Disclaimer: I would like to thank all you readers out there for your
grade "A" advice. I decided to cut out the rape part because I have a
much better closure for the story other than that.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It time for third period art class the bell had just sounded and as
usual Lizzie was alone at the canvas with no one at her side when
Miranda sat down next to her and smiled. (A.N: For those who still
don't understand, picture ten rows of desks with two desks in a row
shaped in a U.)
"Hey Lizzie," she said as if they had been friends and never enemies.
"Hey...I guess you want me to move right," getting up from the seat
when Miranda pulled her back down.
"No...I...wanted to say that I'm really...sorry."
"For what?"
Before Miranda could answer Mrs. Cock, the art teacher broke in and
said in a spontaneous way to pull out of the hat one piece per person
and then draw what's on the paper. She allowed the class to talk during
this assignment and then turned back to her desk where she started to
whisper to herself.
"I should have believed you when you said that you didn't post those
horrible things on the internet about us."
"It's cool."
"No...it isn't your my best friend to this day and I should had been
the one to stick of for you rather than blame you."
"I shouldn't have written them in the first place."
"You have the right to put anything you want in that diary of yours."
They both stared each other in the eyes for a good ten seconds and then
uncomfortable laughed.
"So...Miranda where does this leave us. Friends?" Lizzie said teary
eyed hopping for the right answer. (A.N: I'm praying that you viewers
know what answer I'm talking about. She wants to be friends again duh!)
"I would never be friends with someone like you," she scolded and
Lizzie averted her head down. "Only...best friends," she said giving
Lizzie the biggest hug ever.
"You have to believe that I didn't post those things about you guys. I
don't even have that dairy anymore; it was-," being cut off by Miranda.
"I really want to move on from that."
"Okay but-"
Quickly changing the subject Miranda said, "I wonder if Mrs.Cock always
talks to herself like that."
"I wonder what's her husband like," Lizzie laughed.
The two spent the rest of the class clowning around forgetting about
life's problems. The next period was free period and Miranda had talked
Lizzie into trying out for the talent show then.
"Can't believe I let you talk me into coming here and embarrassing
myself in front of all these people. Everybody knows you're the best
singer in school."
"Please I've you bust jams in the shower before."
"Yeah the shower no one was around."
"David's going to be here," she said as they sat down waiting for the
announcements to start.
"So why do you call him David?"
"Well after the whole website thing we agreed to wipe out all memories
of you therefore changing his name. It was really hard at first but
once we got the swing of things there was no stopping us."
"Wow...that's ruff."
Lizzie starting glancing around the room to see if she could spot Gordo
in the crowd of people. Instead, she spotted Claire and Larry in the
coroner cuddling.
"Hey Miranda," getting her attention.
"Yeah?"
"How did Larry and Claire hook up? If memory serves me correct they
hated each other or was it Claire hated Larry."
"That was a while back are you sure your up for that kind of story?"
"I have all the time in the world or should I say twenty minutes."
"One upon ah two summers ago...."
*FLASHBACK*
It was spring break of tenth grade and Ethan was having a pool party
blow out with a few of his closest friends and then a few of their
closest friends. Everyone was having a blast when Claire did a back
flip off the high dive at the deep ends head first and hit her head on
the side of the pool and began to drown unconsciously under the water.
Everyone thought she was joking around when the water started to tint
with blood. Larry was the first one of us to get to her; he carried her
out the pool then gave her CPR. While the rest of us tired to get a
hold of the police.
At the hospital Larry stayed by her side the whole time and when she
woke up Claire praised him with thanks an then asks him is there
anything she could do. They agreed to do on a date but it would be a
surprise where.
Three days after that Larry took her to go see the science/art museum
and he was scared that she'd hate but she later shared a little secret
that she had always come there as a kid. Then Larry took her to
dinner/picnic in the park. (A.N: Is Larry a total romantic or what?!
Except for the part about the whole science/art museum thing.)
From then on Claire & Larry have influenced each other to do great
things. Even though Kate wasn't to happy about the idea they stuck
together and in the in she excepted their relationship for what it
was...love.
*FLASHFORWARD*
"Wow that's like totally amazing wish I could have a relationship like
that," Lizzie said enviously.
"Here's your chance because there's Dave."
"It's Gordo Miranda!"
"Fine...well there's knight and shining armor Gordo," Miranda said in a
teasing fashion.
"Oh who am I kidding he'll never notice me."
