The Girls We Met In Hawaii
Disclaimer: I do not own Yu Yu Haku Sho.
Yusuke: You can own me!
Keiko: Not really, they own us as characters, but you are my punk!
Yusuke: And you're my girl, do you here that all of you bastards who are lusting over my girl she's mine or I'll kill ya!!
Hiei: Calm down Yusuke, ...you heard that same thing with Botan or die! (
Keiko/me and Botan smile but sweat drop)
Botan and Keiko: I guess on with the story!
Kuwabara, Yukina, Kurama, and Shizuru: Wait! We didn't get to do anything mushy!
Keiko: Guys its not like we intend to do what happens on the disclaimer! But if you want to quickly kiss and then let me write besides I have good things planned!
(All kiss quickly and start running off giggling)
Keiko and Botan: I guess our guys loves us they don't plan this all out it just happens naturally! Oh well on with the story!
(Kiss guys)
Keiko and Botan: Now that was natural
Yusuke and Hiei: And satisfactory!
(Kisses us back)
Keiko and Botan: OK on with the story before this gets out of control!
And now for all of my lovely reviewers who don't have an E-mail for me to thank them! I must thank all of my reviewers right? Well here are the thankies!
Anonymous- Wow! At first you made me soooooo sad I felt so bad I was going to give up! But when you reviewed for me again that made me so happy! Thank goodness, Of course I am not done why would I end the story if they didn't even confess their love for each other! So don't worry no need to apologize and I'm glad you did like what I've done so far and I won't change a thing thanks again please keep reading!
Hiei's Shadow- Hey I love your reviews as always! I'm glad that you like the couple Y/K too I thought that maybe no one liked it that much they just were reading it for the other great couples that we all love so much! And thank you I'm glad you think I'm a great writer, and do you really the plot is cute cuz I like the plot too! You sure know how to put me in a good mood so I better update soon! Yay! You thought It was kawaii! I've planned fluffiness so don't worry and ya I agree there are barely any fics with all four couples but I've got it and I'm glad you read it please keep reading!
Ch.7 Goodbye Forever, Confused Feeling's!
Keiko's POV
We all had a lot of fun, after we finally all finished eating, with one overstuffed Yusuke, it
was 6 o'clock. "Oh boy we had better be leaving." I said, while each and everyone one of us
lay on the blanket stuffed. "Ya, your right." Botan nodded. "We had better be going ourselves." Kurama said sitting up. "Ya, genius, I guess so." Yusuke said also sitting up. I yawned tiredly, and blinked a couple of times for my vision to get used to the blaring sun. 'She's cute when she does that.' thought Yusuke.
"Well, I guess this is it!" I said stretching first, then getting up. "I guess so." Yusuke said sadly. "Maybe we'll meet again." Yukina said turning to Kuwabara with hope. Kuwabara nodded with reassurance although he doubted it. 'No, Keiko, I can't.' Yusuke thought. 'Yusuke so you do like her?' Hiei asked telepathically. "Hiei stop going in my head and NO I don't!" Yusuke screamed. "Sure, you don't." Hiei said with a mischievous grin as we all wondered what were they screaming about. "Don't worry we'll meet again." Yusuke winked at me and then patted my head. "Besides like these guys keep saying, with mine and your luck we'll bump into each other in the weirdest ways! That's a promise for the girl who made us meet by bopping my head! You volleyball cutie." Yusuke grinned at me and then turned to leave. "Bye girls." Kuwabara and Kurama smiled with a hug. "I'll miss you Shizuru, I really will, maybe someday we'll meet again, besides I don't feel that this is just a coincidence." Kurama stared into her eyes. "Then what is it?" She asked getting lost in his eyes for the third time. Kurama leaned in closer to her and whispered softly in her ear, "It was just sheer destiny." He then backed away hugged her tightly and left leaving one shocked Shizuru. Shivers went up and down her spine when he leaned near her and whispered to her, her heart flipped and flopped which made her nervous. 'Am I falling in love?' She wondered.
