The Girls We Met In Hawaii

by Yusukes gurl Keiko

Discontinued: I sucked at writing...and feel it is unsaveable. Keiko,Botan,Shizuru&Yukina all go to a vacation in Hawaii and so do these four cute guys with the names of Yusuke,Hiei,Kurama,&Kuwabara they all accidently keep meeting eachother will they all fall in love or will the girls rules make them remain friends?

5. Snack Stores, Race and Crabs, Sand Castl...

The Girls We Met at Hawaii

Disclaimer: I do not own Yu Yu Haku Sho!

Yusuke: Ya and this time Keiko isn't gonna cry!

Keiko: I'm not?
Yusuke: Nope because you've got your man here! (Yusuke kisses Keiko on the cheek and pulls her near him and she blushes)

Kuruma: Looks like things are about to get heated up!

Shizuru: Ya we better leave come on! (Kurama and Shizuru walk out holding hands)

(Botan and Hiei in the back of the couch watching what is going on)

Hiei: Why are we hiding behind the couch?

Botan: Shh! I want to watch them!

Hiei: Well what's the point of watching them? (Hiei gets up sweeps Botan, off her feet and then with her in his arms, jumps out of the window) 'Why not do the same and experience what they are doing?' Hiei thinks as he jumps out of the window.

Yukina: I wonder where they went. That's so cute they love each other so much!

Kuwabara: Ya I can't believe it, Hiei loves Botan but baby, he doesn't love her as much as I love you!

Yukina: (weak smile) Lets get on with the story

Okay and now for my anonymous reviewers that I can't E-mail to thank. By the way if you just reviewed for me and I just posted my story on then I will thank you on the next chappie k? Now for the thankies!

(Yusuke) Thank you so much you're so nice! Thanks for the compliment! I'm glad you liked it! Woohoo! Now I feel special! And I'm glad you think I'm funny! I try my best! Please keep reading!

(Hiei's Shadow) Wow that was one of the nicest reviews ever! Thanks I always try to make them as their character and I'm glad that you think so! Thank you so much please keep reading! And yes your opinion does matter might I add that's such a great opinion! Wow you are all making me feel great today!  LOL!

By the way all of you that have been waiting such a long time I typed it out then it disappeared so I had to re-type it out, out of my head so its not as good as it was before I'm so sorry! But hey imagine how heart-broken I felt! I felt like to die and it was so cute and filled with fluff and sadly I can't remember what I wrote! So I had to redo it but I hope you like it! (Begins to cry)  Please read and review!

Chapter5 Snack Stores, Race and Crabs, Sand Castles, Talk!

Keiko's POV

            Yusuke and I were both running up the once crowded street that was now all just me and him! The sun was shining in my hair as I runned up beside Yusuke and grew exhausted. The sunlight sparked into my honey colored hair, while the wind softly played with my hair. 'Wow she looks so pretty in the sunlight.' Yusuke thought with a grin. "Wow I'm tired!" I said stopping making Yusuke turn to look at me with a smile. 'Dang she's pretty.' Yusuke thought again and slapped himself mentally for thinking that. 'It's all the stupid sunlight's fault. Dumb sunlight I should kill you.' Yusuke thought angrily and then looked at me to speak. "Come on Keiko, I know you can run a heck lot faster than that, I mean look at you!" He laughed. "Hey I'm getting tired I didn't eat anything!" I yelled back at him. "Ya, what shall I do carry you?" He asked with a grin. "No." I said with a slight blush. "Hey no need to overreact, chill, I won't carry you, now let's go." He laughed and pointed to where we were headed. "Yes, we're almost there!" I yelled and looked at the sign that read. The Snack Party Platter. "Yay, now hold on, we're going to run up there!" Yusuke smiled. "Alrighty then, you know Yusuke for a guy I just met we're pretty good friends too bad we'll never see each other again, but I'll never forget how we first met!" I laughed remembering the volleyball bouncing off of Yusukes head. "No kidding, I'll never forget you and neither will my bump!" He laughed pointing to his head. "Hey I'm sorry, I really didn't mean to." I smiled trying not to laugh. "It's cool, you just keep popping all over the place thank goodness it's me you bump into and not someone else." He smiled. "No kidding, Well let's hurry up I'm so tired of walking around!" I said with a frown. "Hey if you'd like I will carry you." Yusuke laughed which made me blush red again. "No, that's fine thank you now those hungry pigs are starved let's hurry up!" I yelled and so we both ran up the street until we approached the store that we had been looking for.

