HELLO!! HOWDY!! HOLA!! HI!! BONJOUR!! WADDUP!!

Hanku-WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP ALREADY!!!!!!!!

…Geez, Mr. Sensitive. YA'LLS RANTS AT MY FLAMER WERE AWESOME (Bless your soul Chorp. You really DO care (sniff)). In case you want to know, when Shigy-Chan mentioned Voigt that was the flamer's name. You can continue to insult at him, by the way, Chorp, Voigt says that Kirby is just as gay as Ganondorf, and he says that you would know a lot about sucking a brother's dick. Seriously! I'm not lying! That was him! NOT ME!! Shigy-Chan can back me up on this. I think Voigt's a dumb ass too.

One more thing, Hanku's sleeves were already torn off in the beginning of the last chapter, not torn at the sleeves. Someone misunderstood it.

Anyways, Love Hina ain't my work DAMMIT!!!

ON WITH THE FIC

Rain continued to fall as the Hinata Apartments kept silent to what was currently happening. Everybody is sitting in the living room, quiet, and staring into space. Keitaro, however, was different; he stares at the floor fidgeting with his fingers with a frown on his face.

His thoughts ran amuck. He feared that one of the two fighters was already dead. Images ran through his mind of Motoko being obliterated as Hanku almost did to him, or Hanku being sliced and diced by Motoko. The thought of losing just ONE of them was too much to carry.

All of a sudden, he slams his hands down on his lap and stands.

"THAT'S IT!! I'M NOT GONNA SIT HERE AND WAIT FOR ONE OF THEM TO RETURN!! I'M GOING UP THERE TO STOP THEM!!!"

Naru stands and tries to calm Keitaro down as he gets his poncho.

"Keitaro, wait, what makes you think you can stop those two? What if you get caught in the middle of it and…get hurt again?"

"I don't know Naru…I don't know if those two will EVER get along, let alone stop trying to kill each other, but I'm not going to let that happen. It's better than not doing anything at all, and I know that you all feel no different."

Everyone keeps quiet for a while as Keitaro heads out the door. In the end everyone joins in to end this quarrel.

We return to the warriors

After a short stare down, Hanku charges at Motoko, but all of a sudden feels nauseous and fatigued. He stops and gets on his hands and knees and spits out blood. Motoko walks towards Hanku.

"Remarkable isn't it? How quickly the Monrovian poison can take effect. It almost seems worthless killing such a diseased creature who is already about to die."

"(cough) (cough) SHUT UP!!!"

Hanku launches his head at Motoko's chin, but she quickly recovers.

Track #15 of the Jet Moto 2 (PSone) CD playback starts playing.

Hanku punches Motoko in the face at the same time she kicks Hanku in the gut. Both recover and charge.

Hanku throws a punch at Motoko, who catches it with her bare hand and clasps it. She then makes a vertical slash, but Hanku catches her hand with his.

Both fighters grunt, while offending and defending themselves. All of a sudden a crater starts being made around the two (about 10ft. diameter). The crater gradually increases in size as the two grunt louder trying to get the other to stumble in this grabbling match.

As the crater gets about 30ft. wide and 6ft. deep, Motoko sweeps her leg, tripping Hanku.

"GOD-SCREAMING STRIKE!!!"

Hanku gets blasted out of the crater and collapses. Motoko rises out, herself, sheathes her sword, grabs Hanku's right leg (two-handed) and starts swinging him in a circular motion (like a shot-put).

"Let's see how YOU like it!" She then releases her grip and Hanku crashes into the canyon wall. Motoko holds her hilt, ready to strike, but she hears someone behind her.

"You looking for me?"

Motoko turns around, but is greeted by Hanku's feet as he dropkicks her, sending her into the canyon wall. The smoke clears and reveals Motoko holding her sword, which has a white aura surrounding it. She then dashes towards him.

Hanku stands straight up and holds his right hand (in the hand shape of a gun) between his eyes and stares at Motoko with a great surge of concentration and focus, so strong, that he begins to flush a slight red.

Motoko strikes right in front of Hanku, but the blade collides at a now-revealed purple energy barrier. She tries to retreat her blade, but it can't separate itself from the barrier and she couldn't let go of the blade either.

"REFLECT!!!"

Motoko gets sent flying away back into the canyon, again.

"(pant) (pant) You seem to really like it there."

Motoko recovers and charges

BURST MODE!!!

Hanku sees an opening and launches a high kick at Motoko's face and sends her flying into the air (face up), dazed. Hanku flies up to her at a quick speed and knees her back, nearly breaking it. Instantaneously he clubs her back down. Motoko recovers by landing on her feet with her hands down on the ground however, but upon landing, Hanku thrusts his feet down on her, smashing her into the ground.

Hanku waits for his opponent to recover, but senses a great energy increase. He gets a slight look of fear and shock, knowing what it was, and jumps 50 yd. away and hears a familiar two words.

