HEYOOOOOOO!!! I figured I'd get those ages wrong. DAMMIT!!!

In this chapter I'm gonna change the writing style. Every paragraph/separate line is an action/move that Hanku and/or Motoko does.

One thing, I have a fighting mode in this chapter that I like to call "Burst mode". Burst mode is when two fighters (or more) throwing lightning-quick punches and kicks. In this case punches, kicks, and slashes. Like in DBZ and DBGT.

Love Hina ain't my work, DAMMIT!!!

ON WITH THE FIC

Both fighters charge at each other head on. Hanku throws a punch, but upon impact Motoko disappears.

Hanku quickly looks up and sees Motoko flipping over him.

When Motoko has her back facing Hanku, in the air, Hanku jumps.

He leaps 20ft in the air with his arms wrapped around Motoko's waist on his right shoulder. He then suplexes her into the ground.

Hanku grabs Motoko's right ankle with his right hand and starts slamming her into the ground repeatedly.

When Hanku raised her for another slam, Motoko using quick thinking, places her left foot on his left shoulder, grabs his right arm and pulls. Hanku feels his arm almost being pulled out of place and loses his grip on Motoko's ankle. Motoko then places her released foot on his right shoulder, grabs his left arm and leaps behind him hanging onto his arms.

Hanku grunts in pain as he gradually tries to pull his arms above his head, but Motoko only adds on to the pressure.

Now feeling his bones crack, Hanku grabs Motoko's wrists, back-flips and drop kicks her in the stomach, sending her 15 feet away.

Motoko jumps back on her feet and charges at Hanku while he's still crippled.

Hanku jumps in the air, having Motoko miss her strike, and kicks her in the back, sending her into the canyon wall. Motoko lies on the ground slowly recovering as Hanku walks towards her.

"Awww, Motoko fall down. Here lemme help you up."

Hanku grabs her leg (two-handed), and swings her, 180 degrees, into the canyon wall again.

Motoko falls into the dirt after being stuck in the canyon wall a few seconds. Hanku bends down.

"You know, if you want to, we can start fighting right now. Unless you prefer continuing to feast on dirt."

He gets no answer.

"Very well, then."

Hanku grabs Motoko's throat and hangs her about 3 ft. above the ground. Motoko begins to choke for a few seconds before opening her eyes and smirking.

"You know, there was one thing I (cough) learned from you on your first night here (cough, cough)."

"Oh? And what might that be?"

"It's to fight DIRTY!!"

Motoko swiftly kicks Hanku right in the balls. Hanku releases her and bends down in pure agony as Motoko walks away holding her neck and coughing some more.

"Alright (groans), I admit it. I may have deserved that."

The Final Fantasy IX battle/monster encounter music starts playing.

Motoko recovers and once again, charges. Hanku doesn't fully recover, but continues to fight.

BURST MODE!!!!

Punches, slashes, and kicks continue to be thrown until Motoko sees an opening for Hanku's neck.

"THERE!!!"

She strikes hard, but is stopped by Hanku's bare arm. Motoko becomes dumbfounded at the sight of this. Hanku only smirks and punches Motoko into the ground.

He then flies into the air. He opens his hands as purple energy fills them. Hanku now starts throwing a series of energy waves at Motoko at a very fast rate. This keeps up for a minute before Hanku stops, showing a look of surprise and floats back down.

Motoko is seen with her sword held in a blocking position surrounded by an energy barrier.

"No wonder I didn't sense her energy decreasing."

Motoko breaks the barrier.

"Since when could you FLY?! And why didn't my sword…it didn't even leave a scratch!!!!"

"Let's just say that you're sword is now just a big stick."

"Shut up and fight!"

BURST MODE!!! This time, Hanku is blocking Motoko's attacks, instead of dodging, with his arms and legs.

In the middle of this "BURST MODE!!!" Motoko began to remember what Hanku had done to her in the past few days, which encouraged her idea that Hanku needed to die. This anger turns into a sudden rage. Her speed in her strikes increase dramatically to a point where Hanku couldn't keep up with her. Motoko then knees Hanku in the gut and takes the offensive.

Although he was guarding the attacks (crossing his arms on his chest, Hanku knew he couldn't win the fight if he kept this up. Motoko now brings her sword back.