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            Shizuru and Kurama were both huddled close to each other while they chatted about many things. They looked as a happy couple chatting about their wildest dreams. 'I can't help it why am I falling for her! I won't I can't its not that I don't want to it's just she won't fall in love with me I am but confused as to what I should do.' Kurama thought. "Wow, where is that girl when you need her I'm starved!" Shizuru grinned. "Here, it's not really much but it should keep us both quiet." Kurama grinned and threw a bag of chips to Shizuru. "Thanks, you really are a ladies man." Shizuru grinned. "I'll take that as a compliment. Where's that other friend of yours?" Kurama asked referring to me. "Oh you mean Keiko, well she went to the pizza parlor we were all too lazy so we made her go and get it for us." Shizuru laughed. "Where's the punk that got hit by the volleyball?" Shizuru asked. "Well we must have minds alike because we sent him out there too. I wonder if they'll meet up." Kurama thought and asked Shizuru. "Who knows that girl is so funny and it seems that so is he." Shizuru said. "Yes do you think that your friend would fall in love with him? I mean it's as if it were destiny." Kurama laughed. "I know, but I'm afraid no. Out of us all Keiko is the strictest, she won't let a guy come too close. She is scared of trusting her heart with somebody and then having it broken she will definitely not fall in love. It's almost as if she has a barrier on her, she never let's her guard down not even for a split-second. It would be nothing short of a miracle if he could break her barrier because personally I think they would be cute. I know Keiko though and she won't it's sad to say that though." Shizuru said. "Oh, I see who knows I wonder if Yusuke could break her barrier. It sounds like a friend of mine, he really loves this girl but he doesn't know if she would love him back and so he asked me to help him out what should he do?" Kurama asked Shizuru. "He should tell her how he feels about her, then again it's a lot harder than that cause I also have a friend that is just afraid to love, who knows maybe I could help get them together. I may not be with someone but I can definitely match make same thing with the rest of my girls, especially Keiko." Shizuru grinned. "Maybe that'll work; I'll tell my friend that." Kurama said sadly because his heart told him that his friend was but himself. He tried to deny it but deep within his heart he knew he had fallen for her.

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            Meanwhile Yusuke and I finally reached the store and now were but in front of the door. Yusuke suddenly before we could go in caught my eye and we both stared into each others eyes. 'Why can't I stop thinking about you?' He thought as he moved closer. 'What am I doing, Yusuke get away from me.' I thought angrily. Before he could get any closer I tore my eyes away from his. 'Oh crud now I screw up what came over me?' He asked himself. Yusuke felt how uneasy I was. "Come on now let's go inside." He said opening the door for me. I walked in and was glad that he changed the subject. "Thank you." I smiled. "Anything for my dear princess." Yusuke said in a joking tone.

"Oh so now I'm a princess?" I asked with a giggle. "Sure you are now my dear; let us go to the snack area where we will find but our humble delicacies." Yusuke said bowing and pretending to be proper. "Yusuke you are so great, I have to admit you are the funniest person ever now my dear prince show me the way." I grinned and so Yusuke with a hott grin on his face he let his arm out for me and I surprisingly accepted it. "Come my highness, let us go." He smiled and off we marched until we reached the part that looked like the bakery. "Wow, I'm so tired and hungry, I don't think I'll make it back." I said weakly. I stared at all the food that was there and my mouth began to drool, I for sure was hungry. Yusuke smiled and then said, "I have an idea!"

