The Girls We Met In Hawaii
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Yusuke: I'm wondering what's going to happen now!
Keiko: Don't worry about it.
Hiei: Is Botan going to forgive me because if she ends up with some guy I'll kill that person!
Kurama: And am I going to confess my love for Shizuru?
Kuwabara: Ya and what about me and my babe Yukina?
Botan: Are we going to forgive them?
Shizuru: Am I going to reject him?
Yukina: Am I not going to understand what Kuwabara is saying because I am so innocent?
Yusuke: Are you going to fall for me?
Keiko: Okay everyone quiet!!! Don't worry everything will happen and all of you will end up together just be patient! You will all have your own obstacles but you will be together! Ah, I'm going to die.
Yusuke: Calm down Keiko, baby I love you but they all just are excited is all.
Keiko: Thank you Yusuke okay well guys how about we all read this next chapter?
Yusuke whispers: See all of you guys out there be nice to your baby girl and they'll be sweet to you! (Wink-wink)
Botan: Ya great idea Keiko, So back to what I used to do! On with the story!
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Ch.10 Stuck With You! Kuwabara admits will Yukina accept?
Reader's POV
Shizuru, Yukina, and the other two guys were all recently waiting in line to eat at
the buffet. The guys were thinking many things through like how would they tell the girls but the
girls were thinking differently they were thinking how long would it take to stand in that long line!
Soon the girls finally erased their feelings for the other guys but they couldn't seem to forget
about them and that's what the girls were worried about is that in the end they could never love
them back leaving them heartbroken. Kurama was going to admit his feelings to Shizuru the very
next night when he found a moment alone with her he would tell her everything and hope for the
best. But, Kuwabara on the other hand had worked up enough courage and he would tell her
tonight. 'I hope she will accept but if she doesn't what will I do?' Kuwabara wondered. 'I hope
Kuwabara knows what he's doing I couldn't possibly see him moping around! Besides he'll
never forget her now I have to remember he's going to ask to see Yukina alone when they are
almost done eating. Perhaps to get Shizuru out of the way I could ask her to dance with me'
Kurama reminded himself. "Alright listen people I don't have patience today I suggest you all
move out of the way and let us get a table I don't have all day!" Shizuru screamed as Yukina
giggled at her best friends' attitude. "I guess you are hungry! I am hungry too, today has been
such a long Day filled with surprises!" Yukina added with a smile at Kuwabara. 'She can't turn
me down well I hope.' Kuwabara thought as he smiled back at Yukina.
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The girls ran into the Express Elevator and pressed the elevator buttons as fast as they
could so it would shut in the guys faces but they were too quit they got in by a split second and
then approached the angered girls. The girls got so angry and just stared at them with a long
death glare as the guys came near them. (Wow they are acting like they are going to rape them
lol) The girls then angry stares turned into collapsing tears they were really hurt over the whole
situation. They collapsed to the floors to their knees and began to burst in tears. The guys
softened their eyes and approached them slowly. "Keiko, don't cry there is no reason to cry."
Yusuke whispered softly as he cradled her in his arms. She didn't even bother to push him away
one reason she was too tired the second reason is she just had to cry in someone's arms and
Yusuke at that point felt very comforting. Hiei was on the other side cradling Botan as well but
he was shushing her quietly and rocking her back and forth while she sobbed she too didn't
bother to move she just couldn't help but love being cradled in his arms. (Now that's what I'm
talking about!) Both girls deep in their hearts knew they loved them but they could not ever
admit it even if they tried and even if they wouldn't like to admit this part even more at that point
when they saw the guys back they were so happy even if the guys got to see a little too much of
them. Finally the girls stopped crying but stayed wrapped in the guys' arms. They didn't feel like
moving or pushing away and most certainly the guys didn't want to stop holding them. Now the
next thing the boy's had to accomplish was the hardest task yet get the girl's to forgive them and
trust them with their whole heart.
