Ok let's try for another good chappie. First gotta do some review thank yous. (pulls out a list then clears throat) hmm let's see okay here's one.
Isn't-BB-sooo-cute: (winces) sorry about that production crew started and that goes till 9:30. But after this I'll be sure to update moreā¦I think
krystalmaze: sorry about that. My stupid computer decided to capitalize it for me.
Stephaniefan: I made her like that because she's been trained as a ninja (no really) and they don't show emotion but there's another reason to her unfriendliness but I'll get to that later. Oh and never watched OC so you'll have to explain what an oc girl means.
(Looks at list) okay that's all of 'em. So on too chapter 4 My what? Toddles (waves energetically)
Melody had completely pulled off the mask. She has a heart shaped face with light tan skin. Her body has nice looking feminine curves. Her hair is thick light brown hair that went down to her shoulder blades, with a mix of honey, caramel, and hint of blonde highlights. Her lips are light pink. Her eyes are a rich hazel color. She'd look beautiful except that her face showed no emotion at all. It looked like she hadn't come close to even a small smile in a long time. Omi stood there dumbstruck for a minute. "My WHAT?"
"I said your sister," said Master Fung. The other dragons looked at Omi then Melody then back at Omi.
"Are you sure? Because I don't see any resemblance between the two of them," said Kimiko.
"Yeah. I would think that a sister of Omi would look like a female version of him. Not a knockout gorgeous babe. Ow!" said Raimundo.
"You just don't know when to shut up do you," said Kimiko, hitting him on the head.
"Well, I was told that I take more after our mother and Omi takes after our father," said Melody.
"You know of our parents? What happened to them? Why were we separated? Where have you been? What have you been doing? Why wasn't I told about you? Were our parents great warriors? Are you my older sister? What about-"
"I think Omi," said Master Fung cutting Omi off, "that maybe Melody would like to recover from her long journey. I know that it must have been a very tiring trip for her."
"Thank you Master Fung, but I'm not at all tired. I would at least like to change into something more comfortable. Then perhaps some tea," said Melody.
"Of course. It may take awhile for the tea, but I'm sure after you change, the other dragons will show you around and you will get to know each other," said Master Fung. Turning to the others he said, "Young ones, help Melody carry her things to her room." Master Fung bowed to Melody.
Melody returned the bow saying, "Thank you Master Fung, but that is unnecessary. I can get my things on my own."
"Why don't you show them where your stuff is," said Master Fung as he walked away, pretending not to hear Melody's protests.
"Fine," Melody said, exasperated. "Come on. I will show you where they are." She turned around and started walking towards the entrance in the temple.
When they arrived there, Melody grabbed a duffle bag with a Ying-Yang symbol on it. "All right. Go ahead and grab a bag," said Melody in a bossy voice. There were only two other bags.
"Geez, you don't have as much stuff as Kimiko did when she came here. I thought she was bringing a mall, with all the clothes, electronics and other things," said Raimundo.
"I put everything else in my room. A ninja can only take as mucho as she can carry," said Melody.
They started walking towards her room. When they got there, Melody opened the door saying, "I started to unpack, so please excuse the mess." There were CD's, books, and sheet music in boxes. A guitar, keyboard, video camera, and CD player in a corner.
"I thought you said you could only take what you can carry. I didn't know you could carry all of that," said Raimundo, carefully stepping over boxes.
"Well, I wanted to leave this stuff at the temple that I was training at, but my master, Yoa Lin, said to take them," said Melody, dropping the duffle bag by the closet. "You can put this stuff anywhere. I'll organize later. I'll be out in a minute. I want to put on something cooler."
"Well all right ma'am. We'll be outside the temple," said Clay.
"OK," said Melody, pushing them from the room. "Oh and Omi, to answer one of your questions, I'm a year older than you." With that she slammed the door.
Well alright then. Tell me if you think she was unemotional enough. Don't get your hopes up I only updated 2 because of a 5 day weekend. Please R&R.
