Sorry to my loyal reviewers for not updating for so long.
Here's the new chapter, after i wrote it i didnt like it and completely rewrote it about 5 times.

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thanks to A Depp Girl- isnt it cute? lol

Captain Jade Sparrow-thanks for the review!

As Lily and Jack grew deeper and deeper in love each day, due to their newly opened hearts, neither of them thought anything could come in between them.

But Rum has a very bad habit of doing that.

2wks later.

They had decided to stop of at Port Hensley to stock up on necessities before continuing on their way.
Jack left without saying goodbye to Lily.

Forgetting everything but the awating rum and fun.

Lily came up from the Galley where she had been helping clean and looked around noticing that everyone had already left.
She went into the captains quarters to find Jack, not thinking he would leave without saying goodbye.

She looked around and noticed he wasnt there, so she sat down at his desk miserably muttering unheard threats under her breath.

She saw a note on the desk and read it:

Lily,
I have gone ashore, please watch guard tonight.

Love Jack

Lily was fuming.
She crumpled the note up and threw it across the room.

"GUARD THE SHIP?" She yelled to no one.
"Damn him! all he cares about is his bloody rum!" She huffed and noticed a bottle laying on the desk.

She picked it up and was about to throw it when she realized what Jack would do to her if he saw his precious rum wasted.

"Maybe I'll just go see what that lazy drunk pirate is up to."

She put on her cloak over her tight breeches, classic high heel boots and one of Jacks old shirts she wore to clean in.

She slipped off the ship and saw a few of Jack's crew members lingering around one particular tavern, mostly sober.

They saw her and one of them grabbed her arm as she neared them.

"Ye're s'posed te be watching the ship!" He yelled

"Well im not." She said as they rushed off to guard the ship.

She smiled and entered the small bar.

It didnt take her long to spot Jack, a very occupied Jack.

He wasn't drunk and this only made her more furious.
If he had been drunk then there would at least be an excuse for the wench on his lap.

She felt hot tears in her eyes and clenched her teeth together before turning and running out.

Gibbs saw Lily run into the bar.

He turned to Jack who was currently trying to politely tell the wench on his lap to move.

When he turned back to Lily she was crying and before he could say anything she was gone.

"Jack!" Gibbs said as the wench finally gave up.

"Aye?" Jack answered taking a gulp of his rum.
"Yer strumpet just left, didn't seem to happy." Jack grinned

"Which one mate?" He expected to see the usual laughter in his first mates eyes but instead he grew angry.
"Lily , she saw ye with the wench, I suggest ye go back to the ship." Gibbs could hardly believe Jack would joke about this.

Jack leapt from his seat , threw a few coins on the table and fled onto the streets.

"Bloody PIRATE!" Lily screamed throwing another bottle of rum off the balcony.

She was sobbing freely and didn't care when the men that had taken over guarding the ship burst in.

"Miss Lamont please stop!" One yelled grabbing her arms.

"GET OUT!" She growled throwing a bottle at them.

Jack stepped on the ship just in time to see three of his brave men running out of his room followed by a well aimed rum bottle.

"No...not the rum!" Jack ran into his room and found Lily tossing his bottles over the side of the ship

"LILY STOP!" He roared.

Lily turned around and faced him with the most evil glare he had ever seen.

He saw she was crying, and he tryed to feel pity despite the bottle threatening to fall from her grasp.

"Stop?" She said barely above a whisper

"STOP?" she shouted making him jump.

"Why should I stop Jack? Give me a reason"

"Because thats RUM in case you hadn't realized, I can't live without it!" He said raising his voice.

"FINE! take your rum but I'm sure you can live without ME!" She growled tears flowing more viciously from her eyes.

She walked past him trying to seem calm.

She walked to the door but as soon as she got there she heard Jack's boots on the hard-wood floor as he turned.

A sob defiantly escaped her throat.

She clamped her hand over mouth and shut her eyes, unable to move.
She hadn't even heard him move, but before she knew it Jack had his arms around her.

She ripped away from him.
"No!" she screamed.

Jack took a step back, shocked at her reaction.

They had plenty of fights, but she never pushed him away.

To hide his sadness and dissapointment, Jack yelled out in anger,
"LEAVE THEN!"

Lily just slapped his face and ran from the room.

She ran until she had no where to run.

She stood against the wall of an alley, trying to catch her breath.

' He doesn't own me!' she thought furiously to her self.

She was free, that was all she needed. She hadnt planned on falling in love!

All love does is tie you down!

As soon as Lily had left , Jack sat on the bed and started thinking about what had just happened.
Had he lost her forever?

This love thing was a whole new concept, normally he would be glad to be rid of a woman after this length of time.

He sighed and rested his face in his hands as his thoughts whirled around in his head.

Some minutes later Jack rose from the bed and grabbed his coat as he exited the cabin.

When he found Lily, she was sitting outside an alley , looking scared and cold.

"Ludivine." She looked up stunned at the stern way he said her name.

She stood and walked toward him.

"Yes Captain Sparrow?" she answered smartly.

"Don't play with me Lily, I came out here to explain myself but if you dont get that stick out of yer arse you can just sleep here"

"Why would you care what I do? Im just another woman to warm yer bed!" Lily accused.

"Lily, you know full and well it's more then that. How many times do I have to confess my love to you before you understand?" Jack argued.

"Jack you dont love me! You don't know what love is!" She yelled.

Jack grabbed her arms and stared into her eyes.

"Ye give me a feeling Ludivine, and I've never felt this before but you listen to me when I tell you I love you, because if this is in fact love, I dont want it to end"

She felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Aye Captain." She let a weak smile cover her face as she grabbed the sides of his shirt and pulled herself up to his lips placing a soft kiss on them.

She pulled away and rested her forhead on his.

"I love you." she whispered sinking slowly into his eyes

"I love you too." He said with more compassion she had ever heard him express openly.

She pressed her lips to his again, he wrapped his arms around her waist and she put her hands on the side of neck under his ears.

"Lets go." He whispered against her lips.

They walked silently holding hands as if at any moment the other would disappear.

When they got back to the cabin Jack picked Lily up and layed her on the bed, before crawling on , to kneel over her.

"No woman will ever take your place." he said stroking her hair.

"Or ship?" she asked knowing that he loved the Pearl more than anything

"No, you bring freedom to my heart, no ship can do that." Lily saw him smile in the dim candelight and wrapped her arms around his neck to bring him onto another passionate kiss.

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