"And what is that may I ask." I said with a grin. Yusuke quickly turned around to the baker and slipped a couple of bucks. Then he turned around with a grin, "Keiko heads up, catch!" Yusuke yelled and threw a cookie at me. I caught it and then looked at him with a confused look. "Huh? Oh Thanks Yusuke how much is it?" I asked and looked at him quizzically. Yusuke then looked at me quizzically. "Keiko, you're my princess, cutie, I paid for you already." Yusuke said with a grin at me. 'He called me cutie and his princess." I thought with almost a smile. 'What am I thinking, oh well, he meant it in a friendly way I guess.' I thought mentally slapping myself for almost feeling happy about the thought that he called me 'cutie.'

"Are you sure?" I asked. 'She didn't overreact when I called her cutie thank goodness.' Yusuke thought relieved. 'I better watch it I didn't catch myself on that.' He thought. "Cutie it's on me. Keiko, like I said you're my princess, don't worry I paid for you already now eat the cookie. I have some more here so enjoy and if you want another let me know. Now that that's settled lets get to the sweet and snack isles. And Keiko whatever you do don't worry I'll pay, it's on me." Yusuke grinned. "If you insist." I said hesitantly. 'Ah, Yusuke stop calling her cutie, if she catches you, she'll think that you want to be more than a friend.' Yusuke thought. 'That's because you do want to be more than a friend. Your obviously attracted to her now just admit it.' A thought ringed in his head. 'Shut up, like you would know she's just my friend, now go the hell away.' Yusuke thought angrily. I bit into my cookie and was so happy to have it. 'She's so cute.' Yusuke thought not catching himself this time. "Well now that we bought some stuff from our baker here let's go get some chips and all that other shit." Yusuke said. I smiled at him playfully, he had such bad manners.

Yusuke and I grabbed a couple of snacks. Then when we approached the chips isle it was Yusukes turn for his mouth to drool. "Chips I love you!" Yusuke yelled as he stared up at all the chips that were there. People then turned to look at him in many odd ways that I was sure would make Yusuke angry. "What the hell are you staring at? You're starting to piss me off so why don't you turn the hell around." Yusuke growled with an evil stare that could kill just about anyone. Everyone turned around and ran off in fear. Yusuke then snickered and turned back to the chips. "Yusuke you're too much, you want to scare everyone off?" I asked with a smile. "Hey well I don't like when people stare at me like they never saw anyone hungry before. Not only that I hate when they assume that because I'm a punk so are you. Maybe you shouldn't hang around me I seem to always find trouble wherever I go." Yusuke said as he looked at all the different chips that were available. "Yusuke I really don't care what people think of me or you. Like I said I just got to know you but you're already so nice to me. You have a good heart and that's all I care about." I said sincerely. 'Oh my gosh it's as if I'm falling for him, no that's not possible.' I thought hopefully. Yusukes mouth gaped open in wonder. "Keiko?" Was all that came out of Yusukes mouth and was all he could think of to say. "Keiko… thanks, I've never really had too many people hang around me, cause they were always scared of me, but I've never met someone like you before, it's as is I'm…." Yusuke said as he stared deep into my eyes. 'As if you're what?' I thought desperately trying to detach my eyes from his. "It's as if I…Um well Keiko we'd better hurry." Yusuke said hurriedly. 'What was I doing I don't like her or anything! Stupid me!' Yusuke thought nervously. 'Ah what was he doing?' I thought. "Well let me see what type of chips I should get!" Yusuke said turning back into himself. 'Thank goodness.' I thought happily. "Ok now let's see, Doritos, Cheetos, Sour Cream and Onion, and this too!" Yusuke said stacking up all of the chips. "Okay well I better grab some too before you take them all." I laughed. "Don't worry cutie, I'll save chips for you, and make sure no one touches them, cause you're the princess." Yusuke said with a wink and thumbs up!  I began to blush. I grabbed almost the same things and then threw them in the carriage. "Now let's head to the soda aisle!" Yusuke said grabbing my wrist. 'I can't take this anymore he's too close.' I thought desperately. "Come on Keiko!" Yusuke yelled with a smile and so we both approached the soda aisle. 'Am I falling for you? For the girl that hit my head with a volleyball in Hawaii?' Yusuke wondered.

