Pointy objects are fun
Disclaimer: I don't own Sailor Moon, because if I did, this would be the
episodes that every one knew. The characters I am just having play time
with, and forcing them to do the evil things in the story. Darkness is
mine, and if you use her in anyway, the only positive thing coming out of
it will be my joy of torture and the darkness will save you from the pain.
*Grins* Aren't I nice?
Okay, a note is that I have not been to Tokyo, hated the anime for what they did to the manga, and haven't left my stupid small town for more than one week. Sorry if it isn't accurate enough for all you people with lives.
Umm...what else did I borrow...some spells in here are my own creation, some from D&D 3.0 people (do not own these) and from other books...oh yeah, that was my next confession/evil idea. This story has magic in it, (notice how it isn't spelled with a 'k' if it matters to anyone but me) reincarnation, spirits/ghosts/souls and anything else people will have problems with. For all those sensible people, my English teachers always did find my papers, oh how can you say it, interesting. This part is very mild, but I am rating it for what he others will be b/c I want the entire story in one general location. I am not going to say that you have to be a certain age to read this, but it depends on your personal maturity level.
Where the story is concerned is that considering how I hated how Darien and Serena realized each others love for each other and I think it is crap, (oh, and language is in here, to) It didn't happen. It is a SD (Serena and Darien) romance, there are general/senshi parings later, and the family history is with Greek gods/goddesses, and probably Roman to, for when I have caffeine and have time to write this, I get confused easily. The romance will be slow. Oh, I am also planning three parts, and I have a you-review-and-I'll-continue-the-story deal going on. Currently, I am on the second part.
Don't worry, I am nearly done. I'll take flames within reason. Reason means that you should have a good explaination and/or better idea for me to respond. Another note is that I hate Chibiusa, or mini moon, or Rini, or whatever you call her. She is irritating, and I think she is the very being of evil. Tuxedo Mask, the vigilante, I don't understand very well, besides the appearance and the sappy connection with sailor moon. I don't think he is even hot. (Inu Yasha and Sessomaru are more my type) The pink hair thing also doesn't fit with the gene pool, and that is also irritating, besides many things. A few of the characters (most) are OOC, or are OC. Serena is not a ditz, and should never have been. I am calling it her way to hide that she is the future head of the Silver Alliance. (Sorry if you or someone you know came up with it. I read it some where, for got who wrote it, and use it. If it is, I am sorry)
If you haven't been able to tell yet, I write a lot, and don't use a lot of dialogue. My writing style has gotten me Cs for technique but ec for content. I am not sure if my chapters will be like that yet. References will be supplied more if people ask, and if numbers grow, and you actually read my story (please do, if not, I won't cry much) I will supply them at the end of my chapters. Also, I can't do the funny stuff that some authors do, as much as I would like to. My humor has some other reference to it, and is not really considered the norm. Monty Python has been my friend. NE! (Sorry if spelled wrong.) So, now that you all are about to kill me, I will stop now. Remember all my disclaimers, please, and if I missed any, let me know. I'll respond some time.
Now that you all are just waking up from my rant, I apologize again. R&R, give me reasonable flames, or just tell me you read it please. (It has taken me about one or two years of thinking, trying, and rewriting to reach this point, and I will change this, I already know.) Yeah, I have school in four or five hours, so I should go eat dinner. Night...evil day time country...
SaturnsDarkness
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ***Slaughtered Destinies: appetizer/intro***
"Slaughter at the Warehouse"
The sounds of battle and the familiar cries of the famous senshi attacks rang through the night as a battle that had been raging since ten o'clock ended abruptly sometime in the early morning. Witnesses say that a large
explosion, 'with colors of the rainbow' ended the fight, and left everything behind dead or destroyed, including the senshi. As authorities arrived on the scene, it was found that two of what at first appeared to be charred human remains were still breathing, but not by much. As the senshi dressed in purple and black, and the well known leader, Sailor Moon, were rushed off to Saint Helen's memorial hospital, the remaining bodies were bagged and sent off to the nearest chemistry laboratory to exactly conclude
why this happened. Currently, both living senshi are in critical condition, and going under surgery to remove the shards of the materials that dotted the surrounding buildings that had buried themselves in their
bodies. More news at five....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Saint Helen's Critical unit ward ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Moonlight and early sunlight shone on the still faces of the two senshi, still in uniform, due to massive burns and secret identities. It had been hours sense the powers of each of the senshi had exploded into one, and hours sense their comrades had been decimated by everything else near the warehouse. The only good part of it had been that the master mind behind the recent attacks could plot no more, but it had come with a large price
PLUTO
The last thing she had seen had been the creature charging at her queen, and her last action was the physical and mental protection of her queen. Her formerly white uniform was in pieces and a charred black, but if it were to be removed countless disastrous things could happen. Luckily, only her body was dying, and her mind was stronger, but not by much. Slowly, she was going to where her father had gone millenniums ago, but she had one thing to while she was still in the current dimension.