"Looks like baby, that castle will be the only memory we'll have left." Kuwabara smiled pointing to the castle they had built together in the cutest ways. "I guess so, but I don't want you to go." Yukina said sadly. "I don't want to go either, but I have to we have to, I know we'll see each other again, once friends, we will remain friends forever even if we may never see each other again." Kuwabara said trying to sound smart as he recalled a poem. "I guess so, Kuwabara then you will remain in my heart forever." She smiled. Kuwabara melted at hearing those words if only he knew if she would care for him back. "Good bye Yukina." Kuwabara said and hugged her tightly not wanting to let her go, but he knew he had to, and soon the hug came to an end. "Good bye Kuwabara." She said and left. Hiei grabbed the rest of their stuff and since only he was there and Yusuke (Kurama and Kuwabara are already in the car.) He turned and said, "I hate you onna." But he said that with a smile. Botan gave thumbs up and said, "I hate you too, punk."
Then like Kurama and Kuwabara, Shizuru and Yukina were waiting patiently and sadly at the 'Girl's Night out Convertible' for us. We stood there standing into the eyes of the others our eyes holding a midst of sorrow. "If you ask me, I think they're in love.
Shizuru smiled. Yukina nodded innocently and said, "Just like you love Kurama." Shizuru was about to burst in anger but when she noticed Yukina's innocent smile, Shizuru nodded dumbly, "Yes like I love Kurama," Shizuru blushed.
"Well, goodbye, you punks, we can't be wasting our time here!" I smiled, trying to hide the fact that I was sad. "Right, we've had enough of you." Botan smiled also hiding her sadness. "Ya, we'll be leaving, but we can't have this cutie here bop me on the head again." Yusuke said with a smile and pointed at me accusingly. I slightly blushed and stepped up right to his face, close enough to kiss, "Ya well this 'cutie' won't bop you in the face as long as this 'hott' punk doesn't send the ball my way." I glared playfully. 'My first two wishes, I wish you really meant me as hott! Wish number two and my favorite one, I wish I could kiss you right now with your face so close to mine. Ah! What did I just think?' Yusuke thought in disbelief. 'How could I think of Keiko that way?' He thought.
"Bye, onna." Hiei said. "Call me Botan." She laughed. "No, you are far too worthless to hear your name uttered from my lips." Hiei said regretfully. Nervously reminding them both of their almost lovable and close encounter of their lips meeting and forming a kiss. "Ya, fine then." Botan said angrily, not knowing what else to say to the stubborn demon. "Wait...Botan, oh forget it, bye." Hiei pouted. (A priceless sight to see) Botan smiled and then winked flirtatiously. (I don't even know if that's a word oh well sounds good to me.) Hiei blushed at that. 'I hate her she always makes me feel this way.' He thought angrily.
