Okay, I noticed some other things, too. I have bad grammar. Forgive me. At least I'm writing. Right? I'm using this as a default to tell you somethings about the story if you're totally lost.
Summary: Haruka gets caught cheating and Michi leaves her. And, Haruka breaks up with her High School Slut of a Girlfriend.
Whatever: I think that I'm gonna have something happen to Haruka, since she's a racer and all, so that Michiru can visit her at the... WAIT! WHAT AM I DOING! I'M NOT SUPPOSED TO TELL YOU! I hate it when i do that. I'm such a frikker. Anyway, I help here! Even though I got 2 of my stories in the Post-Standard, I'm still not that god. I've been writing 6 stories at once, but, this on is more important. 'Cause it's being read the by.. the world. I just realized that. Wow, Im surprised I'm on Honor Roll. Anyway, I'm sorry that this is just a comment page for me, but I need some things fixed, so... here.
Edits:
Chapter 1:...cuddles up next to Haruka on the couch, who's watching T.V.
Fuck it... you guys can just imagine the words there and the grammar corrections and spelling and all. So whatever. Next chapter!