Viktor
I decided to edit the story a bit as a faitful reviwer told me. I hope you enjoy the revised version.
Viktor Von Doom, a.k.a. Dr. Doom gently set down a large box on top of two others. "Perfect," he murmured with satisfaction, observing the three boxes. Viktor turned around to grab another box but he stopped when he herd a small creak.
"Crap," an invisible Sue Storm muttered as she gently removed her foot from the creaky floor. She quickly set it down several inches way, where the floor seemed most sturdy. However, the recovery did not sufficiently kill Doom's suspicions. He headed over to where Sue was, lifting his hood to reveal his metal mask.
"Hello Sue," Viktor greeted before he launched a blast of electricity from his cold hands. Sue was able to raise a shield just in time but the shield wasn't strong enough to bounce off the entire attack. Sue lost her invisibility and was thrown to the floor. "How've you been?"
"Pretty good," Sue answered with a scowl as a wisp of invisible energy erupted from her body and forced Dr. Doom to take several steps back but it didn't take long for him to recover.
"Is that all you got Sue? I expected better," Dr. Doom said, disappointed as he looked down upon her. "And where's your little crew?"
"Right here bolt face," a voice boomed from across the room. Dr. Doom looked up, only to receive a wooden crate right into his face. The attack had sent him flying straight into an empty pile of crates. The Thing walked up to Sue, helping her up. "You okay Susie?"
"Just peachy," sue said sarcastically as she dusted herself off.
"Good," Thing said before running straight for Viktor. "It's clobberin' time!" Thing roared as he rammed his shoulder into Viktor, knocking him through the wall and into the streets, leaving a large hole in the cement wall.
As Viktor fell into the streets, people realized what was happening and scurried to get out of the way. Cars screeched to a halt and people evacuated from the nearby buildings. He easily got up and shrugged the dust off him and faced down the Thing.
"Where did you get that ridiculous line? A comic book?" Doom asked with a small laugh, his hands glowing blue with power.
"Actually, it was an action figure," Ben retorted. As if it were a cue, a ball of flame emerged from nowhere and hit Dr. Doom head on. Johnny Storm settled onto the ground and the flames around dissipated.
"And it was a good action figure too," Johnny said smoothly.
As the flames disappeared, Dr. Doom patted down a burn on his robe's shoulder quite calmly. "I'm sure it was," Dr. Doom said, seeming rather bored. With incredible speed, Doom launched a blast of lightning that hit the Thing, knocking him to the ground. Johnny became a lit again, soaring into the air. He fired several blasts of fire at Dr. Doom but he canceled out each one with a blast of electricity. The shared a trading of attacks until one of Doom's attacks overcame Johnny's.
He fell to the floor with a scream, landing hard on his ass. Rubbing it quite gently, he let out a small, "ow."
"Time to die kid," Dr. Doom said, firing a bolt of electricity right for Johnny. He closed his eyes and expected the worst but all that happened was a large boom and a gasp. Johnny opened his eyes and saw that a transparent shield was surrounding him. He looked up to see that Sue had risen up a shield for him.
Behind her, Reed emerged from the wall, his hand forming a giant mallet. He swung it sideways quiet hard, the makeshift weapon slamming into Dr. Doom's side.
"Are you okay Johnny?" Sue asked as she dropped her shield. Johnny merely nodded. Sue took her brother's hand and helped him up, just as they heard a scream. Reed had slammed into them, the wind knocked out of him. Sue had caught Reed but was forced backwards, knocking Johnny back like a domino.
"You're a jerk, you know that?" Sue said venomously, giving Dr. Doom an icy glare filled with hatred.
"That's what my butler told me," Viktor said quite wittily. Then, a strange sound came from behind and Viktor was suddenly pulled back and into the wall, a strand of web attached to his back. The three followed the strand's trail to see that it had originated from Spiderman, who was perched on top of a lamppost.
"You didn't start the party without me, did you?" Spiderman asked as he jumped off from the lamppost he was perched on top of.
"Fashionably late, I see," an irritated Dr. Doom said as he emerged from the hole. Spiderman's spider sense went blaring and le jumped into the air, barely avoiding a burst of electricity. "I've been wondering when I would meet you Spiderman. Quite the honor, although you are a bit small…"
"You know, you really should switch lotions," Spiderman shot back quite wittily, staring at his metal face.
"I think the one I have works just fine," Dr. Doom said as a lightning wave shot out of his metal hand. Spiderman jumped out of the way, the bolt blasting apart a newspaper stand, which burst into flames.
"I guess it's time for Round 1," Spiderman said, he and the others leapt into battle.
Johnny and Spiderman went up to bat first. Spiderman jumped around quite gracefully, landing in a punch or kick here and there. Johnny shot fire balls from his hands, alternating with Spiderman's attacks. Dr. Doom quickly retaliated by blocking one of Spiderman's punches and kneeing him in the stomach, who grunted with pain. He then threw Spiderman right into Johnny who was knocked out of the air along with Spiderman.
