Okay on to chapter 5. This time I've decided to start out in Halloween Town.
(Halloween Town) Jack walked outside with Zero behind him. He headed towards the graveyard. Once in the graveyard, Jack headed towards the Hinterlands. Outside the enterance, A black haired girl was leaning on a tree.
"Hello Jack." she said, smiling and showing her fangs.
"You haven't by any chance seen Ashlin at all have you Marita?" Jack asked her. Marita stood up very quickly. She looked very worried.
"No, what happened?" Marita said. Jack sighed.
"I was hoping you would know. You're her best friend." he said. Jack walked into the entrance of the Hinterlands.
"Wait up!" Marita shouted running after Jack.
(Real World) Ashlin woke up. She sat up in bed. At first she was startled because it wasn't her room. It took her a minute to remember that she was in Katie's room. She sat up groggly. Ashlin got out of Katie's bed and walked down the stairs. She looked around. Katie's parents weren't in sight. Katie was sleeping on the couch. Ashlin shook Katie awake. Katie sat up.
"Wha- what time is it?" Katie said stretching. Ashlin looked at the digital clock by the couch.
"It's 7:03" Ashlin said. Katie got up.
"Come on, let's get ready for school." Katie said heading upstairs.
There you go a new character! give me your opinon. should I write a story on Marita? yes or no.