"Of course he will with the right adjustments," Miranda said reaching
for Lizzie's hair.
"Wait! What do you mean "right adjustments" I look fine! Don't I," she
questioned insecurely.
"You have excellent curves in all the right places...but the look your
going for...it's...really...grungy."
"No it's conservative."
"I think you mixed up conservative with ugly. Please...just let me help
you out...like...when we us to help each other out," Miranda said with
the puppy dog eyes.
"Find," Lizzie said in defeat.
Miranda then took her long golden hair out of its messy bun into a nice
ponytail. Then she fixed it and told Lizzie to apply a little lip-
gloss. Miranda gave Lizzie a big dose of self-confidence and sent her
off to Gordo who was laughing with the rest of the jocks who had free
period.
"What do I say to him?"
"Anything!"
"I can't he's over there by all his friend gonna embarrass -," said
being cut by a voice behind them.
"Embarrass who?"
"You know it's rude to...Mike," Lizzie said with mixed emotions that
were nothing close to happy.
"I was talking about Gordo."
"I thought I told you not to hang out here or with these freaks," he
said looking directly looking at Miranda.
"Well were not in a relationship anymore. So just step off and let me
be"
"Fine, but this isn't the end of this."
"Oh that's sweet...but we've been through. So get over me and I'll let
go of you."
Suddenly the lights were dimmed down to a and the principle came on
stage gave instructions and started to call people up randomly.
"Lizzie McGuire come on up here and show your stuff," he said followed
by a curtsy applause.
Lizzie slowly walks on the stage eyeing everyone in the audience very
nervously.
"I gonna sing "Lucky" by Brittney Spears."
After those words, the melody began and she sang...
This is a story about a girl named Luck....
Early morning, she wakes up
Knock, knock, knock on the door
It's time for makeup, Perfect smile
They go...
"Isn't she lovely, this Hollywood girl?"
And they say...
{Chorus}
She's so lucky, she's a star
But she cry, cry, cries in her lonely heart, thinking
If there's nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears come at night
Lost in an image, in an dream
But there's no one there to wake her up
And the world keeps spinning, and she keeps on winning
But tell me what happens when it stops?
They go...
"Isn't she lovely, this Hollywood girl?"
And they say...
{Repeated Chorus}
Isn't she lucky, this Hollywood girl?"
She so lucky, but why does she cry?
If there's nothing missing in her life
Why do these tears come at night?
When Lizzie finished the song, a thunderous applause rang throughout
the auditorium like wildfire and could be heard miles away.
(A.N: We're going to say that the principles name is Mr. Bob, Mr. Bill
Bob to be exact.)
With the approval of the judges, Mr. Bob said "Well, Lizzie that was
some performance you gave an by the power vested in me you're going to
be in the talent show. Congratulations! Oh...and Lizzie you don't have
to sing the same routine as tonight. Have a nice day...next!"
When she exited the stage, Miranda was there to give her a giant.
"You were amazing!"
"Thanks."
"Hey, hey, hey you want to join my band?"
"Sure," Lizzie said as the walked out the room to complete their day.
When the eighth mod sounded the students ran out of class to the
lockers and then to the buses. As Kate, Claire, Miranda, and Lizzie
were walking outside Gordo came up behind them.
"Hey Lizzie," he said in his usual deep sexy tone.
"Hey," she said going weak at the knees.
"You did great today"
"Thanks
"I was wondering would you be interested in going to bomb fire with me
tonight would you or are you going with you... boyfriend," he said tad
bit smitten at the thought her with him.
"I broke up with him already."
"You did that great...I mean-."
"I'd love to go with you Gordo...I mean David,' she said desperately
trying to cover her embarrassment.
"No your right it Gordo not David," he said giving her a small kiss on
the lips. "See ya tonight beautiful."
"Bye."
"So does this make you guys a couple or what," Miranda asked then they
all laughed and continue on their way.
*Meanwhile*
From behind some bushes, someone was watching the whole thing, and they
were pretty ticked off by the whole thing.
"That bitch always gets her way. She gonna pay for what she did and
this will be something she'll never forget," the voice said getting up
walking to the parking lot.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wow! I wonder who this could be? You'll have 2 wait and see! Anywayz I
don't quite know what goes on a bomb fire, all I know is that it's a
party on a beach or near some kind of open water. So, please I would
really appreciate if you could review my some ideas, tell how the
story's going, or flat out tell me what you want to see happen.