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Meanwhile, Shizuru and the rest of them finally got a table right out on the deck with the
shimmering stars a very romantic spot in their case. They all slowly began to eat their dinner.
"So, Shizuru how has everything been going?" Kurama asked. "Well you only didn't see me for
like half of a day! But, I'm doing great I'm glad I saw you again it wasn't fun without you guys
and to tell you the truth I think we all missed you guys even Keiko and Botan." Shizuru smiled.
Kuwabara then suddenly coughed which to Kurama signaled for him to leave so it would give
Kuwabara the chance to tell his feelings to Yukina. "Um, I'm glad to hear that we all missed you
desperately you have no idea how much we missed you and I think Hiei and Yusuke were the
most desperate. I truly think they are in love with your friends but I don't know but anyways
um…" Kurama said trying to think of a way top get Shizuru out of there and leave the other two
alone. "Uh…would you like to dance?" Kurama asked with hesitation and sweat dropping at the
fact that, that was the best he could come up with. Shizuru sweat dropped and then grinned.
"Well I didn't eat much but that's ok I guess so but you better lead me on this one." Shizuru said
while Kurama pulled her up with him. Kurama winked at Kuwabara obviously wishing him the
best of luck and exited leading Shizuru in the inside to dance. 'Now what am I gonna do? I
better think of some way to tell her.' Kuwabara thought. "Hmm? I wonder why they didn't finish
eating oh well that's all right." Yukina smiled and placed some spaghetti in her mouth. "Ya um
Yukina can I ask or well tell you something?" Kuwabara asked hesitating. "Sure Kuwabara you
can tell me anything." Yukina said. "Um you can call me Kazuma that's my real name and well
you see…" Kuwabara started to say while watching Yukina's smile which at that moment was
very intimidating.
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Keiko's POV
We girls were sitting there until suddenly I realized something. I backed away from Yusuke
slowly and looked at the elevator buttons when I did that Botan did the same and realized
precisely what I did. "Why isn't the elevator going down?" We both asked with our eyes wide in
fear. "Oh gosh, your right what the hell is wrong with it?" Yusuke asked as he rised to his feet
and kicked the door of the elevator hoping it would pop open. "Stupid thing I hate these humans
tricks." Hiei said and also started to bang up on it. "Stupid thing it's stuck!" Yusuke yelled. "You
mean me you, them we're stuck!!!" Botan and I screamed terrified as we pointed and yelled at
no one in particular. "Well Hiei looks like it's working in our advantage at least the girls can't run
and they'll have to forgive us sooner or later right?" Yusuke whispered with a sly smile. "Yusuke,
I like the way you think exactly what I was thinking and they can't escape because well we're
stuck with them." Hiei whispered back making them both grin. "Botan, what do we do? We're
stuck in here with those two pervs!" I whispered. "Well, let's ignore them and find a way to get
this thing opened! What do you say to that?" Botan asked. "A perfect plan." I nodded.
After a while of kicking and screaming to no one in particular the guys gave up and sat down
besides the very tired girls. "I'm so hungry." Both Botan and I yawned. "Us too, hey girls are you
going to forgive us now or are you still going to stay prejudice of us guys?" Yusuke asked. "Who
cares I hate them anyway." Hiei laughed. "Hiei, not really a good way to get them back on their
good sides." Yusuke sighed. "Oh right." Hiei said which made Yusuke fall anime style. "Well it
doesn't matter either way this thing isn't going to be moving in a while and we're stuck here with
them sooner or later they'll have to forgive us!" Hiei said all extra loud so we could hear it. "As
if." Botan said cockily. "Oh like we're going to forgive those pigs I mean seriously how could
they even gawk at us like that." I pointed out as Botan nodded in total agreement. It was as if
they were all in second grade, one side had the guys and backed up into the other corner was
the two girls, like they were scared if they had coodies. "You know we can hear you girls right?"
Yusuke asked. "Ya why do you think we're saying it!" I growled. "Well, get it right we weren't
gawking at you girls we didn't mean to see you girls practically naked and you know it!!!!"
