."
"That's it? Maddie you have lost your touch!"
"So what exactly did you guys see?" quirked in Bailey.
Maddie was now getting angry as all three them stood in the Hufflepuff seventh year girl's dormitory applying layers of make-up and so on.
"Stop jerking while I'm trying to put on my mascara!" she shrilly muttered. "He won't go out with me again!"
"Why?" Jess asked innocently. Maddie was definitely very pretty, and pretty much could have any guy she wanted. What was so different about that Potter? Why was he being so difficult?
"Oh God you people are so naïve," muttered another brunette walking into the room while tying up a pony-tail messily and placing a large stack of books down. "Do you really thing James Potter wants anything to do with the likes of you Maddie." She said bluntly.
"Well excuse us Amelia for having a social life. And why not? Unlike you I happen to be quite capable in the male department."
"VERY capable," laughed Jess.
Amelia raised an eyebrow staring the seventeen year old drama-queen (more or less…) and said, "You might have forgotten about the Lily Evans factor."
"Evans? What about her? She's- she's…"
"About the only person he has thought about since about fourth year- fifth to be nice to be nice." Amelia stared at the three girls.
"He's dated since then!"
"Not recently."
"Whatever," Maddie said. "Really, isn't he tired of chasing that stuck-up know it all? She really ticks me off… leading Potter on like that just to show all the other girls how she is the only one who can keep James Potter on a leash, make him behave and all that."
Amelia chose that moment to stare daggers at her fellow Hufflepuff- "I really think you are mistaken love, whatever you may think I think that you are ABSOLUTELY wrong."
"And then why would he not be over her?"
"Maybe- it maybe a foreign concept for you- maybe he wants more than a fling- something forever- maybe he actually loves her." She spoke confidently walking out of the room leaving three very confused girls behind.
After she left Jess whispered as they where walking into the Great Hall for the dance, "Do you really think he loves her Maddie?"
Maddie paused for a second, than replied grudgingly, "Yes" and walked over to dance with Sirius Black.
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"Another attack on by the Dark Lord! 20 Muggles dead! Ministry instates new rights for aurors!" cried out a boy holding the paper in Diagonalley.
"It's gotten so much worse now- It's an everyday occurrence now! We have to do something more!"
"Lily," said a man who she couldn't recognize. "Dumbledore sent something this morning- about Voldemort."
"Whatever it is. I don't care about the danger in it- if we don't it'll just be our children's' problems."
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"So Black how is our own Romeo and his Juliet?" she asked as Sirius made his way out of Maddie's grip.
"Not good McKinnon… not very good at all."
"What is it this time?" she groaned.
"I'm not sure but they've been avoiding each other since she's come back and barely talk- that's not good chemistry."
"And so it would be mostly whose problem this time?"
"Well we know that James thinks that Lily more or less is…"
"…the most awesome thing since sliced bread, but Lily has been thinking a bit more highly of Potter recently as well…"
"So what changed?"
"I'm not sure- but he was being extremely nice just a second ago…"
"But I heard yelling!"
"We'll give it ten minutes before we bust in and see what's up."
"Got it."
"Okay guys- not this time." Remus interrupted.
"REMUS!"
"Moony! What's the deal?"
"Guys, really I draw the line here."
"We weren't going to do anything!"
"Guys if it was meant to be- it'll happen without you two meddling in it!"
"Moony since when have you been so sentimental?"
"Shut up with the crap Lupin! You know as well as we do it won't work like that."
Remus bit his lip then muttered, "Okay fine give it fifteen minutes and stop it with those annoying cheeky-know-it-all grins!"
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She was pulled away from that scene again towards a small town- towards something. Another dark house- a manor in a quiet street was were Lily Evans found herself next-
"Lily, take Harry and go! It's him! Run! Go! I'll hold him off-!"
All sound was drawn away by loud cruel heartless laughing.
"LILY!" this voice was more near home. "Lils?"
She awoke to find James Potter bent in front of her with a nervous look to him.
"Are you okay?"
"Wait what happened?" Lily questioned. "Where's the smoke? Screaming? What happened?"
"Lily… there was no smoke- the screaming was just some people cheering about the fact that Sirius more or less blew up a whole carton of fire crackers to some interesting effect… but are you okay… you just suddenly fell and where out for like 3 seconds…"
"What? Fine- so I didn't leave or anything?"
"Umm no. Are you still feeling okay?"
"Yes James I'm fine."
"Are you sure?"
"Oh bugger off James I'm fine!" she snapped but softened looking at his expression, "I mean if you're just going to sit here and worry about me, whose going to go and dance with me?"
"Really?" he asked smiling in shock now.
"Truly."
And as she led James lead her into the Great Hall little did she know that she would soon forget whatever she saw… that they would be even less than vague memories and by telling James no more then a 'yes' to a dance she led herself closer to them being her fate.
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Yup! Sorry I finished today so know it's about 11 days and I KNOW THE chapter kind of sucked and more or less was confusing! I had a bunch of ideas about it… And it definitely turned out COMPLETELY differently- I was aiming for a death eater attack- to Voldemort himself- to a prank- it kind well that was all I was able to come up with sorry! I hope you know understood the kiss thing and we can let it go. You see it meant nothing because Lily can't hold it against him- he might have thought well let's see if I can get my mind of Lily (he failed terribly) and found out he couldn't and more or less loves her more… sure that's exactly it… I'll keep thinking that and hopefully you awesome readers (AND REVIEWERS!) will understand! And Lily might not want to push it more- it'll just make matters worse… REMBER TO REVIEW AND ASK QUESTIONS (I HAVE MANY FOR MYSELF!)
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I can send those lyrics too! So don't forget about that! How confusing was that whole Hufflepuff sequence. I didn't want Maddie (the one who kissed James) to appear to… well slutty I guess is a word for it… it would be just wrong since I am on Lily's side and am slightly biased! (I so amuse myself sometimes!) Longer chappy next time! I hope it wasn't too cliché either!
Like Always,
TajM
OH! If anyone was wondering! Sorry about the delay in S.B.L.Y.L.E- I'm not exactly sure where to go! I know the last chapter- but I'LL TAKE ANY SUGGESTIONS FOR THE ONES IN BETWEEN! I have about 2 pages written though! LOL! BYE! Hey I love these new FANFIC changes when you update etc!