Kates Master's Sister: thank you! Dutch is my first language,
by the way. As Lizzie said in chapter 1, Kitty and Lydia are fourteen
and fifteen, and in this chapter Lizzie tells she is seventeen, which
makes Mary sixteen. Jane is nineteen. I know, the ages are different
from the book, but like I said: this is based on it. It has the same frame, but I wanna make my own story and not a weird copy of it :)
Hope you like this, and people - please review!
P.S. I made a REALLY weird mistake I mixed up a few characters...
normally I check my writing, but this was the first time I didn't and
BAM! I immediately made this huge mistake ... so I changed a few
things and now everything's okay :)
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2. Tell Me Some Stories
Seven
days later, Lizzie walked into the Red Lion Hotel. Eve's father was
the boss of it, and his family lived on the fifth floor.
Lizzie
looked around; she had always liked the hotel. The walls were red and
purple, the people were always friendly and
there was such a
wonderful atmosphere.
"Liz, look what I've got here!" called
her friend, who had been waiting in front of the elevator. She got up
from the purple chair
and showed a silver bracelet.
"Wow,
beautiful!" Lizzie admired.
"Michael gave it to me, he left
ten minutes ago... Because of our one-week-anniversary he gave me a
present!" Eve beamed.
"I feel quite guilty, I mean I don't have a
present for him. Is that bad?"
"Really naughty," Lizzie
nodded, and Eve gave her a soft push.
"Shut up, otherwise you
won't get your book back and I won't get you a chocolate pie,
made by my mother."
"Chocolate
pie?"
"Yeah, do you want some?"
"Yes, please!"
"Eve!"
a voice called. The girls looked up and they saw Mr Dawson, Eve's
father.
"Could you please come here, we need you to-"
"Dad,
Lizzie's here!" Eve protested. Lizzie knew Eve didn't like it to
help when it was busy in the hotel.
"I know, I only need you for
a second."
"Alright, alright... Sorry Liz, I'll be right
back."
"With pie!"
"With pie."
Lizzie landed on
the chair. A few minutes passed by as a young man sat down on the
chair next to her. He looked
quite nervous and tapped with his
fingers on the arm rest.
"Ehm, could you please stop doing
that?" Lizzie asked friendly.
"O, I'm sorry," he smiled and
he immediately stopped tapping.
"Why are you so nervous?"
"I'm
going to interview Vicky L. Jason of Greenpeace. She stays here and,
well, she's quite my hero," the guy smiled.
He looked at Lizzie.
"What's your name?"
"Lizzie Bennet. Are you a
journalist?"
"Yes, I am. Otherwise I wouldn't interview
people," he grinned. "I'm George Wickham, by the way. I work for
a news paper.
This is my first real job, the first time I can go to
somewhere else... I come from Manchester," he explained.
"Vicky
L. Jason, she's from the oil, right?"
"Yeah, that's true.
She's fantastic, thanks to her there-" he stopped when the elevator
door opened, but an old man appeared.
"What's Vicky doing here,
I mean, this is just a small village," said Lizzie.
"Yeah, but
she doesn't like the big cities, and Longbourn is near London, so
it's not difficult to go to important meetings and stuff."
"I
see." suddenly, Lizzie heared a sound. She looked up and saw
William Darcy, standing next to her chair.
"Hello," she said
awkward.
He looked at them, and after a painful silence he said:
"I was actually... Nevermind, I'll talk to you later, Wickham."
And
then he left.
Lizzie felt incredibly weird, and looked at George.
He seemed to feel the same way, but also a bit... scared?
"You
know William Darcy?" Lizzie knew it was a stupid question, but she
wanted to know what was going on.
"William Darcy?" George
asked slowly. She waited.
"Yes, I know him," he continued
softly, "he moved to this town, right?"
"Yes, he did.
He's... in my class," Lizzie told him.
"He was a good friend
of mine, almost my brother," he looked at her. The whole
conversation he had looked admiring at her,
but now it was obvious he
was really worried about something.
"Look, Lizzie... I like
you," George said slowly," and that's why I'm going to warn you.
There's something with Darcy,
he has a secret."
Lizzie frowned.
Was she supposed to be shocked or something, by the hearing of this
'cliffhanger-sentence'? She didn't like it
when people said negative
stuff about Darcy – she was the only one allowed to do that.
"He's
got a child."
"A what!" all her fantasies and happy dreams
fell to pieces, that one second. "He's got a..."
"A child,"
he finished her line.
"But he's only seventeen, just like me!"
"That
doesn't mean he can't make love," George said.
"But... a
child, for god's sake!"
"It wasn't really planned,"
George said. It sounded like a joke, but Lizzie didn't smile. She
felt dizzy – William was a father.
The handsome, but a little bit
arrogant, brown eyed guy had a child. She wanted to cry, but Fritz
was there, so she didn't do it.
"I know it's shocking to hear...
but I think it's for the best if I tell you the truth. You've gotta
watch out, he's a tricky guy," he warned.
"That child..."
began Lizzie.
"... he has left town before it was born."
"Did
he know the girl was pregnant?"
"Of course."
"The
bastard!"
George looked at the ceiling, and Lizzie said
quickly: "I'm sorry, I forgot he's you cousin. Although that
doesn't mean I can't
say things like 'bastard', it has to be no fun
to-"
"It's alright, Liz," he said loud, "he's a bastard
and I know it."
"And... the girl?"
"She raises the baby
on her own."
"George Wickham?" a woman asked. They looked up
and saw Vicky L. Jason standing in front of them.
"Yes, that's
me. Nice to meet you, ma'am," George stood up and shake her
hand.
"Well, Lizzie, I gotta go. Bye!"
"Bye!" Lizzie
said softly.
"Tatatatatatatataaaaaaa!" someone yelled as Vicky
L. Jason and George just had left.
"Here's a beautiful chocolate
pie for Miss Bennet!" Eve gave her a plate and Lizzie looked at
it.
"Thank you," she whispered. The next moment she cried and
Eve hugged her, asking what was wrong.
But all Lizzie could do, was
crying.