Yusuke screamed at the top of his lungs. 'Are you kidding me you loved the sight!" Yusuke and
Hiei both thought and smacked themselves mentally for even thinking such a horrible yet to their
liking of a thing. "Oh sure, Yusuke, no I'm so innocent all I said was 'hey don't worry you have a
killer body'! That is innocent you jerk how could you!" I screamed. "And you Hiei you pig I
thought you hated everything and well you were staring at me as if I was some porn super star!
What the hell is your problem? We both thought of you as fairly descent humans but boy were
we wrong! You didn't even turn away you pigs just kept on staring I had to cover myself to get
you to stop staring!" Botan screamed at Hiei angrily. "It's not like I wanted to see you in your
bra! Ok so maybe you looked pretty dang hott and so what if I stared a little at you I do that
often when you were at the beach anyway!" Hiei screamed and got all eyes turned on him.
"Really? Wow I thought I was the only one." Yusuke said surprised. "GRRRRR!" The girls
started to fume. "Or maybe not he-he." Hiei said nervously. "I taught my boy to make me
proud." Yusuke said as anime tears fell from his eyes. The girls' eyes went in flames. "How dare
you!" We screamed and smacked them each across the face. 'Great job Yusuke that's the way
to get Keiko to forgive you!' Yusuke thought with sarcasm. 'Oh who cares it's not like I care ok
so I do but at least I said the truth.' Hiei thought.
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Kuwabara was still stuttering at how to tell her as she continued to smile. Kurama
though just pulled Shizuru out the door. "So do you think she'll accept?" Shizuru asked which
made Kurama jump. "How did you know?" Kurama asked as they both walked to the dance
floor and began a waltz. "I have my ways, it was so obvious I hope she does that clown really
looks like he's in love and I'd hate to see him get heartbroken." Shizuru smiled as she continued
to dance face to face with Kurama. Both glided gracefully across the dance floor. "You're a very
cunning one you know that? I hope she accepts as well. Kuwabara he must really like her I've
never seen anyone so crazy over just one girl." Kurama laughed. "And you?" Shizuru suddenly
asked her eyes beaming. Kurama stared into her eyes deeply, her eyes sparkling making his
heart flutter. "Me? Oh yes there is one I love but I know she could never return the love I ask
of." Kurama said sadly. Shizuru's heart sunk. 'So he does love someone, wait why should I care
I don't ya that's it.' Shizuru thought sadly. "Well, why don't you give it a try I'm sure she would
say yes there isn't one woman on this Earth that I think would say no to you believe me just tell
her how you feel." Shizuru smiled. "I wish it were that simple but it isn't and so my feeling's for
her must lie dormant in my heart." Kurama smiled and twirled Shizuru into his arms. 'Kurama
don't.' Kurama warned himself as he stared at her lips. Shizuru just stared into his eyes and just
got out of his arms and merrily smiled at him. "The girl that get's you surely will be one lucky
girl." She said and with that walked off.