-AJLITE over and out
grade "A" advice. I decided to cut out the rape part because I have a
much better closure for the story other than that.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It time for third period art class the bell had just sounded and as
usual Lizzie was alone at the canvas with no one at her side when
Miranda sat down next to her and smiled. (A.N: For those who still
don't understand, picture ten rows of desks with two desks in a row
shaped in a U.)
"Hey Lizzie," she said as if they had been friends and never enemies.
"Hey...I guess you want me to move right," getting up from the seat
when Miranda pulled her back down.
"No...I...wanted to say that I'm really...sorry."
"For what?"
Before Miranda could answer Mrs. Cock, the art teacher broke in and
said in a spontaneous way to pull out of the hat one piece per person
and then draw what's on the paper. She allowed the class to talk during
this assignment and then turned back to her desk where she started to
whisper to herself.
"I should have believed you when you said that you didn't post those
horrible things on the internet about us."
"It's cool."
"No...it isn't your my best friend to this day and I should had been
the one to stick of for you rather than blame you."
"I shouldn't have written them in the first place."
"You have the right to put anything you want in that diary of yours."
They both stared each other in the eyes for a good ten seconds and then
uncomfortable laughed.
"So...Miranda where does this leave us. Friends?" Lizzie said teary
eyed hopping for the right answer. (A.N: I'm praying that you viewers
know what answer I'm talking about. She wants to be friends again duh!)
"I would never be friends with someone like you," she scolded and
Lizzie averted her head down. "Only...best friends," she said giving
Lizzie the biggest hug ever.
"You have to believe that I didn't post those things about you guys. I
don't even have that dairy anymore; it was-," being cut off by Miranda.
"I really want to move on from that."
"Okay but-"
Quickly changing the subject Miranda said, "I wonder if Mrs.Cock always
talks to herself like that."
"I wonder what's her husband like," Lizzie laughed.
The two spent the rest of the class clowning around forgetting about
life's problems. The next period was free period and Miranda had talked
Lizzie into trying out for the talent show then.
"Can't believe I let you talk me into coming here and embarrassing
myself in front of all these people. Everybody knows you're the best
singer in school."
"Please I've you bust jams in the shower before."
"Yeah the shower no one was around."
"David's going to be here," she said as they sat down waiting for the
announcements to start.
"So why do you call him David?"
"Well after the whole website thing we agreed to wipe out all memories
of you therefore changing his name. It was really hard at first but
once we got the swing of things there was no stopping us."
"Wow...that's ruff."
Lizzie starting glancing around the room to see if she could spot Gordo
in the crowd of people. Instead, she spotted Claire and Larry in the
coroner cuddling.
"Hey Miranda," getting her attention.
"Yeah?"
"How did Larry and Claire hook up? If memory serves me correct they
hated each other or was it Claire hated Larry."
"That was a while back are you sure your up for that kind of story?"
"I have all the time in the world or should I say twenty minutes."
"One upon ah two summers ago...."
*FLASHBACK*
It was spring break of tenth grade and Ethan was having a pool party
blow out with a few of his closest friends and then a few of their
closest friends. Everyone was having a blast when Claire did a back
flip off the high dive at the deep ends head first and hit her head on
the side of the pool and began to drown unconsciously under the water.
Everyone thought she was joking around when the water started to tint
with blood. Larry was the first one of us to get to her; he carried her
out the pool then gave her CPR. While the rest of us tired to get a
hold of the police.
At the hospital Larry stayed by her side the whole time and when she
woke up Claire praised him with thanks an then asks him is there
anything she could do. They agreed to do on a date but it would be a
surprise where.
Three days after that Larry took her to go see the science/art museum
and he was scared that she'd hate but she later shared a little secret
that she had always come there as a kid. Then Larry took her to
dinner/picnic in the park. (A.N: Is Larry a total romantic or what?!
Except for the part about the whole science/art museum thing.)
From then on Claire & Larry have influenced each other to do great
things. Even though Kate wasn't to happy about the idea they stuck
together and in the in she excepted their relationship for what it
was...love.
*FLASHFORWARD*
"Wow that's like totally amazing wish I could have a relationship like
that," Lizzie said enviously.
"Here's your chance because there's Dave."
"It's Gordo Miranda!"
"Fine...well there's knight and shining armor Gordo," Miranda said in a
teasing fashion.
"Oh who am I kidding he'll never notice me."