Being unable to move from her stiff and sore position on the uncomfortable hospital bed, she reached for her emergency energy quantities, located in the jewel of her bow of her uniform. Slowly, her dark jewel lit up to a white, and was completely drained. Slowly the senshi uniform faded, revealing a typical robe that was meant for bedtime, and Pluto learned that when she was in senshi form, pain tolerance was more. The light released did not alert any of the hospital staff in hospital, which was a good thing, for this could be considered suicide, if they the staff would have understood what she was about to do. Using the last of her energy, her life force, she began to reach out to find her queen, which she knew was alive, but stopped repeated for weakness and other physical death symptoms. *Highness.....* Oh, how this hurt, using telepathic speech. *Your highness, you have to know something before I leave.* the queen did not stir but her slight jump in energy told Pluto that she was aware. *You have to leave before it is too late. The evil is not gone, and will start to hunt you down before you can recover, if you do...I cannot tell you everything, there is no time, but know that you must live, you must destroy it...you must destroy it....I am sorry I cannot do any more to help you, but please, take....this.....* energy started to heal the queen's body, and just as her consciousness became awake again, the extra energy pushed her back to oblivion, only letting her hear 'bunny', and 'remember Saturn' before she was once again out of it and drifting towards that white light once again.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So do you like it? Do you hate it? See prior disclaimer, but please hit the good little review button down there, and I will try my best to respond personally, but I can't guarantee anything within the week of the review. I will try though; can I get points for that? YAY!!!!!!!! YOU WILL ALL BOW DOWN TO WORSHIP ME!!! (Beats down twin demon) It does get a little violent if it isn't happy, so please respond.
Okay, a note is that I have not been to Tokyo, hated the anime for what they did to the manga, and haven't left my stupid small town for more than one week. Sorry if it isn't accurate enough for all you people with lives.
Umm...what else did I borrow...some spells in here are my own creation, some from D&D 3.0 people (do not own these) and from other books...oh yeah, that was my next confession/evil idea. This story has magic in it, (notice how it isn't spelled with a 'k' if it matters to anyone but me) reincarnation, spirits/ghosts/souls and anything else people will have problems with. For all those sensible people, my English teachers always did find my papers, oh how can you say it, interesting. This part is very mild, but I am rating it for what he others will be b/c I want the entire story in one general location. I am not going to say that you have to be a certain age to read this, but it depends on your personal maturity level.
Where the story is concerned is that considering how I hated how Darien and Serena realized each others love for each other and I think it is crap, (oh, and language is in here, to) It didn't happen. It is a SD (Serena and Darien) romance, there are general/senshi parings later, and the family history is with Greek gods/goddesses, and probably Roman to, for when I have caffeine and have time to write this, I get confused easily. The romance will be slow. Oh, I am also planning three parts, and I have a you-review-and-I'll-continue-the-story deal going on. Currently, I am on the second part.
Don't worry, I am nearly done. I'll take flames within reason. Reason means that you should have a good explaination and/or better idea for me to respond. Another note is that I hate Chibiusa, or mini moon, or Rini, or whatever you call her. She is irritating, and I think she is the very being of evil. Tuxedo Mask, the vigilante, I don't understand very well, besides the appearance and the sappy connection with sailor moon. I don't think he is even hot. (Inu Yasha and Sessomaru are more my type) The pink hair thing also doesn't fit with the gene pool, and that is also irritating, besides many things. A few of the characters (most) are OOC, or are OC. Serena is not a ditz, and should never have been. I am calling it her way to hide that she is the future head of the Silver Alliance. (Sorry if you or someone you know came up with it. I read it some where, for got who wrote it, and use it. If it is, I am sorry)
If you haven't been able to tell yet, I write a lot, and don't use a lot of dialogue. My writing style has gotten me Cs for technique but ec for content. I am not sure if my chapters will be like that yet. References will be supplied more if people ask, and if numbers grow, and you actually read my story (please do, if not, I won't cry much) I will supply them at the end of my chapters. Also, I can't do the funny stuff that some authors do, as much as I would like to. My humor has some other reference to it, and is not really considered the norm. Monty Python has been my friend. NE! (Sorry if spelled wrong.) So, now that you all are about to kill me, I will stop now. Remember all my disclaimers, please, and if I missed any, let me know. I'll respond some time.