"DOOMSDAY TYPHOON…SECOND FORM!!!"

A red energy typhoon rises out of the debris and makes its way toward Hanku. Hanku just smirks and brings his hands back.

"oooooohhhhhh no ya don't. Not again. Sorry."

He launches a black and purple energy wave from his hands (his hands are open and his thumbs and trigger fingers are crossed over the other. The two energy attacks collide, creating one hell of a light show.

At this moment, the rest of Hinata shows up and sees the two in their clash. They can do nothing but watch and wait.

Both attacks are moving back and forth, for a while, until Hanku takes the initiative and puts more power into his attack. The typhoon/Motoko slowly gets pushed back, but shouts out two words that made Hanku shutter…

"…FINAL FORM!!!"

"……crap…"

The dark clouds from the current storm get tremendously darker. Winds start to pick up and trees are swaying side to side like paper. Lightning begins to strike around the fighters, causing small craters. Hanku looks at his surroundings and looks back at his opponent and saw the unthinkable.

Motoko's "Doomsday Typhoon" attack's first two stages were ENERGY attacks, this stage isn't a simple energy wave that looks like a typhoon, this is the real, Mother Nature's very own, NATURAL TYPHOON!!!

Hanku sees dark clouds swirling around the attack and notices that the typhoon is slowly closing in on him; he knew he didn't have much time left.

After a few moments of thinking, an idea clicked into Hanku's mind, but was it too late? The typhoon was 40 yd. away at first, but now it was 15 ft. away. He was pretty much looking at the typhoon dead in the eye.

"(grunt)…It's a long shot…but it certainly is worth the risk!"

Red energy surrounds Hanku's hands.

"JUDGEMEEEEEEENT……"

Immediately he stops his current energy wave, giving Motoko/the typhoon a WIDE-open shot with NO possible resistance; it strikes forward!

"……PULSE!!!"

Out of Hanku's hands comes out a gigantic, red energy orb (8ft. diameter) that immediately cuts through the typhoon and consumes Motoko.

The attack, with Motoko in it, continues to shoot forward as the clouds and winds started to die down. Hanku clenches his right wrist and twists it like he caught something.

The energy orb explodes. An explosion, such as this, could go beyond human words to describe except: unimaginable. After a few moments of the light dying down, Hanku sees Motoko face down, 50 yd. away.

Motoko's gi had its left side obliterated and a burnt right side. Her hakama (I think that's what the pants are called) was torn in many places, and her body received many burns with smoke drifting away from her.

Everybody keeps quiet with tears on the corners of their eyes, except Hanku who can only smile in triumph.

"Well…that's that………WHAT THE?!"

Hanku sees Motoko slowly struggling to get on her feet. Hanku couldn't be anymore shocked and amazed as he thinks.

"…She's got persistence, I'll give her that much, but how can one have the will, courage, and determination to continue fighting, especially in that condition? There's no way she can win, I know that much, but…let's try this one more time."

Motoko is on her feet with her sword drawn at this time, with her legs trembling to keep her balance. She raises her sword with her hands, but is stopped. Hanku has his hands gripping her wrists with his thumb at their pressure points as he looks at her dead in the eye.

"For Kami's sake think about what you're doing. Why are you wanting to fight when you haven't got a single drop of strength left in ya? I'm not willing to kill someone who is already suffering. Yield from this death match and recover your strength. I won't say you surrendered. All I'm asking for is a temporary peace. E—nough!"

It was true, Motoko didn't have a chance anymore and she knew that. The words hit her emotions and her anger. The thought that Hanku still cared about her safety touched and confused her, but his saying that she should give up the fight, hit the wrong button. Her anger took its toll, but what she was about to do, would soon become a VERY FATAL MISTAKE!!

Motoko spits at his face/cheek-"I NEVER back down from a fight…NEVER!!"

She quickly caught herself, but it was too late. Hanku's eyes had begun to fill with anger, rage, and pure hatred as he smiled.

"You have a lot of spirit…"

He suddenly presses down, with his thumbs, on Motoko's wrists (pressure points). This caused her to drop her sword, at which, right after that, Hanku head butts her on her forehead, causing her to collapse in dizziness as Hanku grabbed her by her gi.

"…and a lot of mouth. Though I must admit, you using your pride before your common sense is a bit admirable of you."

Hanku punches Motoko, which sends her into the canyon wall (embedded in it by half a foot). Hanku is then in front of a helpless Motoko, who can only wait for her oncoming pain. Hanku's fists form a black aura surrounding them as he positions himself.

"Stupid……but admirable."

He then looks over at everybody else who had been watching. The majority of them were in tears.

"And look, you even have an audience to witness your demise."

Hanku lands a hard punch at Motoko's side, then on her face. He gradually increases his punches' speed as they continued to strike Motoko's entire upper half to where he landed 9 punches a second.

