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Chapter 4
Aslan walked down the center of the isle with Ashlyn on his back, Lucy and Susan on one side, and Edmund and Peter on the other. The four humans lined up in front of their thrones while Aslan spoke and Mr. Tumnus prepared the crowns.
"Lucy the Valiant…Edmund the Just…Susan the Gentle…and Peter the Magnificent." They all sat down at the same time and the kingdom subjects bowed before their Kings and Queens.
"I hope to see you soon." Peter said to Ashlyn after a few dances with the Kingdom girls.
"How did you know?" She asked.
"You you said you go with Aslan and Aslan said that he's leaving. You know, I've almost come to tolerate you." That wasn't what Ashlyn wanted to hear but she was happy that she got to Peter good-bye.
"I don't know if I want to leave, Peter. I've almost come to tolerate you, too. I will miss you and I will never forget you." She kissed his cheek and flew off to find Aslan walking down the long stairs. They walked in silence until they were on the beach.
"Did you know that Mr. Tumnus was going to turn Lucy over to the White Witch?" Ashlyn asked as she walked in the water.
"Yes."
"Do you know everything that's happened since the human's came?"
"Yes."
"Did you know that Lucy and Mr. Tumnus are watching us?"
"Yes. Do you ever stop asking questions?"
"No."
"Don't worry, we'll see them again."
"Soon?"
"Nothing's certain until you're dead and even then you might be offered a second chance." Ashlyn smiled over at the lion but he didn't see it.
"Will you miss them?" She asked.
"Possibly."
"Peter," He turned from the window to see a beautiful young lady smiling at him, "I was just wondering if you had time for one more dance."
"Yes, I have all the time in the world." He went to the dance floor after looking aput at his fairy and the great lion one more.
"Aslan! Look!" Ashlyn yelled years later, "Isn't this where the humans entered?"
"Yes," The lion said looking at a lighted pole, "They entered from a coat closet."
"I found it. It seems like so many years ago. Aslan, it won't open! The door won't open!"
"We'll see them again when the time is right, just like before."
I need feedback, good or bad, I don't care. I have a sequel written and I need to know from at least 5 people what to do about Ashlyn and Peter. Should they be together or not? In the end it comes down to which scene I write better but I would like to know what everyone thinks!