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Chapter 14: Settling Matters II: Kaiba vs. Noah
"Aurora Master, activate your special ability! Aurora Rave!"
The swordsman started glowing and a rainbow light surrounds the battlefield and rays from the swordsman attacks Kaiba's monsters and Kaiba and heals Noah. Kaiba's battlefield is empty and lost life points while Noah gained life points. (K: 1300) (N: 3500)
"What happened?"
"It's my monster's ability. Whenever my monster's attacked by a Darkness monster or a monster that was Darkness originally, and I'm about to lose, I can activate Aurora Rave. That increases my life points and decreases yours and destroys your monsters."
Seto groaned and placed a facedown card.
The whole gang arrived back in Egypt 5000 years ago.
"Hey, where are we going?" Serenity asked.
Duke suggested, "Let's go ask someone."
"Uh, Dukeā¦" Tristan started.
Duke asked a girl, but no response. He asked someone else but no response. He tried to touch someone's shoulder but his hand went right through her.
"Hey, what's going on?"
"We're invisible to them. They can't see us besides Bobasa and Mana." Yugi said.
"Speaking of which, there's Bobasa." Joey said pointing over to the small shop where Bobasa is eating a bunch of food.
"BOBASA!"
"Wow! Invisible people are back again?"
"Yeah. Good to see you again. Can you help us with something?" Tea asked.
"What can Bobasa do?" he asked.
Back to duel
"My move. I summon Zure, Knight of Dark World (1800/1500) in attack mode. (2300/1500) This'll be over now. Aurora Master, attack Seto with Aurora Wall!"
The monster headed toward Seto and unleashed a blast of energy.
"Not so fast. I activate my facedown card, Mirror Force! This reflects your attack and destroys all monsters in Attack mode!"
"Hold up. I activate my facedown cards, Reverse Doll! I equip to my monsters and when they're destroyed once, they're automatically revived. I end my turn with another facedown."
"Lucky shot. My move. I play Monster Reborn to bring back my Blue-Eyes. I activate Water of Life. This increases my life points by 4000. (K: 4300) I now summon Enraged Battle Ox (1700/1000) and I equip him with the Axe of Despair increasing his attack points by 1000 (2700/1000). Battle Ox, attack Zure!"
Battle Ox slammed his axe on Zure and destroyed him. He ordered Blue-Eyes to attack the Aurora Master, but Noah activated his facedown card.
"What's this?"
"It's called Revival of the Dark God, Nereid. When my Aurora Master is on the field and attacked, I can summon his opposite. Presenting, the Dark Aurora God, Nereid! (3000/2500) (3500/2500)"
A black demon-like creature on top of a white-dressed woman and pink claws with purple designs on her dress and dark skin appeared. Nereid protected the Aurora Master and Blue-Eyes got destroyed. (K: 3800)
"I end with a facedown card."
"My move. Now when both Nereid and my Aurora Master are on the field, at the cost of my whole hand, I can activate Nereid's powerful ability although I can't do anything else after it. Nereid, activate Eternal Finality!"
A massive sword came down from the sky and targeted Seto Kaiba. The impact of the sword caused a massive explosion dealing massive damage to his life points. (K: 1)
"Oh, no! My life points have been reduced to 1!"
"Hah! Face it! With just 1 life point, you won't be able to win. And I'm going to finish you next turn!"
"I don't think so! I summon Battle Ox (1700/1000) in defense mode and switch Enraged Battle Ox to defense mode. I place two cards facedown."
"You're finished my monsters will take you down!"
"How? With both in defense mode and you have only have two monsters."
"I activate my Nereid's other ability. Your monsters won't matter when I activate it. Nereid, Darkness of the Netherworld!"
His side of the field was shrouded into darkness and his monsters were destroyed.
"Explosion!"
A spark of fire from the air turned into an explosion on Kaiba.
"Cyclone!"
A cyclone surrounded Kaiba.
"Ground Dasher!"
There was an earthquake around Kaiba.
"Nishiltic Night!"
His side of the field was red had dark clouds, and beams of darkness attacked Kaiba.
"Finally, Pluto!"
A black demon erupted its energy and was supposed to destroy him.
"Hah! I win!"
"Not so fast, I activate my first facedown card, Change of Heart!"
"What?"
"This allows me to control one of your monsters and I choose your Aurora Master. Aurora Master, Aurora Rave!"
The swordsman erupted his energy and beams of light negated that attack and made a massive difference in points. (N: 400) (K: 3000)
"So what? I still have life points!"
"Not any more! I activate my final card, Meteor Strike! This meteor will target your life points and you will lose!" (N: 0)
Noah screamed as the pyramid locked his soul in that hellish pyramid. Kaiba's worker, Roland came up on the terrace wondering if Kaiba was fine, since he heard lots of commotion.
"I'm fine. Nothing happened."
"If you say so."
As Kaiba left, Mokuba wanted Roland to do something.
"Can you take Noah to a hospital? I want him to be just fine and get him back to his real self."
"As you wish."
PLEASE REVIEW! Oh, and sorry I took so long. I had lots of stuff to do and wanted to get a majority of it finished so I have more time to write during Christmas break. Although I only got some of it done.