"Bye, I'll catch ya later, see ya around." Yusuke and Hiei said. "Good bye Keiko." He said under his breath, as he walked off with Hiei who was plain angry. I heard Yusuke say good bye to me although it was very quiet, that struck a pain in my heart for some reason I couldn't bare to hear him tell me good bye I felt as if it were the end. "Good bye." Botan and I muttered, with them leaving Botan and I to stare at their retreating forms. "Yusuke...Hiei." We sighed. Then we picked the rest of our stuff and got into our convertible. Shizuru and Yukina didn't even bother to tease us, for they were hurt and they could see the sadness in our eyes. (Back to the dotted lines, see what separation causes!) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Yusuke and the rest hadn't said a word and finally they reached their hotel, where they parked. They quickly grabbed their stuff and ran into the hotel. "Maam, may we please know what time is dinner?" Kurama asked politely. "That will be at 7:15 sir." She replied politely. "Thank you." Kurama said, and then ran to catch up with the others who were not so patiently waiting in the elevator. "Press floor seventy." Kurama said holding the key to their room. (I know in hotels there is no such thing as floor seventy but that's ok!) "That far away, oh boy I am going to hate this, oh well at least our room is cool." Kuwabara said as Yusuke and Hiei watched the numbers go up impatiently. 15 minutes later "That's it I hate this piece of sh, what the hell, ten more floors to go I can't wait forever!" Yusuke was screaming. "Calm down Yusuke and you too Hiei." Kurama said. 'Oh man now I really wish Keiko and Botan were here they are the only ones that can actually tame these two.' Kurama thought. "I don't have the patience now!" Hiei screamed. "Listen just because you two lost your lovers as well as we did doesn't mean you have to start acting up!" Kurama said casually. "Lovers?! We'll tell you lovers, this has nothing to do with our FRIENDS, it's this ass of an elevator!" Yusuke and Hiei screamed at Kurama's face. 'Oh man why do I even bother?' Kurama thought as he sweat dropped. Finally, the elevator opened with two grumpy punks stomping out, and mumbling many things under their breath. "Oh boy this is going to be a long day." Kuwabara sighed as Kurama nodded in disbelief. (And Dots) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"Alright I guess we have to first find our hotel, then check in since we didn't earlier when we were supposed to, find our room, unpack, and then go to dinner." Shizuru said reciting our schedule. "We should've checked in earlier." Botan said. "Ya, I guess so, now what's the name of our hotel again? I mean I gotta know where I'm driving to!" I nervously laughed. All the girls sweat dropped and said, "The Tropical Hawaii Sun Resort!" "Oh right I knew that, then to The Tropical Hawaii Sun Resort we shall go." I smiled and stepped on the gas, to get us all hyper again. We all wore a smile by the time we got to the hotel. We all were laughing and being our bubbly selves as always.
"Come on let's get our room number, check in, and then unpack, k?" I smiled and grabbed my luggage. All the girls nodded and also grabbed their luggage. We ran into the hotel, and it was now 6:20. "Hello, we were supposed to be here earlier but we had to go somewhere, sorry, may we have our room key?" I asked. "Sure what is your name?" The lady asked. "Yukimura, Keiko." I smiled. "Oh, yes, you are room 7,700 on the 70th floor." The woman said and handed the key to a very shocked version of me. All of us instantly repeated, "7,700 on the 70th floor?" "Um, yes, by the way dinner will be at 7:15 you might want to hurry." She said. We all nodded dumbfounded and raced to the elevator. (In the future just so you will all know, I'm going to have a quicker elevator thing so they can get to their room and back down quicker in your review if you have any idea on what to call it please do so and tell me!!!) 15 minutes later "Ah, can this elevator take any longer!" I screamed. "Ten more floors to go, dumb elevator hurry up!" Botan screamed as Shizuru and Yukina backed away from us. "We're sueing!" We screamed and then finally the door of the elevator opened. "Let's go!" We screamed and stomped out. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
The guys were currently opening the door to their room. "Wow, we even have a long room number!" Kuwabara complained. 'Then again we've been here already but I guess we're all in a worse mood so we're making a bigger deal out of it all.' He thought missing Yukina's smile already. "Yes, but at least it is nice and classy inside." Kurama stated, while everyone else nodded. "So anyway how are you two doing? Did you steam down yet?" Kuwabara laughed. "Shut up before I make you!" Yusuke growled as Hiei glared a glare that could kill a person. "Guess not." Kuwabara mumbled and laughed nervously.
