Chapter 4 already. Wow. Thank you for thoughtful reviews!Well hope you enjoy chapter 4!PS.I had to get this one in before the thing with not being able to upload on the 30th.

chapter 4

THE DAY OF THE CARNIVAL

In Odd's dorm

Odd is getting ready for carnival as Ulrich walks in.

"Hey, where are you going?"Ulrich asks

"To the carnival."

"Why?"

"Ulrich, Ulrich, Ulrich.Haven't you realized I would do anything to go to the carnival."

"Not after you go one Apollo's Chariot(In bush gardens,it rocks!)" Ulrich said with a smirk

"Hey, it's not my fault Jeremie bought the fries.So i bought one.They were good."

"and green.Well good luck" Ulrich added

'"Thank you."Odd said leaving the room meeting Kiea in the courtyard.

Odd walks outside all red when he stops and sees Kiea standing there.Looking back at him.

"Hey Odd. Are you ready for the carnival!"

"Yeah."odd says

"Can we get french fries?"Kiea asked

"After we go on all of the rids."odd answered looking even redder

"Odd, you are sweating. Take of your jacket."

"It's ok.Well we better start walking. The ticket stand won't be open forever."

"How far is it?"

"About 13 blocks."odd says(13 blocks is kind of long but in France they walk home about a mile every day for lunch!)

Odd and Kiea start to walk and it is cold outside but Odd is sweating like crazy.

"Are you OK?"Kiea asks see odd shake

"Yeah."odd keeps on saying

"Odd your not OK."Kiea says and puts her arm around him thinking it will make him warmer. when she did that he felt her arm shaking too. By that he knew she was just afraid as he was but she fought it and comforted him.Odd did the only manly thing he could do. He put his arm on her waist."Is this OK?"Odd asks

"Yeah, it's fine."Kiea said not knowing that he was trying to make a connection with her

Odd sees the carnival.

"HEY, THERE IT IS!"Odd shouts and starts to run on-line. Kiea follows him

"Wow, look at that ride!" Kiea said pointing up at a ride.she couldn't believe she could see the ride from outside of the park.

"Wait until we get in. Then we can go on all of them!"Odd yells with joy!

They walk up on the line for the ticket booth.

"What kind of rides do they have Odd."Kiea asks curiously

"The best ones that will make you scream. Don't worry, I'll be there when you do."

"You'll be the one screaming Odd."Kiea giggled

They get up to the ticket booth and Odd pays for the bracelets.

"Odd, why did you pay for my ticket.I oue you 10 euros(money in France)."Kiea said reaching for her bag

"My treat."Odd said stopping her hand from reaching her bag

"Alright, but I have to get you back."

Kiea runs on like to the biggest roller coaster in the park. The one Odd freaks out on.

"Lets try a different one."Odd says shaking

"No, I want this one.It is big and fast! I love those rides.Besides, what better rid to start the day with."

"OK."

"Will, I fall out?" Kiea said(remember she doesn't know a lot about earth.)

"No, if you do i'll jump out and catch you."

Kiea smiles and rushes on the ride.

The ride starts and Odd is screaming and Kiea is having the time of her life!

"WHOOOOO!"Kiea shouts of joy, she throws her hand up in the air

"AHHHHHHHHHH!"Odd screams holding on for his life

A flash a light passes them and the ride ends.

"Errrrrrrr" it was the stop of the ride.

Kiea looks at her hair and it reminded her of Odd. So she took out Odd's cell and takes a picture.

"Hey. What's that?"Kiea said pointing at monitors

"That is a picture that you get from going on the ride."

"Lets get one for both of us!"

"OK."

Kiea looks at the pictures and giggles when she sees Odd face.

"You look like a dead cat."Kiea giggles

"It just shows my inner cat likeness."Odd said trying to make sense

The guy asks about the pictures

"Two pictures please."Kiea tells the man

The guy gives Kiea two picture in exchange for 10 euros.

"Here Odd. " Kiea said give Odd a picture.

"Hey why did you pay for me."

"I had to get you back Odd." Kiea said with a smile and then her eyes light up."LOOK AT THAT!"Kiea shouts pointing to a games

"Let the master show you how it's done."

