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here something I just want you to do in your spare time before reviewing, go to dictionary, look up Mary Sue. didn't find it? neither did I but that's because a Mary sue is, and always will be, a matter of opinion.

And By The Way, all of the stuff written here was thought of by me months before the finale so I'm not stealing any of this! I thought of this and wrote in down while the show was on waiting

Jade swam up to the surface really fast. Lynn came up holding her bleeding lower lip and glaring at Jade.

"I know your afraid of going under water, but DID YOU HAVE TO KICK MY FACE?"

"well sor-ry!" Jade said.

Sokka came up, his lower lip was bleeding too.

"So who kicked my face?"

"She did," Lynn said pointing at Jade.

"Why?"

"Because she's afraid of going under water, and every time she gets under water she swims like a mad man just to get to the surface,"

"Odd phobia for someone who claimed to be a great swimmer,"

"Fine! I'm sorry! are we going to go in or wait till the sharks bite our butts off!"

"Sh, Sharks?" Lynn squeaked looking down at the black/ blue water she was treading in.

"Just don't think about it and it will go away," Jade told her sister who's eyes were close to the size of melons.

"oka, okay," she choked out.

She submerged under and swam with only her legs propelling her, her hands were feeling the walls for any holes she found one and went through it looking around. She could barely make out what was in front of her with all the ash in the water.

She swam to as close to the surface as she could be without getting caught then she saw a bridge and decided to come up there.

People were walking on the bridge above her, one ran, then all of the sudden it seemed as if everyone died because there was several thuds and then, silence. Then she heard talking. She could barely her it but it sounded like someone was introducing an important person she listened so hard it hurt her head then she finally managed to hear what it was about.

"Princess Zula is going to track down Zuko and kill the failure!" the person speaking said. There was a cheer as Lynn felt her stomach shift forward, then back,

What is going to happen? Well duh he's going to die retard! But were going to stop them, right? Well right now your supposed to see if it's safe! Lynn's head was having an argument with itself.

Sokka and Jade:

"She seems to be down there for a while," Sokka said trying to start a conversation.

"I know what happened to your last girlfriend and her fiancé and I'm so sorry,"

"How did you know that-"

"Your girlfriend is now the moon goddess and her fiancé is mince meat from getting run over by the fire nation ship? It's kinda funny what spirts can and will see, Death is a sad topic so why don't we change it?'

"So you were slaughtered?" Sokka said remebering the topic that was brought up in the daytime.

"You do realize that's not changing the subject at all?"

"Yes. I just want to know," Sokka said.

"Well, if you truly want to know I'll tell you, but only if,"

"Yes."

(AN warning If you don't like sad things that make you cry, then skip until you see another one of these authors notes)

"Well I remember the day like yesterday, we were doing chores and Lynn had a sugar rush, so I let her go off while I did her chores, so she jumped onto her scooter and fled off, and I'm not to sure what happened between when she left, and when she came back screaming,"

flash back Yay!

"Okay Lynn go ride off that sugar rush then,"

"Sugar, sugar. Sugar!" Lynn said hyperactively as she went riding off on her scooter at full speed.

she reached the top of the hill nearly exhausted, when she saw Fire nation troops on the shore.

"THE FIRE NATION RE COMING! THE FIRE NATION ARE COMING!" Lynn kept on screaming as she rode though her village.

"oh look it's miss. cry wolf, what did you see this time? And aren't you supposed to be doing your chores you little threat to society!" Someone said to her at the market. Her eyesburned with tears of desperateness as she went straight to her best friend Ling.

"Ling, you have to believe me I am not lying I saw fire nation ships on our shores!" she said fast and desperately.

"No joke?" Ling asked causuosly.

"Do I look like I'm joking!" she asked. All of the suddenthey heard screams, she looked up the hill to see a bunch of troops coming down. Ling screamed as if she had just gotten shot.

"I hate to say this at a time like now but, I told you so!" Lynn said.

"This is a life and death matter and your making fun of me?" Ling screeched.

"What ever happens, were still friends right?"

"I hope we don't die if that's what your asking,"

"If we do than?"

"Yes through thick and thin, death and life, we will still be friends!" they said there quote together and ran.

"Jade, Jade! JADE!" Lynn and Ling screamed together.

"Lynn!" screamed a faint voice.

They ran up to each other and ran together,until somehow, in the rushing chaos, they got separated. Lynn ran into the school to find the fire nation killing off innocent children because they couldn't run away fast enough.

She ran away fast then jumped over a corpse falling onto the bloody, unforgiving floor.

She suddenly felt a pain so strong she thought it would make her throw up she looked at her ankle that was contorted in a strange way then it donned on her that she had just broken her ankle.

She forced herself up and through the pain started limp/running as fast as she could. As she ran a guy threw a spear that went straight though her side by 4 inches going almost all around the left side of her stomach. She yelped in pain and fell on the floor again. Ling pulled her up and screamed.

"I'm alive please don't scream," Lynn said weakly

"You just saved my life! That spear was aimed right at my heart and your side stopped it, I won't let you die now," she said as Lynn started getting up with tear stained cheeks Ling made her run, forced her to go up the hill to the north.

"I'll take care of it just hide!" Ling said gesturing for her to go over the hill.

She scrambled up the hill as fast as her adrenalin and sugar rush could carry her. Half way upshe stumbled and fell.

Her pain and sorrow was catching up to her, her tears falling into a small puddle, she couldn't care about her safety anymore. She ran back down the hill and shot every element she could bend at them knocking a few down and scorching a few beyond recognition.

Houses were burning, people were dying and all Lynn could do was what she was doing now, she felt like a failure.

All the sudden her mind buzzed she felt too sick for words her head had Jades voice in it she was sending a telepathic message. I'm dead! Mom and Dad have died! It screamed.

That's was the final straw. All elements zoomed around her in a circle with top speed. It started outsmall but then got bigger and bigger all of the village people went through it and some firebenders died some of them hid behind something to protect themselves. The ball got so big it nearly covered half of the island when it suddenly stopped and Lynn was so weak she fell unconscious.

The fight didn't stop, but it all went uphill for the earth village from there.

(A/N okey doke guys all done here but if you missed it your missing some pretty good stuff)
"And that's what happened," Jade said quietly.

"I'm so sorry, here I was thinking what happened to my friend was bad while all this was going on,"

"It's okay, all people have a selfish desire that something bad that's happened to them as the worst thing in the world regardless of what they've heard before,"

Lynn resurfaced at the top of the water

"So what have you been talking about?" Lynn asked.

"Nothing" Jade said " so did you find a way in?"

"Yes I did, get the others because were ready!" Lynn said.

Okay guys! Long chapter! it was 4 pages and 1520 words! I hope you don't mind because the finale is probably going to be longer,

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