"I wonder if I'll ever see Shizuru again. I need to get my feelings right because I don't know if its love or friendship, and usually I would know but now I am just plain confused." Kurama said as he thought of Shizuru, which made his heart melt. "Dude, I think its love, I mean I know what you mean, except I have a thing for Yukina, what about you two?" Kuwabara asked looking at Yusuke and Hiei. Yusuke and Hiei looked at each other then back at Kuwabara. "Look doofus, I'm already pissed off enough of course I don't love Keiko she's not my type we're just friends can't you people get that!" Yusuke screamed. "I'm not like you human's I do not love, I would not ever fall for any stupid onna especially that blue haired girl!" Hiei screamed angrily as Yusuke and he inched closer to Kuwabara with their fists. "Keiko is just my friend, you oaf just cuz you like her friend doesn't mean I like her! For goodness sake she bopped my head with a volleyball!" He screamed. "Botan that wench, she was nothing but trouble get it through your mind, we don't like them!" Hiei screamed as both Yusuke and Hiei knew what they were saying wasn't true at all. Then without warning Hiei and Yusuke started to attack Kuwabara.
"I knew this would get messy." Kurama sweat dropped as Kuwabara yelped in pain. Besides he had the spirit detective and the demon both attacking him. "That's for thinking of Keiko as my girl!" Yusuke screamed and punched Kuwabara. 'Hey that sound's good Keiko as my girl.' Yusuke thought and then quickly destroyed the idea. "This is for even thinking of Botan with me!" Hiei screamed and punched although he wished it were true. "Ok boys that's enough go beat your problems on someone else!" Kurama said making Yusuke and Hiei stop. Then without warning they glared at Kurama with a smirk. "Might I add someone other than my self." Kurama said weakly. "Ya, ya, sorry Kuwabara, come on Hiei let's go think of some evil ideas." Yusuke said. Hiei quickly nodded and followed Yusuke. Kuwabara and Kurama sweat dropped and then Kurama helped Kuwabara up. "That just proves that they like them." Kurama laughed. "Yep, now let's grab something to eat." Kuwabara laughed and when Kurama nodded they both headed into the kitchen. Yusuke and Hiei headed to the balcony outside to let their steam out. They were incredibly angry and they didn't know why. They usually would insult their friend but never beat up on him, they had a feeling that in fact Kuwabara was right it was because they left Keiko and Botan. Sadly they didn't know how to control their anger unlike Kurama and Kuwabara who were sad about the situation but remained calm. "Oh who cares she's just a girl." Yusuke said out of nowhere as he stared up at the sky. "Thinking about Keiko again, Spirit Detective do you have feelings for her?" Hiei asked. "I'm not sure, I mean how could I like I said she bopped me in the head and all, but she is my friend." Yusuke said not understanding his feelings at all. "I know what you mean listen when I'm around Botan I feel very weird and I don't like that feeling what does that mean?" Hiei asked grumpily as he tried to get rid of the image of the pretty bubbly blue haired girl. "Well, the way you're explaining it no offense Hiei but I think you're falling for the girl." Yusuke said with a small smile.
'Curses, Botan get out of my head and I thought I was the only one who could invade in people's minds." Hiei thought gloomily. "That's impossible I can't, you know very well that I don't have a heart. But, if that is true how can I get rid of this disgusting feeling, I won't ever see her again and plus I don't like having this feeling to see her." Hiei said disgusted. (Looks like Hiei is getting love help this is sooo cute!) "Buddy, that's where I have no idea, besides like you just said you'll never see her again, so you might just forget about her hopefully. Then again that stupid feeling that you want to be with her will always remind almost everything of her, listen the only way to escape this is to not escape it at all. Dude, you gotta admit it to yourself the ever so cold hearted demon has a crush." Yusuke said teasingly. "Ah, curse this world, I hate you human's why must you ruin everything! Admit what by the way I don't like her I just have that stupid feeling it doesn't mean I like her Yusuke." Hiei screamed. "Like I said don't bother denying it if not it will just come back to haunt you." Yusuke laughed and was about to turn and leave when Hiei spoke up. "Yusuke it's not only me who has these disgusting feeling's for an onna now is it?" Hiei asked with a hot shot look like saying- I'm not the only one cursed now am I? "And what do you mean by that?" Yusuke asked. "You know very well what I mean now don't you Mr. I have feeling's for Keiko although I won't admit it, knowing that it will just come back to haunt me." Hiei said with an evil smile. "You think that's very funny huh? Very clever, and how would you like me to answer that?" Yusuke asked annoyed that Hiei knew just about everything. "I'd like you to give me a straight answer do you or do you not like Keiko?" Hiei asked smiling even more. "I don't know, ok!" Yusuke screamed. "I knew it see, I'm not the only mixed up idiot, so what should we do now?" Hiei asked. "Pray that they'll leave our already corrupt minds." Yusuke said.