"DEMON CUTTER!!!"

She strikes and sends Hanku into the canyon wall. Hanku opens his eyes in pure anger and notices his shirt was slashed in so many places, as was his chest and arms that began to slowly bleed.

Hanku stands not leaving eye contact with Motoko, slowly grabs his shirt and tears it off while throwing it aside. He now moves to a fighting position ready to continue the fight.

Motoko grunts and grinds her teeth in frustration.

"Why, Royiaki, why, oh why, must you continue to resist? WHY CAN'T YOU JUST DIE?"

Hanku disappears and reappears on a nearby tree branch.

"Because you won't stop being an arrogant and pretentious pain my ass, (teleports again to another tree branch) and I'd like to do nothing right now, rather than to piss you off."

Hanku enters a "BURST MODE!!!" of his own, only he's the only one attacking. To be technical, he's the only one attacking a helpless opponent who can't guard.

Hanku kicks Motoko into the air, teleports above her and "clubs" her back down, teleports below her and throws a spinning back kick having the samurai slide a good 20 ft. away.

Motoko continues to lie down while trying to find a weak spot, until she noticed something.

Whenever Motoko brought her sword near one of his palms, he'd quickly move it out of the way instead of blocking it. She stands, as she now knew what to do.

BURST MODE!!!

Motoko guards for a few moments while trying to find the right time, then she finds Hanku's shoulder wide open and grabs it. Hanku begins to feel the sharp pain he had felt when Motoko nearly tore off his arms earlier, and tries to get out of the grip.

Motoko seizes this distraction and elbows him in the chest. After sliding a few feet Hanku is caught off guard as he sees Motoko's blade being brought down on his head. He catches the blade in his palms and quickly realizes his fatal mistake. A standoff between two fighters, in the rain, starts.

"………(gulp)"

He gets a very nervous look as Motoko gives him an evil glare and a smirk.

A few moments later, Motoko frowns, twists the blade and yanks the sword out, slitting both of Hanku's palms. Hanku bends down, shouts and groans in udder pain and holds his hands below his face.

Motoko sheathes her sword and starts walking away-"Now that the Monrovian venom has entered your body…there's no point in continuing this fight, let alone any hope of your survival."

"How long did you say it would take for this to kill me?"

"24 hours…what? You want to die now?"

Hanku begins to stand-"24 hours is all the time I need to slaughter your ass. So long as I'm able to stand and fight, I'll never surrender to ANYONE!!! Your Monrovian venom is of no use to try and keep you alive. Think of it as a last wish I want before I pass on to my next life."

"Well, I'm afraid that you can't get everything you want, but I can give you a quick and painless death."

"Your empty threats don't harm me. So if you're finished with your little monologue…(tightly clenches his fists despite the pain he feels as blood began to slowly drip down his hands. He slams his foot into the ground and brings his fists to his sides) COME OOOOOOOONNNN!!!!!"

A black energy aura began to surround him as Motoko felt his strength increase, dramatically. She now forms a white energy aura surrounding her as she also positions herself, but she couldn't believe what has happened. She is now fighting a man that, even though his death is coming on swift wings, he continues to fight trying to stay alive.

Both fighters now know that the gloves are off, no one is holding back any longer, and they both knew that one of them would walk away from this fight…alive.

End of chp. 10

I thought the fighting music was a good add-on. Tell me what you thought about it, if you've heard it.

Now for reviewers…

Onikame- Thanx, and is it possible if I could join your C2 community? Yes Writer's Block DOES suck!

riderofdragons-I did the "script style" based on someone else's demand. I'm working on it.

Nakatsu and Jack B. Quik-I'm gonna kill my friend who told me those were the real ages. I didn't think those were the correct ages either, but it doesn't matter that much, does it?

Lee3-Don't you mean when Hanku was off guard? If not which scene are you referring to?

Lightsfaith-GREAT!!! Now I know somebody who actually HAS heard those songs before!!!

PLEASE REVIEW/FLAME ASAP DAMMIT!!!

One more thing, read the review I got from GanondorfsucksFoxsdicks and tell me what you think of it, because I know the punk who wrote it, but he don't know that. If you have anything to say to him let me know so I can tell him and he'll be known as a jackass throughout the nation. I really REALLY wanna tell him how much you guys will hate him.