Well I couldn't wait for 5 reviews so i suppose 3 will do.

here's the next chap...


Last time: "Jack, He's my brother..."

"HE'S YER WHAT?" Jack exploded.
Lily shrank away into Will.

Jack was almost suprised at this, normally Lily would get in his face, but for some reason she had been more withdrawn and moody lately.

"I'm sorry..." She whispered looking him straight in the eyes , her own eyes filled with what could only be defined as fear.

It tore Jack up inside.
"Lily, I didnt mean to...I'm sorry dove." Jack notice fresh tears forming on her cheeks as he held out his own arms as an open invitation.

Lily accepted and sobbed into his shoulder.
"I'm sorry I didn't tell you, I didn't know it was important." She was trying to make excuses

"Love, I'm not mad, I was just shocked, shhh calm down, come here and settle down a bit." He pulled her towards a bed and layed down with her.

Will and Elizabeth were amazed at Jack's gentleness.

Especially Elizabeth who hadn't heard the tale of his unconditional love for Lily.

Will gently ushered Elizabeth out of the room.
After a few moments , Jack appeared in the hallway.

"I'd like to hear about this William."

Will, Elizabeth, And Jack sat in the parlor as Will told Jack the story.

"Lily's real name is Ludivine Lamont, as you may know.

We have different fathers, but I insisted on keeping my father's last name.

Both of our father's were pirates so we never really saw them.

We always felt like true brother and sister, not just half, but I guess one day her pirate half got the better of her and she could take it no more.

She left in the middle of the night.

She sent letters often, but never saw us." Will said

Elizabeth added her addition of the tale

"Lily was always a close friend of mine, and so when Lily and Will had a fight a few years ago we kept writting.I informed her of our marraige and our address just in case she needed to find us.
She never really made up with Will, which was hard because I always felt like she was my little sister too."

Jack just nodded a worried expression on his face.

All of a sudden he was afraid Lily would stay here.

With Will and Elizabeth.

Maybe she realized she loved them more.

Elizabeth interupted his thoughts by standing up and declaring that she was going to check on Lily

When she walked in Lily was sitting up in bed holding her head in her hands."Lily?" Elizabeth asked "Are you ok sweetheart?"

Lily looked up and Elizabeth noted her peculiarly pale complexion.

She opened her mouth to speak but suddenly stood up and rushed to the balcony.
Elizabeth stroked her back as she emptied her stomach over the railing.
"Im sorry Liz." Lily said as she leaned against a wall, exhausted, "I haven't felt well lately."

"It's fine , maybe we should take you to a doctor tomorow." Lily nodded and with Elizabeth's help made her way back to bed.

She sat on the edge of the bed while Elizabeth found her a nightgown and helped her change.

Lily then layed down and fell into a deep slumber.

When Elizabeth returned Jack eagerly asked how Lily was.

"She isnt well, I'm calling the doctor tomorow." She replied

Jack seemed very unnerved by this unpleasent news.
"What's wrong?" He asked anxiously

"She just might be really worked up from everything, but she was sick just now and doesn't look well either. She's sleeping now" She answered Jack nodded and settled back in his chair.

Elizabeth and Will exchanged looks at how Jack had changed from the presence of Lily.

oh no! what's wrong with Lily. only one person knows..me! muahaha, if u want the rest review!