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Back at the kitchen Kurama and Kuwabara were trying to stop thinking about their 'friends'. While they tried to fix lunch seeing that Yusuke would destroy the food and kitchen appliances and of course everything surrounding it out of anger or just eat the food, and Hiei would just burn the whole hotel down without thinking twice! "So what should we make?" Kuwabara asked. "I don't know something that we all would like."Kurama said. "Why can't we just go down to dinner?" Kuwabara asked. "Well because I don't really think anyone's in the mood right now to head back down those evil elevators, just imagine being trapped in an elevator, starving, tired, and whats worse is being stuck with the evil and ill-tempered Yusuke and Hiei." Kurama pointed out. "You have a point, it's been a long day for all of us, but Kurama it's driving me crazy I have to see Yukina again I've never felt such strong feeling's before for someone and I have to see her again, I think I love her." Kuwabara said.
"But, what would that matter I feel that I have fallen for Shizuru but they could never love us back it was nothing but a mere dream." Kurama said sadly. "You never know I think she truly did love you, and to tell you the truth I think they are willing to give us a chance. But, the main thing I am worried about right now is seeing them again and if we do, we had better worry about Yusuke and Hiei. They may not admit it but I think they do care for them and of all the girl's Botan and Keiko are difficult they would never fall in love it would crush them even if they pretend to be all strong. Those two truly won't trust anyone with their heart and Yusuke and Hiei I don't think could stand for that, next thing you'll see the girl's rejecting them and the next second the whole town will be destroyed by those two." Kuwabara said feeling bad for Yusuke and Hiei. "Yes, I know but who know's maybe they can break through the barrier besides what is stronger than love? Right now all I want to do though is see Shizuru and I will see her again and tell her how I feel that is if I can figure how I feel about her." Kurama said determined. "Great and I'll do the same for my baby Yukina, now that that's settled whats for dinner?" Kuwabara asked. "Good question we still haven't figured that much out." Kurama said as they both sweatdropped and took a look inside their refrigerator. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
The girl's and I finally found our room number 7,700. "Open the door quick, I want to just
dress up and go eat we can unpack a little but then save the rest for later." Shizuru suggested.
"Ya, I think I need to take a shower and unpack a little then we can all head down." I said and
unlocked the door to reveal a classy looking place. There were a couple luggage bags already in
there but other than that it was fresh and clean. "Wow, this is just great! I like this place already
now where to first girls?" I smiled. "Let's find out whose room is who then Keiko you take a
shower and the rest of us will unpack and undress." Botan smiled. "I guess we could get over
those boys!" Yukina smiled. We all nodded happily but we did miss them and they would
remain with us for all eternity.
Author's Notes: So did you like it sorry I haven't updated in a while! Please R&R I need to know if you liked it or not! It was a long chappie but hey I have this great idea for the next chappie it's going to be fun and cute, I'm going to have a blast now I wonder if you'll figure out what's going to happen! Believe me it's going to be great! There will be fluff for every couple and a couple of surprises! Love you lots, Jackie! (Yusukes gurl Keiko) Yusuke: Hey you ya you, Read and Review if not she'll never update so please review I need to know what's going to happen will we ever see our hott girls again? Ah! I need to know so please R&R! Hiei: What he said this is getting good not that I like Botan ok fine I do so what!! Keiko&Botan: You gotta love them! Shizuru: Well R&R! Everyone: We'll all see you next time bye!