Poetic Froggy: I'm sorry, I have another 10,000 words already written, so I couldn't really change this chap without changing the whole story, sorry...

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"Dylan and I'll go this way, we'll meet you back here I an hour ok?" Jack said.

"I want to go with Justin!" Dylan complained.

"Ok" Jack said. "Hurry up" Jack turned back to the river, he ran his hand down the rail, he walked down the river for a couple miles, he passed the big bluffs, he was tempted to climb up them and look, but he wouldn't get halfway before an hour was up. He walked with the river for another two or three miles, when he spotted something on the other side.

It was Paige, she was sitting on the railing looking down at the water, she didn't have a coat on, her face was red, from the railing to the water must have been at least 30 feet, and the water was freezing. He didn't want to scare her, and make her fall in, up ahead was a bride, he quickly jogged to the bridge and crossed it, he quietly made his way behind Paige.

Paige looked down at the freezing water below her, her hair blew with the cold wind, life was so unfair, some people didn't care if they lost anything, or anyone. She did, she cared, and she lost her parents. Paige sniffed and wiped the tears away with her frozen hand, she didn't care if she was cold, she didn't care about anything anymore, she wanted her parents, and if she couldn't have them back, her life wasn't worth living, she wanted to be with them more then anything in the world.

Jack stepped a step closer, he didn't want her to do anything stupid, like jump. That wouldn't be good, no sudden moves. He told himself, he took another step closer to Paige, he was about a foot away from her, he wanted to grab her and pull her away, but he was afraid she would fall before he even touched her.

Paige stood up on the edge of the railing, it wasn't that far to the water, but the water would be freezing, she tried to tell herself that it would be nice and warm, but she couldn't convince herself, she took a deep breath. "Paige!" Dylan's voice called from across the river. Paige quickly looked up and looked at him. No, no! she told herself, she let go of the railing and was caught by Jack.

"Let me go!" she sobbed.

"No!" Jack shouted, and took a better grip and pulled her up. "What the hell did you think you were doing?"

"Let me go, please" She begged as she tried to pull away from him.

"No"

"Let me go!" she screamed as she jerked her hand away from him, thenkicked him in a place no man would want to bekicked in. She winced when she saw the pain look on his face, but quickly turned and started to run.

Jack stood there for a second, Ouch! He quickly ran after her, Justin was right behind.

"Paige!" Justin shouted.

Paige kept on running, she ran for the bridge, Dylan was there smiling. "Paige!" he shouted happily and tried to give her a hug, but she pushed him away and kept on running, she ran across the street, then to the bluffs, she started to climb up, but Justin pulled her leg, and she fell down and slammed her head against a rock.

"Oh my god" Justin said as stood there in shock.

Jack came to her side a second later, he lifted up her head and examined the wound, it was a very bad cut. "Hand me your jacket!" he demanded. Justin quickly unzipped his jacket and handed it to Jack. Jack pressed the jacket on her bloody cut. "Justin do you have your license?"

"Yes" Justin replied.

"Here" Jack said as he tossed Justin the keys to his truck, "Hurry up and bring the truck here!"

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So? How was it? I hope it wasn't to fake...