Last chapter is going to be long, let me thank (or not thank) every person that has been kind enough to review in the order of how many reviews they gave:
Katuko: thanks for sticking with me though the good and bad (and even insane!) moments in the past 6 months. I now dub thee, BEST REVIEWED OF AN AVATARS SECRET! -gives Internet hug- YOU HAVE REVIEWED MY STORY AN AWESOME TOTAL OF 18 TIMES! CONGRATS!
fire blazing chan s.e: well, you were a great reviewed while you lasted -weeps- why did you stop REVIEWING? don't answer, I already know, if you're reading this, even if it kills you, please review, even if you're going to give me a flame, YOU HAVE REVIEWED MY STORY A COOL TOTAL OF 12 TIMES! I dub thee, SECOND BEST RENEWER! -tries to give Internet hug, no one to give it to-
fairy pyrate chaos joe: thank you ssoo much for all you're kind words and support, YOU HAVE REVIEWED10 TIMES!
Chips dip: I'm sorry for blocking you, I unblocked you so now you can flame me, or whatever you want to do, YOU HAVE REVIEWED A TOTAL OF 7 TIMES! thank you,
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air water princess: thank you for every thing. YOU HAVE REVIEWED A TOTAL OF 3 TIMES!
Wally's girlfriend: thanks. YOU HAVE REVIEWER A TOTAL OF 3 TIMES!
Amber hawk: thank you for the advice! YOU HAVE REVIEWED 2 TIMES!
Firebending guy: Thank you and of course, she is not dead or else there wouldn't be 24 chapters YOU HAVE REVIEWED 2 TIMES!
here are all my one time reviewers:
;lksdafj: what ever, you flamed my pal so why should I care what you say
can you say Mary suing: at first response I say SHUT UP BIT(beep:censored)! but at second glance I say I'm sorry you feel that way I'm trying to fix it as best as I can.
Hungry spider: that site that you put didn't work but I could tell what you meant and, I'm sorry you fell that way and I'm trying to fix it.
kayko15: I'm glad you like it and as you can see it's still up and running.
kereea: I'm glad you liked it too!
princess falling star: I'm so sorry no one else reveiwed, I guess there wouldn't know a good story if it bit them in the butt!
Regina 3315: thank you for the advice! ;-)
silver wolf: thank you sssssssssoooooooooo much for those suggestions! they were wonderful!
wandering mind 911: thank you for the dancing gnome! -Fights Zuko with light saber for it-
wow! reading all those reviews really brought back memories, here's the story:
"Should we go in though there?" Aang asked looking at the spot that Lynn crawled through.
"Won't someone see us?" Suki asked.
"Nope I know how to get there just hold your breath,"
They all jumped in the water and swam through that hole.
"Okay now we go up and split up so were not so suspicious," Lynn said once they reached the top.
"Split by two, Sokka with Suki, Katara with me, Haru by himself, and Lynn with Jade,"
"I always get stuck with her," Lynn and Jade grumbled in unison.
Jade and Lynn walked down the north hallway above the bridge, and walked, and searched for any signs of the fire lord, and walked up alot of stairs, (and this will get boring so I'll put it on fast forward until something interesting happens).They stopped because they were tired of walking up thousands of flights of stairs. They were up right next to the ceiling when sudenly they heard a noise from on the roof then Ling broke through with a hammer.
Lynn screamed then fell over. Jade looked at Lynn.
"Don't scare me like that! Now help me up please,"
Ling looked at Jade, screamed, then fell over.
"But, and, what, how? But uh, ah di di but. She's. Dead!" Ling finally chocked out.
"Not any more," Lynn said getting up.
"Your in trouble Lynn," Ling said.
"For scaring you?"
"No, for running away, Chihero's on the roof waiting for me to take you back to Linkato,"
"I'm not coming back," Lynn said.
"What did you say?" Chihero said while coming down though the roof.
"I said I'm not going, I'm old enough to make my own choices," She replied coldly.
"Your coming whether you like it, or not!" Chihero yelled.
Lynn saw Ling's scooter. I hope this wont make Ling hate me. She thought as she jumped on pulling Jade with her. Ling yelled a cuss word and jumped on Chihero's scooter following close behind. They neared towards a stairway.
"Crap, abandon ship!" Lynn yelled while jumping off andtumbling down the stairsas fast as she could.
"Split up," Jade said as they were running towards a fork in the path,"
Lynn ran down a random hall. She was runnig so fast she couldn't see where she was going she ran strait into a guard.
"Oh, I'm so sorry don't arrest me I'm innocent!"
"I'm not going to Lynn," He said raising that little mask thing showing that it was Zuko.
"ZU-"
"Don't say anything," he said
"Where is Ozai?" Lynn asked.
"Where is the avatar?"
"Great, your back to the 'oh I'm going to get my honor back even though daddy dearest is going to kill me once I return' self arn't you?" Lynn remarked sarcastically.
"No, I got your message,"
"Not my telepathic message, I just for see random things,"
"Well it certainly wasn't my mom,"
"My twin sister wanted to talk some sense into you,"
"There's two of you?"
Before Lynn could answer, the whole gang came running into the hallway stampeding over her before they stopped.
"Zuko! Your not getting your hands on Aang again," Katara said.
"He doesn't want the avatar!" Lynn said/moaned in painwhile standing up.
"Then what does he want? And why are you defending him?" Aang asked.
"He wants to kill Ozai, and the reason that I'm defending him and is on his side is because, he's my cousin!"
"Gasp!"