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Everyone was getting frustrated in the elevator. Finally a man from behind started to
talk. "Hello, listen we are trying to fix this thing but it can't be fixed until tomorrow I'm sorry but
you will have to stay there for the night." The man instructed. The girl's eyes lit in fear. "The
whole night?" They chorused. "Yes I'm afraid so, get a good's night sleep and we'll do all we
can." He said and then left. The guys were too tired to say anything they were bruised all over
from the girls' beatings they had received a while back. "I can't believe this, this is horrible." I
said and stared around the room until my eyes settled on Yusuke who seemed to be staring right
back, immediately I turned away and blushed. 'Oh man he saw me staring at him.' I thought as
my blush deepened. 'She saw me staring at her oh crap oh well I can't help it anymore.' Yusuke
thought. 'She's so beautiful, maybe I don't love her but I do care for her a lot and I know that
much but I'm not sure anymore I get all sick to my stomach when I see her like I'm going to die
if she isn't in my arms…I hate my life.' Yusuke thought miserably. "Listen Botan we need to talk
now. And I want my "its ok what you did" from you because I'm evil I'm not supposed to be
feeling guilty and I am and so just say it now!" Hiei commanded angrily. "You think I'm going to
say it's alright for that reason you jerk! I'll never forgive you, you staring pig!" Botan screamed
back. "Oh really?" Hiei said daring her to say another word. "Yes really!" Botan said
outmatching him. "Well then we'll have to take care of that now won't we?" Hiei said and began
slowly and intimidating walking towards Botan. "Ya and what are you going to do about it? And
don't you come near me you idiot!" Botan screamed but Hiei took no offense and by the time
she looked back Hiei was right in front of her staring at her beautiful pink orbs as she dazzled at
his crimson eyes that showed anger but yet in the mist loving concern. 'That can't be, he actually
looks concerned.' Botan said and didn't even notice that she grabbed his face to examine his
eyes. "Um what exactly are you doing?" Hiei asked. "Oh oops sorry." Botan said and
immediately let go and began to blush. 'Stupid, stupid, stupid how could I even think of doing
that?' Botan wondered to herself in embarrassment.
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"Yes Kazuma what is it?" Yukina asked smiling. "Well. Um Yukina I don't know if you
feel the same way about me but I……" Kazuma stuttered. "Yes what is it Kazuma…you can tell
me anything…if you'd like I could tell you how I feel about you too." Yukina smiled. "You mean
you have feeling's for me?" Kuwabara asked hopefully. "Of course I do your one of my greatest
and closest friends!" Yukina smiled. Kuwabara automatically sweat dropped and fell anime
style. 'I'm talking love, this is hopeless she only likes me as a friend oh boy.' Kuwabara thought.
"Now what did you want to say to me again?" Yukina asked. 'Ok here goes nothing, I can't
back down now!' Kuwabara thought. Kuwabara then pulled up Yukina beside him and her
hands tightly. Yukina looked up at him and smiled back at him while the moon and glittering
stars shone from above. "Yukina, ever since the first day I met you…well there was something
about you that made me feel all ozzy inside and I didn't know what that meant back then but
now I do…what I'm trying to say is…well…" Kuwabara started to say. "Is what Kazuma you
can tell me anything." Yukina said. 'I love you Kazuma but you wouldn't understand.' Yukina
thought but kept her thoughts behind her heart and smile. "Well Yukina, I know you don't like
falling for guy's but I can't deny the fact that well…I'm in love with you Yukina, your so beautiful
and I've never been so in love with someone as I am with you. I know you can't and won't ever
return my love but I just want you to know that I'll always be there for you to look after you.
And I'll always love you. Yukina I love you and want to be with you forever." Kuwabara said
and was glad he got it over with. Yukina's smile started to crumble in tears. She hugged him
tightly. "Kazuma…truth is I love you too and no rule can stop that I trust you with all my heart."
Yukina cried. "Really?" Kuwabara said and was shocked. "Yes, really." Yukina said. "And I
swear to you I love you and let's seal that with a…" Yukina said as Kuwabara leaned in. "kiss."
They both mumbled as they both passionately but softly kissed one another under the stars.
Together they shall remain…
Authors Notes: Hey people did ya miss me? I haven't wrote anything in such a long time but I'm back! And don't you think my story is over it's just getting started just wait till everyone else confess their love this should get good so stick around! Love you all and thanks for staying so loyal! I hope you liked it, I had trouble in imagining how Kuwabara would confess his love and how Yukina would react so you can imagine why I had such a writer's block well stick around!! Please R&R! And thanks again!!! I love you all! Love, Jackie
Yusuke: You heard the girl read and review! Leave nice thing's! (she's been really stressed out don't tell her I said that)
Hiei- Wonder when they'll forgive us? Hmm…oh well! She's mine all mine and if anyone tries anything funny I'll kill them! Ok now I'm done the end.
(All sweat drop)…right…