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Don's stomach was growling as they pulled up to the address. Terry looked at him sideways with a slight smile. He looked at her for a moment and then pretended to be working with something on his bullet proof vest.

"I missed dinner" he explained.

Terry simply smiled. They were in a white van with David with two S.W.A.T members. The rest were in the van behind them. It was getting close to eight now and there was complete darkness beyond. Not even a street lamp could be found where they were.

They had traced a gang of computer hackers to this abandoned millhouse near the outskirts of the city. After checking further they found that this group was making double profit by selling drugs on the side. They had managed to evade the FBI by sending false info into the computers after having conversed with their inside man. Now they had been caught and, they hoped, unknowingly.

"Ready?" David asked as he pulled out his gun.

"Ready" answered Terry after exchanging a nod with Don.

They opened the van doors and jumped out. With guns held down in both hands they moved forward. No sound could be heard from inside and with any luck it was the same way with them. The S.W.A.T team moved in around them until they were flat against the walls and out of sight. David motioned for part of the team to follow him to the back. Terry took another part of the team to the other side. Don stayed with the rest in front. On the count of three they kicked in the door with guns and shields raised and ready.

There was nothing in the front room, at first glance. Wires were tagged to the walls. They went up into the loft and down underneath the floor boards. Terry came in with her team through a series of windows and David came from the back with his. Don motioned towards the wires and their directions. Terry took her team down a trap door in the floor, David stayed where he was and Don took his team upstairs.

There were laptops on tables and papers all over the floor. A man sat in front of one facing the screen. Another man was standing in a corner with his hands in front of his face yelling "don't shoot!" over and over. The man in the chair was taken downstairs with his companions but not before being asked if there was anyone else up there. It was the other man who answered.

"There was one but he's gone now."

"Where did he go?"

"I don't know. He left a few seconds before you came up here."

"Who was he?"

He didn't get a chance to answer for the man from the chair lunged forward with a pocket knife and he fell to the ground unmoving.

"Get him out of here!" Don yelled before checking on the man but he was already dead. They met Terry and David downstairs. "How'd it go?"

"We got all of them down there" Terry answered. "And you?"

"All but one."

"Who?"

"Didn't get a chance to find out. The guy who was going to tell us is now dead and judging by the man who killed him I don't think he's gonna give us any answers."

"Well let's wrap it up then" David called.

They took their offenders out and into awaiting cars before taking off their gear and climbing back into the vans.

"Well another day, another bust" said Terry to no one in particular.

"One still got away" said David in response.

"We'll find him, but for now I'm going home. What time is it?" asked Don.

"About ten. Is your stomach still growling?" Terry eyed him. Don's stomach gurgled loudly. "You worked through lunch again didn't you? I know a good food place not far from here and it should be open, even this late."

"Thanks. David you commin'?"

"Gotta get back to fill out reports. You two go. You'll just owe me later."

Don and Terry drove to the food place she knew and ordered a few hot dogs to go. They sat in the car eating until their stomachs were settled enough for talk.

"So, you said you missed dinner. I thought that was why you left work when you did, to be on time. What happened?"

"Well . . . dad was finishing when I got there but no Charlie. We waited, and waited, and waited. Dad called him up to see where he was and found him at work but "on his way out the door". Then he didn't show up for another fifteen to twenty. When he finally arrives he has to show us something. So, of course, dinner was postponed. It turned out a good thing he showed us. I just wish it had been after we ate."

"What did he show you?"

"Well a girl showed up in his class . . ."

"Oh?" Terry teased.

"She was looking for some of her papers she was told were there" Don defended. "When she left she forgot some of them and Charlie found them. She had told him that they were just numbers she had seen when she looked at the paragraphs in her stories. She was going to ask someone about the whole thing and see if anyone knew how she was doing that, or so she told Charlie."

"You think she was lying?"

"I don't know. It just doesn't feel right."

"What do you mean?"

"Charlie punched in a set of numbers and you won't believe where they took us."

"Try me."

Growl.


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