Hi sorry it took me so long to up date. I had hoped to up date last Friday, but I couldn't find the time to.

Thanks to all my reviewers:

BlackWingedAngel16- I can't really decide, it's just so har, because your whole story is so good. Thanks for reviewing!

WolfchildBlazer- I am not sure if he's going to be evil or misguided, I am kinda confused there, can you help me out? I would love it if you would. Thanks for reviewing my story!

naraku luvuh -thanks again for not only you character, but for being my first reviewer!

People I would strongly advise you to read these people's stories, Please! (you know you want to!)

Parrings:

Kagome/Inu-Yasha,

Sango/Miroku,

Kekio Aqua Fawks Artimas/ Naraku,

Ivy/Sesshomaru,

Kanna/Kohaku,

Kikyo/Flame,

Fox/Koga

Kagura/Toya

Kage/Ame.

Ages:

Kanna,Kohaku 10

Ivy,kagome 18

Fox,Sango,Kikyo,Ame, Toya20

Inu-Yasha,Miroku 23

Kagura 24

Kage 25

Flame 30

Naraku, Sesshomaru 50

Kekio,Aqua,Fawks,Artimas 100

And Now Without Further Adue Here Is Naraku's Children!


Naraku's Children

Chapter 3: Three Down One To Go.

"Who the hell are your new friends', Kagura, more of Naraku's Incarnations?" Yelled an infuritated Inu-Yasha, while he and the rest of the gang brought out thier weapons so as to not be caught by suprise if anyone attacks.

"How quaint a half-demon with an attitude problem. Yes, I do belive the world is going to the dogs all right." said the mystery female with black hair ina lowback braid that went to her calves, blood red banges to her waist, wearing a kimino like Kanna's except with the outer layer black and the inner layer red. The mystery female has gold eyes, like Inu-Yasha's and Sesshomaru's, and claws, rose petel red lips. Red boots, and eye markings, like Sesshomaru's markings that looks like eyeshadow all on creamy milk white skin. She looks to be about 5'6 with a lean muscular figure, has two red cat ears with three gold bangle hoop earings in them, and a black tail that is tipped red. All in all she looks like a cat especialy with her slanted eyes, tail, and ears.

"What was that you damn cat-like bitch" Yelled Inu-Yasha in barley stiffled anger, while thingking 'Who the hell does this bitch think she is!'.

"I think you herd Fox just fine you no good half-breed, or are your ears as bad as your manners." Said Kagura. 'Naraku wants me to find Ivy, and he thinks she might come here, but will she be old enough to remember?' thought Kagura confused.

"What the hell did you just call me you son of a bitch" yelled Fox outraged as her tail puffed up, and her ears shot back, and her claws lengthered to 4 inches.

"I said..." started Inu-Yasha.

"Fox, calm down. Playing with that half-breed welp isn't going to get us any closer to father or to finding Ivy." said the male with hair, as red as fire, in a low poney tail that reaches his knees, and wings as black as night and then diped in blood.. He is wearing a kimino just like Miroku's except the purple on Miroku's outfit is red on his. He has a black flame on the middle of his forehead, and has sort of tannish skin.

"Clam down, you want me to calm down! Hell no! That half-breed pup just called me a bitch! I am not a female dog, but a feline, a female cat, and you're tellimg me to calm down! You stupid bird-brain I will not calm down" Yelled an enraged Fox at an annoyed Flame.

" I am not a pup or a welp" yelled Inu-Yasha at the two who are now not paying any attention to him and bickering like tolders over one toy.

"Not again." moned the other male dejectledly.

"You mean this happens a lot" asked the ever clam and curious monk Miroku. 'Maybe I can find out who they are and hopefuly they are not as Inu-Yasha asked.' thought Miroku.

"I am afraid the answer is yes." said the male that has black hair to his waist and banges to his chin,wings with blues tips, (the Inu- group couldn't see the males eyes, cause they were covered by his banges) and creamy colored skin. He is wearing clothes like Naraku's except with black as the outer most layer and navy as the inner layer.

"If it is not so rude to ask, but i am afraid that I don't know you name." inquired Miroku.

"Oh yes that's right I didn't give you my name yet, I appoligise." said the male as he turned toward Miroku, who let out a starlted gasp at his eyes, as did the rest of the group, since everyone had seen Naraku's eye color and knew that it isn't a very common one, and Kage had Naraku's eye color all right, and now that he was facing them they also found more of a likeness between his body and Naraku's then they liked. In fact Kage looked like Naraku if it were not for the little color differences here and there he would look exactly like Naraku. 'I had hope Inu-yasha was wrong, but now I see just how right he was' thought Miroku dejectedly.

"Kage, stop talking with that Inu's group." said a new female voice, felling that it was getting a little to dangerous to let Kage talk to the group since Kage is not very secetive about things and would very well tell the enemy his own weakness if not stoped.

"Ame!" exclamed a suprised Kage to the new figure coming out of the forest. Ame has black hair to her knees, red eyes,and a whit tail. She is wearing a black kimono, with a red tie and black boots. Ame also has a tear drop shaped crystal on her fore head.


I still needa male for Kagura.

Name:

Meaning: ( if has one)

Age:

Race: (Demon /Human /Half Demon)( if demon or half demon what kind)

Sex:(must be male or can be female if you wish to spice up the story, but will be voted weather or not by all my reviewers)

Personality: (be sepific)

Clothes:

Looks:

Attacks: (must have four and must have what they do to they enemy)

Side: (Inu gang or Naraku's gang)

Hight:

Hobbies:

Favorite Color:

Family:

Background: ( how they came to that group)

love intrest: (Kagura)

Please review!