Now that you all are just waking up from my rant, I apologize again. R&R, give me reasonable flames, or just tell me you read it please. (It has taken me about one or two years of thinking, trying, and rewriting to reach this point, and I will change this, I already know.) Yeah, I have school in four or five hours, so I should go eat dinner. Night...evil day time country...
SaturnsDarkness
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ***Slaughtered Destinies: appetizer/intro***
"Slaughter at the Warehouse"
The sounds of battle and the familiar cries of the famous senshi attacks rang through the night as a battle that had been raging since ten o'clock ended abruptly sometime in the early morning. Witnesses say that a large
explosion, 'with colors of the rainbow' ended the fight, and left everything behind dead or destroyed, including the senshi. As authorities arrived on the scene, it was found that two of what at first appeared to be charred human remains were still breathing, but not by much. As the senshi dressed in purple and black, and the well known leader, Sailor Moon, were rushed off to Saint Helen's memorial hospital, the remaining bodies were bagged and sent off to the nearest chemistry laboratory to exactly conclude
why this happened. Currently, both living senshi are in critical condition, and going under surgery to remove the shards of the materials that dotted the surrounding buildings that had buried themselves in their
bodies. More news at five....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Saint Helen's Critical unit ward ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Moonlight and early sunlight shone on the still faces of the two senshi, still in uniform, due to massive burns and secret identities. It had been hours sense the powers of each of the senshi had exploded into one, and hours sense their comrades had been decimated by everything else near the warehouse. The only good part of it had been that the master mind behind the recent attacks could plot no more, but it had come with a large price
PLUTO
The last thing she had seen had been the creature charging at her queen, and her last action was the physical and mental protection of her queen. Her formerly white uniform was in pieces and a charred black, but if it were to be removed countless disastrous things could happen. Luckily, only her body was dying, and her mind was stronger, but not by much. Slowly, she was going to where her father had gone millenniums ago, but she had one thing to while she was still in the current dimension.
Being unable to move from her stiff and sore position on the uncomfortable hospital bed, she reached for her emergency energy quantities, located in the jewel of her bow of her uniform. Slowly, her dark jewel lit up to a white, and was completely drained. Slowly the senshi uniform faded, revealing a typical robe that was meant for bedtime, and Pluto learned that when she was in senshi form, pain tolerance was more. The light released did not alert any of the hospital staff in hospital, which was a good thing, for this could be considered suicide, if they the staff would have understood what she was about to do. Using the last of her energy, her life force, she began to reach out to find her queen, which she knew was alive, but stopped repeated for weakness and other physical death symptoms. *Highness.....* Oh, how this hurt, using telepathic speech. *Your highness, you have to know something before I leave.* the queen did not stir but her slight jump in energy told Pluto that she was aware. *You have to leave before it is too late. The evil is not gone, and will start to hunt you down before you can recover, if you do...I cannot tell you everything, there is no time, but know that you must live, you must destroy it...you must destroy it....I am sorry I cannot do any more to help you, but please, take....this.....* energy started to heal the queen's body, and just as her consciousness became awake again, the extra energy pushed her back to oblivion, only letting her hear 'bunny', and 'remember Saturn' before she was once again out of it and drifting towards that white light once again.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So do you like it? Do you hate it? See prior disclaimer, but please hit the good little review button down there, and I will try my best to respond personally, but I can't guarantee anything within the week of the review. I will try though; can I get points for that? YAY!!!!!!!! YOU WILL ALL BOW DOWN TO WORSHIP ME!!! (Beats down twin demon) It does get a little violent if it isn't happy, so please respond.