Odd takes Kiea's hand and runs over.

"One game."Odd tells the man who is running the game

The man picks up 10 balls and gives them to Odd.

'What you have to do is knock down the cats.The more cats you knock down the bigger the prize is."Odd explains to Kiea

"Oh. Cool." Kiea says in responds as she watches Odd

"What toy do you want Kiea?" Odd asks

"The big green bear is cute."

"Ok, I need to knock down 7 cats."Odd says and throws the first one and gets it.Odd eventually got Kiea the toy she wanted.

"Thank you."Kiea said blushing

"No problem."Odd says

"Hey look at that!What is it?" Kiea points to an Old house

"That's the haunted house. Do you want to go in? It is scary."Odd tells her

"I think I can handle it."Kiea said running on line with Odd following

They step in the machine that tours the through the house(A/N like the one in Disney)

"Ahhhh."Kiea screams and hold her head.Odd start to say softly "It's OK. It's all make believe." Odd put his arm around her.He realizes that she wasn't afraid but she was being hurt by a vision . "Oh no, Kiea!"Odd says keeping his voice low

IN THE VISION

Kiea is running with Odd chased by monsters. Then odd is gone and she is on Xanadu. A boy appears and takes out a sword and says "You have betrayed me for the last time Kiea!"Odd is shown being killed by something but the vision was too weak to make and just out what is was."You will meet the same fate as Odd."Odd's dead body is shown before her.She holds him and hugs him.

"Odd!"Kiea screams as she falls on the floor of Xanadu. She is on her knees with Odd dead in her arms.Before the sword plunges into her the vision ended.

Kiea starts to cry as Odd carries her out of the ride.he places her on a bench and hugs her . He wipes away her tears and asks what was the vision about.

She tells him and Odd says "That will never happen Kiea.I'll never leave your side."Odd says continuing hugging her.

"Do you want to go?" Odd asks

"No, I can't leave this place is too much fun!"Kiea says with a little smile

Odd wipes her tears away and stands up.

"Then what are we waiting for, sundown is soon so we want to get in 1 more ride!"Odd says picking Kiea back up to her feet.

"Lets go" Kiea said with a little smile.Odd nods and takes Kiea's hand again and leads her to the tunnel of love.

"What is this place?"Kiea asks not knowing what was in the tunnel

"I'll show you." Odd said getting on line. He was lead to a swan like boat and helps Kiea in.The ride began

Kiea felt so happy when she saw beautiful decorations and wonderful smells.Then she felt something else. Odd's arm wrapped around her waist and pulled her near and starts kissing her so softly.

Then is became more passionate and Odd is on top on Kiea . He starts to kiss her ear and works him way down to her neck. Then he slides over to her mouth again and kisses her.

Kiea felt strange. She had a sensation going through her. she didn't know what it was but she LOVED it.

Odd kisses her chest and gets a moan from Kiea.He knew she liked it but he wanted to make sure she was his not Jeremie's of Ulrich's.He kisses her so tender and then they see light. It was the end of the ride.

"Oh great." Odd says and helps Kiea up as they exit the ride

"Did you like that ride?"Odd asks

"That was my favorite one!"Kiea says and yawns

"You're tired. We should head back to Kadic."Odd tells her

"I don't want to go."Kiea says

"I know, we have to go to school and the carnival isn't going to stay forever."Odd tells her

"No, I don't want to leave you Odd." Kiea says

A flood of joy rushes through him. He finally won Kiea's heart. He could make her his now. He knew it wasn't definite. He had to make sure Ulrich and especially Jeremie don't spend too much time with her.

They were headed home and Odd puts his arm around her waist. He hoped she didn't make a comment. She didn't. They walked home talking about the day they had. Odd sees the school.

"Home sweet Home." Odd comments as he opens the door for Kiea. He leads her to her dorm and they walk in.

"I had a great time Odd.Goodnight Odd" Kiea whispers and kisses him goodnight.

"Goodnight Kiea"

With that she shut the door and placed the big green bear at the end of her bed and fell asleep.

The ending sucks. I know, I know! Well please review if you want to find out about what Jeremie thinks!