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            Hiei swam quickly to Botan. "What's the matter not that I care or anything." Hiei stated. "You're so mean!" Botan pouted. "I am a heck lot worse." Hiei growled. "Ya, whatever and anyways since you don't care I shouldn't tell you. But, I know you do so don't worry, it's just these evil crabs bit me and I'm bleeding a little on my arm and leg." Botan smiled. 'She's bleeding?' Hiei thought. Botan then held out her arm to show that she was telling the truth. "Listen, I don't care for you especially since you're nothing but a wench. But, then again I don't want to win without you trying your all so come on let me wrap that up and then I'll beat you fair and square." Hiei said, pleased with the excuse he made. 'Wait no that wasn't an excuse, I don't care for you." Hiei thought angrily. "Um, Hiei I was winning anyway! But whatever you say." Botan giggled. "Oh shut up already and follow." Hiei yelled and swam towards shore. Botan laughed at his mean words, and swam right after him. Hiei grabbed a blanket for Botan to sit down on. "Botan sit there." He instructed. Botan shook her head. 'He actually looks concerned if that is even possible.' She thought with a still face which then turned into a sincere smile. "I've got the medicine and whatever happens don't you scream, this may hurt or sting, if I hear you whine I will kill you understand?" Hiei asked. "Yep, besides I know how it would feel if you got killed by an injured girl." Botan laughed. "Can't you stop with your stupid jokes?" Hiei asked. "Not really, now are you gonna help or not?" Botan asked with a teasing smile. "Ya whatever, now don't move a muscle." Hiei warned and sat beside her with a cloth. 'She looks so good, ah, stop lusting over a woman you are not an inferior human as Yusuke.' Hiei thought as he stared at Botan in her bathing suit. 'What is he doing?' Botan thought panicky. "Hey earth to Hiei." Botan said waving her hand sin front of his face. "Oh sorry just was thinking now no screaming." Hiei said inching with the cloth near her pale, delicate skin. 'Please don't sting.' Botan thought with her eyes shut tight. 'Botan.' Was all Hiei could think of at that moment. (I feel love springing don't you?)

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            Kurama and Shizuru still stayed talking to each other they truly felt that they could understand each other and at that point they were both on the verge of falling in love. 'Why don't we go and take a short walk?" Kurama suggested. "Sure, why not, but do you know what that will look like?" Shizuru asked. "Who cares what they think we are just friends." Kurama said feeling weak when he said 'just friends.' "I guess you're right." Shizuru said laughing. 'She's so beautiful when she laughs.' Kurama thought, not even fighting back all of his overwhelmed thoughts. "But, only a short walk because I want to be back before Keiko comes back." Shizuru stated. "That is true then that's a promise we'll be back before our two friends return." Kurama said shaking on it.

They both got up and headed toward a big rock so they would still be nearby. They both sat down on the rock and let the water spray on their faces. "It's such a beautiful day." Shizuru said stretching. "Yes, I know, nature is one of a kind." Kurama said as looked at Shizuru. 'She's cute when she does that.' Kurama thought when Shizuru was stretching. "Let's just lay down here until our crew comes back." Shizuru suggested. "Agreed, that's a great idea, you know what Shizuru?" Kurama asked. "What?" Shizuru smiled. "We just met and yet it is as if we are the best of friends. I feel like I've known you forever. We understand each other so well." Kurama said as he stared deep into the depths of her soul. 'It's as if he can see right through me.' Shizuru thought in awe. "Yes, it's too bad we'll never see each other again." She said gloomily as she stared at the ocean, trying to avoid his sincere and shimmering eyes from catching hers. "Well you never know with the luck of Yusuke and your friend they are bound to bump into each other again, they seem as if they are destined, so I bet we will see each other again, but once this vacation is over then for sure we will never see each other again." Kurama said, eyes shimmering. "I guess so." Shizuru nodded. "Don't worry." Kurama reassured Shizuru, and then placed his hand over hers. At first she felt uneasy and looked at him oddly but then she smiled at her close friend. The friend that she became so close to in such a short amount of time.

