What if there had been no Charlie Bucket? What if it was a 13-days-away-from-being-18 year old Irish/Brittish girl named Abbigail Tyree.
finds the golden ticket. And, what if Mr. Wonka finds himself attracted to her? Well read and find out.
Disclaimer: There is no way on God's Green Earth I own or will ever own Charlie and The Chocolate Factory. It belongs to Roald Dahl. And, the movie belongs to Warner Bros. I don't own the characters or the actors/actresses playing them. Whatever.
In London, at the very edge of the town, was a small, one-roomed cabin. It belonged to a very poor family. Its inhabitants were a middle-aged Irish man and his British wife,and a nearly 18 year-old girl. The girl was even more beautiful than a spring day. She was a very timid thing. As a result, the girl had but one friend. She was born on a peculiar day, the one known as the day of lovers, St. Valentines Day. She always did what was asked of her, and only spoke when spoken to. She was a very honorable young lady. She would be the perfect wife for any man. But, like I said before, she was much too shy. Well that was all about to change...
"Hey look! Look! I found it the Golden ticket!" shouted Abby. "Oh, wonderful, love!" said her mother with ethusiasm in her voice. "What does it say, dear!" asked her father. "It says, Congratulations, lucky finder of this golden ticket. I Willy Wonka, invite you to come tour my factory for one whole day! Come to the gates at 10 AM sharp on Feburary first. You may bring one family member with you."
"Feburary first! Why that's tommarrow!" said her father. "Oh, I'm so excited! Daddy, will you go with me?" asked Abby. "Of course, darling." said her father.
The next day 10 people stood anxiously at the gate, anticipating the opening of the gates. "Daddy, I want to go in now!" said a young girl in a mink coat. "Veruca, love, it's 9:59!" said the man to his daughter. "Well, make time go faster!" said the enraged little brat.
Suddenly, a voice sounded over the intercom. "Please enter." it said as the gates opened. Everyone entered. "Now close the gates." said the voice. "Do you wish to know who I am? I'm..."
A door opened and there was a display of puppets in a colorful background singing, "Willy Wonka, Willy Wonka, the amazing chocolatier...
...Willy Wonka, here he is!" then the stage caught in fire and laughter was heard. "Wow! What a great performance. I thought it was getting a little dodgy in the middle, but then, that finale! Wow!" said the man.
"Who are you?" asked a blonde girl chewing gum.
"Why, I'm Willy Wonka!" said the man.
"Then shouldn't you be up there?" said Veruca.
"Well, I couldn't very well, watch the show from up there, now could I, little girl?" asked Mr. Wonka.
"Come along, kids...there's much to see!" said Willy Wonka going through the doors of the chocolate factory. "Just drop your coats anywhere said Willy, casting down his own, along with his eccentric sunglasses.
"Don't you vant to know our names?" asked the fat boy.
"I can't see how it would matter." said Willy in annoyance. Suddenly, the gum chewer hugged Mr. Wonka, who in turn jumped. "I'm Violet Bouregard!" said the little girl. "Well, I don't care." said Mr. Wonka. "Well, you should. Because I'm going to win the prize at the end!" said the girl. "Well, confidence is key." said Mr. Wonka, not really caring.
"I'm Veruca Salt. It's a pleasure to meet you, sir." said Veruca. "Oh, I always thought a verucca was a wort that you got on the bottom of your foot! Haha!" said Wonka to the girl. "I'm Augustus Gloop. I love your chocolate!" said the fat boy. "I can see that. I do, too. Who ever knew we'd have so much in common." the man replied sarcastically.
He turned around. "And, you, your Mike Teavee, the little devil that cracked the system!" Mr. Wonka said angrily. "And you, your, your---" Mr. Wonka studdered as he looked at the beautiful young woman. His eyes softened. "Your beau---uh---happy to be here." Mr. Wonka said unsure of hisself.
"Why is this door so small?" asked Mike as they came to a halt. "To keep all the big, chocolatey, taste inside, of course." said Mr. Wonka with a huge grin, as he unlocked the tiny door. He pushed it open to reveal a beautiful, candy,meadow. Everyone was in shock.
They walked in...
Okay, done for chappy one! Please R&R!