My own opponent
Im sorry, I really don't know why I made this for Sango? I guess it's pretending how she feels against her emotions? Or could it be Sango's emotions towards Naraku or Kohaku?
I love the poem, but Im not sure if it suites the character? Well if any of my readers update…please don't be so harsh. Tell me what you thought of the poem?
Disclaimer: I don't own InuYasha
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I got lost deep inside myself,
Walked through the emotion to yell for help.
The wind lifted up to blow my hair,
And tripped to fall like I didn't care.
How would I yell, if I had no sound?
How would I stand if there was no ground?
How could I be saved if no one was here?
How could I cry with one single tear?
How do I fight the one in me?
How could I be blind, when I can see?
Where the apparition comes into my sight,
Gasp at the bright, powerful light.
Only to see myself standing alone,
Then fall on the ground in my dreadful moan.
Is that myself standing straight?
Would that be me covered in hate?
Freak at the dawn, and simple animal,
Now I know for sure, that I'm my own rival (or he's my rival, for Naraku? I don't know…what suites best)
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Well yup, there's my poem…it's only asking more if you liked the poem…Am I good at writing them? It took awhile to do this one but, I can make more poems…maybe InuYasha and Sango? I dono?
Who knows?
Well, review please! I like reading them…but please don't write anything like… (Omg! That was so bad, or it didn't fit)…anyways…yup there it is!