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            The goof ball, Kuwabara, was walking along the beach shore with the innocent Yukina latched onto his arm. They collected a bunch of shells that Yukina was very pleased with. "Alright Kuwabara, can you please carry the shells back and then I'll go grab some water, then we can begin." Yukina asked sweetly. "Sure, baby anything you say, I am under your command." Kuwabara said and started to run off with the shells. "You are so silly, why do you say all of those weird things?" Yukina asked. Kuwabara turned around and then said, "Because I mean what I say, sorry tulip I know I'm weird but that's ok, well let me bring these and I'll await your arrival and there we can start building the castle!" Kuwabara called out. 'He's so sweet, I don't get him, but he truly is sweet.' Yukina thought with a smile. 'I wonder if she'll ever understand that I've fallen for her.' Kuwabara thought as he placed the shells down on the blanket. "Now some water and that should be perfect!" Yukina smiled as she grabbed her bucket that was now filled with water. Yukina stretched by the ocean letting the ocean breeze play with her hair. 'I better get going.' Yukina thought and raced back to where Kuwabara was.

"Ok, now where do we begin?" Kuwabara said and sat down beside Yukina. "Well, let's start building it! Then we can decorate it and make a moat!" Yukina smiled. They both began to make the sand castle. They both were having fun; they both piled the sand high. Yukina then stared at Kuwabara and suddenly had the urge to garb some sand. Yukina picked some up and threw it at Kuwabara's face. "Hey, baby, that's a very dirty way to play!" Kuwabara stated and then got up. He grabbed some sand and was ready to throw it at her. "Hey that is ungentle men like!" Yukina yelled as she begin to run away from him. Yukina was laughing hard as Kuwabara chased her to get a good aim. "Yukina you can't hide!" Kuwabara yelled and ran after her. Kuwabara finally made a hit. "Hey that wasn't nice." Yukina said pretending to be sad. "Hey baby I'm so sorry." Kuwabara began to beg. Yukina began to laugh and then she said, "Gotcha ya." She then pushed him into the water. "Hey not nice, oh no you don't." Kuwabara said grabbing Yukinas wrist and pulling her in with him. They both began to splash each other and then they both stopped to stare at each other. Immediately they both began to laugh. Many people had been watching and they sure thought that Kuwabara wasn't that good looking but they all felt that he could make Yukina happy. They saw them as the perfect couple.  
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Yusuke and I finally reached the soda aisle. "Ya, soda, baby." Yusuke grinned as he looked at all the soda. 'I wonder if Botan was falling for that guy.' I thought. 'If she did what will I do, I couldn't break it up, but then again that was cute they were all fighting with each other.' I thought with a smile. "K, Keiko, I've got all the soda we'll both need." Yusuke said throwing in a bunch of soda into the carriage. "Whatever you say Yusuke." I laughed. "Come on Keiko, let's go just grab a cake and then let's head out." Yusuke smiled. "Yes, I guess so let's do that." I smiled and we both walked up to the last aisle. We all had no idea what was in store for us all!

Authors Notes: Hey guys! That better? Its longer right does that make up for it? Hmm? Well I tried to add more fluff! The next chappie finally everyone will be reunited and the love is gonna start kicking in. This is gonna get good I promise so stick by! And do you see that beautiful button please click it and review! Review because I love you people so much and I'm sure you love me too! And if you'd like E-mail me I love getting new friends! Well talk to you all later and thanks again my reviewers! I hope you like it so far! Love, Jackie! (Yusukes gurl Keiko)