This beating continued for a full minute (540 punches total). Anyone else would say it felt like an eternity.

When the beating was about to reach its minute, Shinobu, whom was crying on Keitaro during the fight, made a sudden stand and briefly held back her tears.

"PLEASE STOP THIS HANKU!! PLEASE!! (sniff)"

Hanku only slows down his punches and looks over with a smile on his face.

"OKAY THEN!! IF YOU INSIST!! I'LL END IT NOW!!"

Hanku stops his rapid firing punches and throws a right uppercut to Motoko's gut and twists his wrist on impact, causing her head to lean out. Hanku then backhands her with his right, grabs her gi and right-hooks her in the face. Motoko is STILL embedded in the canyon wall, only her head can move at the moment.

Hanku then backhands with his right and punches her face with his left as a combo. Just after that he brings his hands back to his right side while his fists grew an even greater black aura as he begins to shout. He then launches a left uppercut in her gut and a right punch to the center of her chest at the same time. Also, upon impact his fists' black aura shot at Motoko. It was a physical and energy attack simultaneously, leaving her breathless.

(A/N: There's a name for that move, but I don't know what.)

Motoko is embedded in the canyon wall even more, by a ft.

Hanku suddenly hears a rumble and looks up. The top of the canyon was having a rockslide from Hanku's attack(s). He jumps back as a series of boulders, big and small, began to bury Motoko. The rain begins to stop and the sun begins to shine.

Hanku smiles-"I don't even know why I offered peace with her. It's sad that she didn't see my respect for her, but hey, it's not like she felt the same way about me and she got her share of regret. (his foot caresses against something) Hm?"

The opening piano music from Final Fantasy X starts playing.

Underneath a pile of rocks and dirt, Hanku pulls out, what looked like, a simple piece of paper, but when the dirt slid off, it revealed to be the picture that he took with him and Motoko. A million arrows just went through his heart in shock.

"………I don't believe it………she did."

Hanku put 1 and 1 together and came with a solution. It couldn't have been his picture, because he tore his down the middle and threw them away. It could only mean that it was Motoko's. Hanku starts to have tears come out of the corners of his eyes, until he sees a white glow in the pile of rocks.

All of a sudden, the boulders and all the other rocks were obliterated as Motoko was seen with her arms at her side and her feet spread apart, and shouting. She unleashed a massive energy attack to free herself. Hanku can only stare.

Motoko relaxes and begins to tremble again as she too stares; at Hanku, until she dropped to her knees and began to fall forward, but is caught by Hanku, who then gradually embraces her in a hug. Motoko became slightly confused.

"Why?…Why must you continue to be kind to me whenever…I treat you like dirt? Why would you spare my life when you wanted to take it away? Why? (sniff)" She begins to cry.

"…Does one need a reason to be kind to another person? Besides, I don't kill people that care for me as I care for them."

Motoko becomes slightly surprised, but falls unconscious on Hanku's shoulder.

Hanku carries Motoko in his arms, grabs her sword and sheath, and flies off back to Hinata, leaving the speechless residents and landlord to return on their own.

Hanku carries Motoko to her room, where she suddenly began to shake from the coldness of the rain she had been fighting in. Hanku removes her clothing and places her in her futon placing many extra blankets to help warm her. Hanku looks over to her sword and sheath and grabs the sword.

He sheathes the sword and places it above her futon. He then stares at Motoko with a smile and pats her head, but quickly notices that his hands continued to bleed from Motoko's attack. He also notices that his veins in his arms began to turn a DEEP shade of purple as he started feeling dizzy.

"Heh…How ironic is this? I won the match, but I'm the one that dies…heh heh."

He collapses face down on the floor.

End of chp. 11

The fighting music I used is pure gold waiting to be found!

PS2 owners-GET JET MOTO 2 FOR THE PSONE! When you get it, put it in the system and go to the browser menu. Move the cursor over the Psone game icon, there you'll see at the bottom right corner the triangle button saying CD Playback. Press triangle and select track #15. THAT'S THE BEST FIGHTING MUSIC THAT ANYONE CAN FIND!! I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE DO THIS FOR ME!!! I'M DESPERATE FOR YOU GUYS TO KNOW!! EMAIL ME IF YOU DID IT!!

No PS2 users-if you want to hear it email me.

Reviewers

Chorp-Amen brother. Great minds think alike. I don't kid with insults man. Those sayings are the TRUTH I SWEAR!! You're cool man! I'm here if you wanna say anything to Voigt/Ganondorfsuckfoxsdicks.

Lee3-I hope you weren't guessing that.

Red scorpion-I VERY MUCH beg to differ.

Everyone else- glad you loved the Burst Mode so much! You'll see it again later.

REVIEW/FLAME ASAP DAMMIT!!!