"Ha Ha, good joke," Sokka said.
"I'm afraid she's not joking" Jade and Zuko said.
"Gasp!"
"Can we go before we attract unwanted attention?" Ling asked walking up beside Lynn.
"Gasp!" (Okay the gasping is really boring me but that's there reaction to all of this.)
"Okay Lynn, sorry for trying to make you go back I didn't realize that you were going to do something this cool!" Ling said.
"Where's Chihero?"
"Somewhere back there, I ditched her to chase you,"
"Okay do you know what were doing?"
"No, I'll wing it,"
They ran up to the door and Lynn listened in to there conversation.
"What are you doing?"Suki asked
"We have to come in at the right time or else we'll look like idiots,"
"But what if-" Haru asked
"Shut up guys," Ling whispered while listening
"So your sure your plan is fool proof?" some random person said.
"Yes no one would ever be able to over power the fire nation," Ozai said.
"Now" she whispered as they burnt a huge hole though the wall.
"Think again!" Zuko yelled.
They all bended stuff at him and he bended fire at them faster than they expected. Almost all of them fell down at the sudden blow, but Lynn, Jade, and Ling were behind some people, jumped out of the group and started attacking asfast and hardas they could.
"Earth," Lynn said as she tried to pelt him with stones and dirt.
"Air," Ling said as she tried to blow him against the wall.
"Water," Jade said trying to douse the fire around him.
They formed the trio trick which helped them get more power.
Sudenly someone pounced on Lynn and started attacking her with fire.
"Who are you!" Lynn shouted while attacking her with earth and water.
Zuko ran up and helped.He took a random sword off the ground and slit Zula's throat. Zula's blood splatted all over Lynn and Zuko.
"You couldn't of killed her faster!" Lynn asked looking at her blood-splattered outfit.
"I'll let her suffer," He said wacthing her writhe and scream in pain while bleeding to death.
"oh, uh, okay?" Lynn said inching away slowly.
She ran up behind Ling, eager to help out in any way. then she found her oppertunity. Lynn Shot a sneak attack at Ozai and smashed him with a rock, she lifted him again and smashed him like someone would squash a beetle with a rock. She stopped, Ozai layed there, motionless, on the ground. Lynn turned around and whispered to Jade.
"He's not dead, do you think he is?"
"He is only mortal," Jade said.
"No, he can't be dead, not after all that he's done he can't die that fast,"
"Tell that to Zuko," Jade said.
Lynn turned around to see Zuko was only 10 feet from his dad and walking towards him more.
"Zuko NO! He's not-"
She wasn't quick enough Ozai jumped up and started burning him to a crisp.
Lynn did an air bending move to drag him over to them.
"Katara! Please! You need to heal him," Lynn said.
Katara did as she was told while he was writhing on the floor. She healed every single burn including the scar, and without the scar he actually looked kinda cute. (Yes something to give you Katuko's and Zutara's for the holidays).
"New idea! Everybody try to get that fire around him to extinguish then maybe he be mortal enough for Zuko and Aang to do away with," Ling said facing away from the flinging, fire, of death (that was terrible writing, BETA READER OVER HERE PLEASE!).
"Lets go,"
They all tried to extinguish him with great success. He was completely normal when they were done.
"Zuko, Aang, wanna kill him or not?"
Zuko gave him no mercy with all the force of his fury he could get. And Aang used earth to kill him. When they were done there was nothing left of him except for his bloody burnt pulp. There was nothing left of the whole royal family except for Zuko, Lynn, and what was still remainig of Zula. Zuko walked off somewherebut Lynn stayed.
Suddenly Lynn felt a very empty feeling, she looked around, she saw Zula, still bleeding to death but so little enegy she couldn't do anything, but as hard as she looked though the almost over chaos she couldn't find Jade, her time was up,was too late to cry yet she just wished she had some time to say good bye.
She looked back at Zula, Zula twitched a tiny bit then remained motionless in a pool of her own blood, Lynn's curiosity made her walk over to get a better look. Lynn reached down very slowly and tried to feel her pulse, but there was nothing. Lynn looked at her own feet which were in this gory puddle, she walked out of it, not freaked that it was blood, she had seen so much of it, that it was no longer gross. She wondered who this dead stranger was. What she did wrong. What she did to reserve this cruel fate. She was clearly the princess. But...
She felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around hoping it was Jade, but it wasn't, It was Zuko and he gave her something that was sparkly and soft. She unfolded it and found that it was the most beautiful dark red dress she had ever in her life.
"Why are you giving this to me? You're the next heir to the throne,"
"I'm still just a banished prince, you're the next heir,"
She nearly fainted with excitement. All the guards bowed down, so did every one else.
"I'll check up on you every month to be sure you don't go mad with power," Aang said.
THE END
EPILOG: Lynn instantly un-banished Zuko and became dutchess. Aang still went to check on Zuko and Lynn to make sure they wouldn't go mad with power. Aang found out that, because he was the avatar, he couldn't get married or have kids, hearing that Zuko puposed to Katara, got married, and had 3 kids. The kingdom was ruled fairly and there was no more war ever again.
So how do you like? I tried so hard to make this as good as it could get. I really hope I got no one OCC, I might have gotten Zuko a little OCC, Maybe even Zula, not to sure, anywho If you want to know what the dress looks like go to my profile and press the home page button and it's in my profile pic. Just ignore the skeleton in it that was for a prank that Emma's crush did for a dance. I probably wont have a sequel, But I might repost it with a couple changes.
Bye!