"Man you're heavy," Johnny complained, trying to push.
"Deal with it," Spiderman grunted, rubbing his sore head.
Sue came up next. She created a force field around Dr. Doom, constricting him into a huddled position. "Hurry up! I can't keep him like this forever!" Sue shouted, her posture faltering as Doom struggled to get out of the containment field.
Ben and Reed nodded in agreement and got into position. Reed held onto a streetlight and stretched his arm across the street. He fastened himself on another streetlight across the street and signaled Ben to continue. Ben ripped off a mailbox nearby and threw it right at Reed's outstretched arm. The mailbox stretched Reed's arm, the limb expanding backwards until it finally snapped back like a rubbed band. The mailbox flung through the air and hit Dr. Doom, dragging him along the road.
Dr. Doom burst open the mailbox, ripping it to shreds, emerging from the wreckage quite calmly, letters scattering onto the floor everywhere.
"You won't stay down, will you?" Ben asked, scratching his head.
"I guess so," Dr. Doom said as he dusted himself off. He then lifted his hands into the air and began charging himself. The streetlights and the various other electrical objects began to flicker and lose power and in just mere seconds, currents of electricity came from each and every device and flowed to Dr. Doom's hands.
"Guess he doesn't have to worry about electric bills," Johnny joked. Ben shook his head in disapproval.
"Much better," Dr. Doom said as he finally finished absorbing the electricity around him.
"Careful, he's getting more powerful," Reed warned.
"Thanks for the update," Johnny said sarcastically.
"Now, where were we?" Dr. Doom said, his body crackling with power. "Ah yes, I remember now." Dr. Doom let out a widespread wave of energy. Sue raised a large shield, blocking the attack. Ben ripped up a streetlight from its stand and ran for Dr. Doom. He swung it hard but Dr. Doom was able to grab it. "Nice try." Dr. Doom charged up the metallic street light, the current running toward the other end. Ben howled in pain and let go of the street light.
Spiderman swooped in at that exact moment, swinging into Doom on a strand of web, knocking him away several meters. Johnny followed up by charging Dr. Doom, streaking through the air, his flaming body ramming Doom. He was sent back even farther, his feet digging into the floor.
Sue came up next, creating several blasts of energy in the shape of her body, forcing Dr. Doom to stumble back even farther.
Spiderman was about to leap into action until Reed's arm stretched out and grabbed his shoulder. Spiderman turned around to face the scientist, forming a look of confusion under his mask.
"Spiderman, is your web flammable?" Reed inquired. Spiderman quickly caught on. "Just get the webbing on him and we'll handle the rest."
"Gotcha," Spiderman said with a thumbs up. Spider leapt onto the wall and observed the fight below. "Hey ugly, up here!" Dr. Doom looked up and Spiderman quickly began launching web balls. Dr. Doom was taken by surprise, the wave of web balls overcoming him. It didn't take long for Dr. Doom to be covered in web.
"Is that it?" Dr. Doom asked the web slinger, rather disappointed, although he was quite sticky and constricted. "Damn it, I can't move!" Dr. Doom cried in frustration, trying to pull his feet off the ground but the web kept him grounded.
"Johnny! Now's our chance, torch him!" Reed called out.
It took Johnny a few seconds to realize what was going on, looking from Reed to Doom but he quickly caught on.
"Flame on!" Johnny screamed, his body becoming surrounded in flames. He drew back his arms and let out a burst of fire, lighting the webbing. Dr. Doom suddenly became surrounded in flames, not an inch of him was safe.
Reed looked around the environment, looking for something like a fire hydrant but it was too far away for the water to reach. He looked for anything else that released water. His eyes settled on a fire hose, which was hanging in an emergency case in a nearby building. He snapped out his arms, grabbing hold of the hose. He pulled it out and carried it as far as he could. When he reached is limit, he turned on the hose and let the water spray.
"Sue! Get the water to Viktor!" Reed called over the rushing water. Sue looked to her fiancé and saw the stream of water emerging from the hose. Reed guided the water toward her and she created a curved shield, where the water bounced off of and landed right on Dr. Doom. Reed kept the water going for several seconds and he shut it off. When the smoke surrounding Dr. Doom cleared, the five heroes saw a still meal statue.
"Finally," Ben said with relief.
"I don't get it, how come we had to get him all sticky like that?" Johnny asked, his face twisted with confusion.
"If we had tried the same trick again, he might have avoided it. So, we took a bit different approach," Reed explained quite fluently.
"Right…" Johnny said, scratching his head.
"Uh guys, we have a problem," Ben said, pointing at Dr. Doom. Everyone turned to look at the still Dr. Doom, who suddenly began moving again, several fragments of metal chipping off him.
"If that didn't work once, what makes you think it'll work again?" Dr. Doom asked, confidence poisoning his already overbearing voice.