"Of course he will with the right adjustments," Miranda said reaching
for Lizzie's hair.
"Wait! What do you mean "right adjustments" I look fine! Don't I," she
questioned insecurely.
"You have excellent curves in all the right places...but the look your
going for...it's...really...grungy."
"No it's conservative."
"I think you mixed up conservative with ugly. Please...just let me help
you out...like...when we us to help each other out," Miranda said with
the puppy dog eyes.
"Find," Lizzie said in defeat.
Miranda then took her long golden hair out of its messy bun into a nice
ponytail. Then she fixed it and told Lizzie to apply a little lip-
gloss. Miranda gave Lizzie a big dose of self-confidence and sent her
off to Gordo who was laughing with the rest of the jocks who had free
period.
"What do I say to him?"
"Anything!"
"I can't he's over there by all his friend gonna embarrass -," said
being cut by a voice behind them.
"Embarrass who?"
"You know it's rude to...Mike," Lizzie said with mixed emotions that
were nothing close to happy.
"I was talking about Gordo."
"I thought I told you not to hang out here or with these freaks," he
said looking directly looking at Miranda.
"Well were not in a relationship anymore. So just step off and let me
be"
"Fine, but this isn't the end of this."
"Oh that's sweet...but we've been through. So get over me and I'll let
go of you."
Suddenly the lights were dimmed down to a and the principle came on
stage gave instructions and started to call people up randomly.
"Lizzie McGuire come on up here and show your stuff," he said followed
by a curtsy applause.
Lizzie slowly walks on the stage eyeing everyone in the audience very
nervously.
"I gonna sing "Lucky" by Brittney Spears."
After those words, the melody began and she sang...
This is a story about a girl named Luck....
Early morning, she wakes up
Knock, knock, knock on the door
It's time for makeup, Perfect smile
They go...
"Isn't she lovely, this Hollywood girl?"
And they say...
{Chorus}
She's so lucky, she's a star
But she cry, cry, cries in her lonely heart, thinking
If there's nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears come at night
Lost in an image, in an dream
But there's no one there to wake her up
And the world keeps spinning, and she keeps on winning
But tell me what happens when it stops?
They go...
"Isn't she lovely, this Hollywood girl?"
And they say...
{Repeated Chorus}
Isn't she lucky, this Hollywood girl?"
She so lucky, but why does she cry?
If there's nothing missing in her life
Why do these tears come at night?
When Lizzie finished the song, a thunderous applause rang throughout
the auditorium like wildfire and could be heard miles away.
(A.N: We're going to say that the principles name is Mr. Bob, Mr. Bill
Bob to be exact.)
With the approval of the judges, Mr. Bob said "Well, Lizzie that was
some performance you gave an by the power vested in me you're going to
be in the talent show. Congratulations! Oh...and Lizzie you don't have
to sing the same routine as tonight. Have a nice day...next!"
When she exited the stage, Miranda was there to give her a giant.
"You were amazing!"
"Thanks."
"Hey, hey, hey you want to join my band?"
"Sure," Lizzie said as the walked out the room to complete their day.
When the eighth mod sounded the students ran out of class to the
lockers and then to the buses. As Kate, Claire, Miranda, and Lizzie
were walking outside Gordo came up behind them.
"Hey Lizzie," he said in his usual deep sexy tone.
"Hey," she said going weak at the knees.
"You did great today"
"Thanks
"I was wondering would you be interested in going to bomb fire with me
tonight would you or are you going with you... boyfriend," he said tad
bit smitten at the thought her with him.
"I broke up with him already."
"You did that great...I mean-."
"I'd love to go with you Gordo...I mean David,' she said desperately
trying to cover her embarrassment.
"No your right it Gordo not David," he said giving her a small kiss on
the lips. "See ya tonight beautiful."
"Bye."
"So does this make you guys a couple or what," Miranda asked then they
all laughed and continue on their way.
*Meanwhile*
From behind some bushes, someone was watching the whole thing, and they
were pretty ticked off by the whole thing.
"That bitch always gets her way. She gonna pay for what she did and
this will be something she'll never forget," the voice said getting up
walking to the parking lot.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wow! I wonder who this could be? You'll have 2 wait and see! Anywayz I
don't quite know what goes on a bomb fire, all I know is that it's a
party on a beach or near some kind of open water. So, please I would
really appreciate if you could review my some ideas, tell how the
story's going, or flat out tell me what you want to see happen.
-AJLITE over and out